VN Ren'Py Abandoned The God of Yuri School [Ch1 v0.3.1] [Wer0]

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DKoW

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If there is one thing I love more than a Porn game, its a porn game that has a story I'm far more interested in reading than any porn elements.

I was actually thinking about if a new update had been released and whether or not I had missed it.


Keep up the great work and bring more of this story telling goodness soon.
 
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This MC... looks like you stuck a kid's head on an adult body. They're so mismatched. You could stick his head on a 12 year old's body and it would fit.
 
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Wildbill5150

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Just curious will any ntr/swinging/sharing be player choice? (Avoidable) or will it be forced?

Thank you for your time
 
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Seinks

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While we can only hear, I bet this girl can see what is happening behind the camera since she is making this face. XD
(Nice job, by the way)
PS.: After the third death I'm surprised he still didn't lock the door to the roof.... I mean, that place is dangerous!!!! XD
 
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Ex78

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For a game that keeps talking about how your choices matter there are few choices in it. The first time in the world you can do nothing to prevent the thing from happening ok fine but then you guilt trip the Player for it. If you want to make something deep and have the choices the player makes mean something how about giving them choice to make? Like the first time through he can spend all his time with the one girl that that thing happened to or the other girl if he chooses girl one girl 2 has the thing happen to her instead. Then instead of changing the it up the next time you keep the world the same everything the same and tell the MC that they made the world that way now he must get to BLAH day with all the named girls Alive Happy and Well.

Right now this is such a waste but not bad enough for me to do a review on it.
 
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Ex78 said:
For a game that keeps talking about how your choices matter there are few choices in it. The first time in the world you can do nothing to prevent the thing from happening ok fine but then you guilt trip the Player for it. If you want to make something deep and have the choices the player makes mean something how about giving them choice to make? Like the first time through he can spend all his time with the one girl that that thing happened to or the other girl if he chooses girl one girl 2 has the thing happen to her instead. Then instead of changing the it up the next time you keep the world the same everything the same and tell the MC that they made the world that way now he must get to BLAH day with all the named girls Alive Happy and Well.

Right now this is such a waste but not bad enough for me to do a review on it.
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6 Pages of comments and AT LEAST somebody that noticed it... Thank you so much!

Yeah, after the last choice and like 30 min of "reading", I have forget that there was choices and was thinking "this is a kinetic"... So I even have closed the game before it's actual end... "Each his own tastes" but maybe make it more obvious in description or dev' notes...
 
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deepglugs

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Things I like:
  • Funny from the start
  • Good animations
  • Wow, I thought the game really crashed there. Good one!
  • Really cool concept with some real morals to learn
Things that could be improved:
  • Action effects were sometimes confusing:
    • The cloud effect above Sakura in the first encounter scene. Not sure if it meant her mind exploded or she got confused (cloudy?)
    • The "Pow" effect when Sakura was presumably knocked out of the way was a bit big. I'd probably make it a bit smaller so it's easy to grasp that she's being carelessly knocked to the side.
  • Video quality seemed a bit low, but I might have downloaded the compressed version?
  • Miss Maia cunnilingus scene
    • How does her panties get moved to the side under her nylons?
    • I'd have ripped those nylons or removed them to get a better view/access.
  • Spying animation/video with the two girls in the gym have a dialog box active for no reason
 
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faceface2

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Jun 21, 2018
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Ex78 said:
For a game that keeps talking about how your choices matter there are few choices in it. The first time in the world you can do nothing to prevent the thing from happening ok fine but then you guilt trip the Player for it. If you want to make something deep and have the choices the player makes mean something how about giving them choice to make? Like the first time through he can spend all his time with the one girl that that thing happened to or the other girl if he chooses girl one girl 2 has the thing happen to her instead. Then instead of changing the it up the next time you keep the world the same everything the same and tell the MC that they made the world that way now he must get to BLAH day with all the named girls Alive Happy and Well.

Right now this is such a waste but not bad enough for me to do a review on it.
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this is certainly a big part of me giving the game a non-optimistic review score. both the description and in-game dialog make the game SOUND like there is going to be alot of choice (or atleast have sandbox portions like LiL or overnightsensie) but an hour in and im still reading about the MC being boarder line on the spectrum with how he handles things.
 
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