MaskOfMirth

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I may not have the duplicate, but original is still in my pocket and I can use it whenever.
You're awful entitled, aren't you? It's real simple. It's not something LM wants to have in the game, so it's not in the game. Stop whining about it.
 

archdude

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You're awful entitled, aren't you? It's real simple. It's not something LM wants to have in the game, so it's not in the game. Stop whining about it.
No it's you, who's awfully entitled, i'm proposing solution that wouldn't break narrative while going with author intentions, while you came here to play stolen game, and tell people what to do.
 

SexyLump

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Completed my walkthrough, here are my thoughts.
  1. Horizontal expansion would be great.

    Its my biggest gripe so far. Game now requires quite a long time to complete, and that indirectly affects how gameplay feels more linear and mundane. You have to repeat your chores again and again, and scenes are often exactly the same. That means game would benefit very much from some horizontal scaling, so that new game doesn't feel as tiring. Horizontal scaling means adding events that don't advance main route but make earlier stages more varied. But I don't think that just a few more one time scenes would cut it, no. No matter how many new feminizing lessons are there, for example, player would quickly get throught all of them, and feminizing classes would feel like a chore once again.

    So in my opinion horizontal scaling could be made best in a form of sidestories that don't affect the main route, but can be advanced independently. For example that guy, whose underwear you need to obtain at Cauldron (forget his name, if he even had one), why does he disapper from the story after that? Advance his sidestory to make cauldron shifts interesting, instead of just random groping events that I already saw million times. Add few other regular customers to Cauldron that appear at random, and you can advance your interactions with them to some extend. I even have few suggestions: shy guy that thinks that you're a girl, and you can spoon/kiss with him with increasing lewdness each time, up until he finds out your little secret and then he just doesn't know what to do and averts his eyes from you each time you glance at him. Or a pervert that instantly knows that you're crossdressing, and will harass you during your shifts. If you'd add such characters, your Cauldron shifts would have nice variability and progression to them, while remaining fairly random. Advance story line of that professor, that you can give handjob at cauldron 2nd floor while not on shift. Advance saturday Susan/friend cucking girltalk, those were very hot, but they ended very fast and now I only have a random "running girl with big tits" or "couple has sex on bench" fillers that are boring and I already saw them multiple times. Sunday sperm donation events are already implementing separate sidestory, so I'm happy with that so far. I think you get my point, essentially every timeslot can be saturated with non critical sidestories that would make those tasks feel interesting instead of mundane.

  2. Some scenes don't make sense when repeated. Best example would be friday date event where you film your sissy video message to Oliver that you give up your rights on your GF. Or scene with french exchange professor blowjob, I think I saw more of those, but I don't remember atm. It would be great if you'd make them one time event, and write some other scenes to fill the holes.

  3. Please make some actually male/female interactions on cuck route, even if its femdom ffs... I mean if I check a mirror, I see that protagonist mostly heterosexual, but all the interactions that he has and his dreams and fantasies include other dudes and dicks, that doesn't check out. Techincally you can be a straight sissy, and sleep only with girls, but here we don't have much of that at all. Katie love route looks promising in that regard, but there is nothing there yet.

  4. Sexual orientation stats look very strange. I think I read someone mentioning this before. Transition from 6 heterosexuality/4 homosexuality to 6 bisexuality look especially strange. I see what you tried to do here something akin to Kinsley scale ( ) for sexual orientation. But your descriptions are extremely confusing... "Your Heterosexuality score is 8. Your Homosexuality score is 2. Your combined sexuality score is 6. You're kind of straight. Heteroflexible might be the word...." and then "Your Heterosexuality score is 6.Your Homosexuality score is 4. Your combined sexuality score is 2. Your combined sexuality score is 2. You're nearly there. You find yourself more attracted to acting like a submissive girl in sexual situations than as a traditional man. You're favorite part of the human body is a musky, precum-dripping cock. You like the taste of cum - it makes your cock hard. A little push, and you'll be ready to admit the truth." W8 wut? That doesn't sound like "mostly hetero" at all, that sounds like full homo. And then suddenly "Your Bisexuality score is 6. With a score of 6, you're getting more comfortable with your new sexual identity..."
    First your "combined score" is your hetero minus homo and then when it shold be 0 it becomes 6 instead? And why 6, but not 5, like half of their sum? Why do you need both meters at the start if their sum is strictly 10 and you can deduce second one directly from first, because their sum is constant and your sexuality has only 1 degree of freedom? I don't get your sexual math at all, sorry. And when you had your "homosexual" score before and its substituted with "bisexual" later on, it looks like you actually became less homosexual than before, very confusing.

    IMO just introduce single meter "sexuality" or w/e on your left UI bar, that would range from 0-10, gradually changing color from blue (0) to purple (10), and put the exact description including words "heterosexual" (around 0), "homosexual" (around 10) or "bisexual" (around 5) in your mirror check event.
 
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archdude

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Employee Name: Katerina 'Katie' Lebedev
Eh, russian surname would be Lebedeva for female, even if it's Lebedev for male, that's how surnames are declined.
 

Lobsterman9999

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No it's you, who's awfully entitled, i'm proposing solution that wouldn't break narrative while going with author intentions, while you came here to play stolen game, and tell people what to do.
No one is being particularly entitled. And we're not here, on a piracy website, going to shame people for pirating a game. We're all just respectfully enjoying an arguably good quality erotic adventure game, and we all just want to see it be as good as possible.

Archdude, I'll consider your solution, but it's low in my list of priorities.

Completed my walkthrough, here are my thoughts.
  1. Horizontal expansion would be great.



  2. Some scenes don't make sense when repeated. Best example would be friday date event where you film your sissy video message to Oliver that you give up your rights on your GF. Or scene with french exchange professor blowjob, I think I saw more of those, but I don't remember atm. It would be great if you'd make them one time event, and write some other scenes to fill the holes.

  3. Please make some actually male/female interactions on cuck route, even if its femdom ffs... I mean if I check a mirror, I see that protagonist mostly heterosexual, but all the interactions that he has and his dreams and fantasies include other dudes and dicks, that doesn't check out. Techincally you can be a straight sissy, and sleep only with girls, but here we don't have much of that at all. Katie love route looks promising in that regard, but there is nothing there yet.

  4. Sexual orientation stats look very strange.

    IMO just introduce single meter "sexuality" or w/e on your left UI bar, that would range from 0-10, gradually changing color from blue (0) to purple (10), and put the exact description including words "heterosexual" (around 0), "homosexual" (around 10) or "bisexual" (around 5) in your mirror check event.
1. Yes, horizontal expansion is CRITICAL! More scenes, more little sub plots, more variation, and so on! I wholeheartedly agree. The only barrier is time, really. Writing in scenes, adding images, coding them - they can take 30 seconds to read, but they can be 30 minutes of work for a single passage. That adds up. I'm 100% with you and I want the game to feel as thick and deep as it is long, but that will happen over multiple updates.

2. Agreed. I can add variants to those scenes so that they read a bit differently when viewed again (not a lot of work), or add new scenes so they're not repeated (much more work). It's planned, but not a high priority.

3. When you say 'male / female' interactions on the cuck route, you mean interactions between the MC and a cis woman that isn't Susan? Katie will certainly fit the bill. I'm also open to having female clients snap your bracelet at the Cauldron. In my view, the MC eventually becomes more-or-less female in appearance and function, so when the MC is with a guy, it IS a male-female interaction :p

4. Yeah, still playing with the sexuality thing. Your heterosexuality drops and your homosexuality rises until they meet and merge, making you just plain bisexual. Then your bisexuality's increase reflects your confidence, courage, and acceptance of your new sexuality and sexual role. I know it's not perfect yet. I'm not trying to align it with the Kinsey Scale.



the two answers to Susan's question are gray
Vlad912 I'm going to need more information. From your short post, I think you might have used an old save in v0.3. I would recommend making a fresh save and seeing if that helps.
 
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Vlad912

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No one is being particularly entitled. And we're not here, on a piracy website, going to shame people for pirating a game. We're all just respectfully enjoying an arguably good quality erotic adventure game, and we all just want to see it be as good as possible.

Archdude, I'll consider your solution, but it's low in my list of priorities.



1. Yes, horizontal expansion is CRITICAL! More scenes, more little sub plots, more variation, and so on! I wholeheartedly agree. The only barrier is time, really. Writing in scenes, adding images, coding them - they can take 30 seconds to read, but they can be 30 minutes of work for a single passage. That adds up. I'm 100% with you and I want the game to feel as thick and deep as it is long, but that will happen over multiple updates.

2. Agreed. I can add variants to those scenes so that they read a bit differently when viewed again (not a lot of work), or add new scenes so they're not repeated (much more work). It's planned, but not a high priority.

3. When you say 'male / female' interactions on the cuck route, you mean interactions between the MC and a cis woman that isn't Susan? Katie will certainly fit the bill. I'm also open to having female clients snap your bracelet at the Cauldron. In my view, the MC eventually becomes more-or-less female in appearance and function, so when the MC is with a guy, it IS a male-female interaction :p

4. Yeah, still playing with the sexuality thing. Your heterosexuality drops and your homosexuality rises until they meet and merge, making you just plain bisexual. Then your bisexuality's increase reflects your confidence, courage, and acceptance of your new sexuality and sexual role. I know it's not perfect yet. I'm not trying to align it with the Kinsey Scale.





Vlad912 I'm going to need more information. From your short post, I think you might have used an old save in v0.3. I would recommend making a fresh save and seeing if that helps.
Yes, old, thanks
 

SexyLump

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When you say 'male / female' interactions on the cuck route, you mean interactions between the MC and a cis woman that isn't Susan? Katie will certainly fit the bill. I'm also open to having female clients snap your bracelet at the Cauldron. In my view, the MC eventually becomes more-or-less female in appearance and function, so when the MC is with a guy, it IS a male-female interaction
You know, I would even take some sex stuff with Susan only, but once you're on cuck route, she basically stops interacting with you as a lover, and sees you more like a friend (?). At least make MC eat her out, or whatever, friday date where she just recounts her BBC escapades and then hugs you and leaves isn't very hot imo.
 

Lobsterman9999

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Just played 0.3 and it was very well done! I wish there was more to do after getting shipped off and captured like more training scenarios and getting fully broken in as a slave but that was my only gripe and loved everything else. Also the whole meeting the parents was well written did not expect so many options!
Thanks, mcdobrad ! For now, it's quite linear and leads to one ending. Your idea of there being two endings from one point - one where you escape and one where you get broken down and turned into a mindless sex slave for the mob... well, that could be really hot. I'll add it to the to-do list! :)

Employee Name: Katerina 'Katie' Lebedev
Eh, russian surname would be Lebedeva for female, even if it's Lebedev for male, that's how surnames are declined.
Cool, didn't know that. The last name is a bit of a wink at Girl Life - where the default last name is Lebedev. If you or other Russian scholars are sure that it should be Lebedeva for a girl, I'll revise accordingly.

You know, I would even take some sex stuff with Susan only, but once you're on cuck route, she basically stops interacting with you as a lover, and sees you more like a friend (?). At least make MC eat her out, or whatever, friday date where she just recounts her BBC escapades and then hugs you and leaves isn't very hot imo.
I kind of agree with you. The scene can be hotter and I can make it hotter. You should still be getting intimate, in certain ways, with Susan.

However, she's realized you're not her ideal lover and you've accepted that - in fact, you've given her express permission to pursue sexual gratification elsewhere. Your new sexual role is much more servile - she'll be getting much of her loving elsewhere, from a particular kind of man that looks and acts nothing like you. ;)
 

SexyLump

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I kind of agree with you. The scene can be hotter and I can make it hotter. You should still be getting intimate, in certain ways, with Susan.

However, she's realized you're not her ideal lover and you've accepted that - in fact, you've given her express permission to pursue sexual gratification elsewhere. Your new sexual role is much more servile - she'll be getting much of her loving elsewhere, from a particular kind of man that looks and acts nothing like you. ;)
Yeah, I'm glad you think so. Contrary to stereotypes set up with porn, cuckolding doesn't necessarily entails that woman stops sleeping with cuck, its more like open relationships. In porn its always paired with humiliation, chastity, sph, cumkissing etc., I admit, those are valid fetishes and could be hot, but in no way cuckolding should require them as addition.
 

Lobsterman9999

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Yeah, I'm glad you think so. Contrary to stereotypes set up with porn, cuckolding doesn't necessarily entails that woman stops sleeping with cuck, its more like open relationships. In porn its always paired with humiliation, chastity, sph, cumkissing etc., I admit, those are valid fetishes and could be hot, but in no way cuckolding should require them as addition.
I agree. Cuckolding relationships can be healthy and fulfilling, and very similar to polyamory.

Obviously, the relationship with Susan isn't exactly that. It's more on the chastity and cumkissing spectrum of things.
 

meatloaf1123

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you could even dedicate an update here and there just for the horizontal scalling, every update does not need to progress the main storyline (just don't abuse it lol)

another thing is the branching choices, just don't over burden yourself with too much within a short period of time, choices do add up and in future updates they will be a pain in the a** to maintain
 

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On one hand, I kinda like where all of this is going.

On the other, if you do plan on making this a multi-route thing, why not simply make a 'fast-start' after the first playthrough, where you get to start the game from certain key-choices?

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One other thing. Did you consider maybe adding the option of playing a femboy, but with the added benefit of him actually having a usable cock that he gets to use on Katie, Susan, etc. (Which, imo, would make the chastity section that much more impactful, since it effectively strips MC from a form of release, forcing him(Her?) to rely more on anal penetration/prostate stimulation, eventually leading him to enjoy both in equal amounts?

Dunno, just throwing ideas out there. I kinda like dominant femboys, so it's a fun thought to explore. None of this has to be taken seriously, of course! :D

That said, it just seems like a much easier way to explain his attraction towards men. (Especially since the Feminization classes aren't exactly my thing, and am not sure if they'd be nearly as effective as the game portrays them to be! :'D Like games are real life, right?)
 

SexyLump

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One other thing. Did you consider maybe adding the option of playing a femboy, but with the added benefit of him actually having a usable cock that he gets to use on Katie, Susan, etc. (Which, imo, would make the chastity section that much more impactful, since it effectively strips MC from a form of release, forcing him(Her?) to rely more on anal penetration/prostate stimulation, eventually leading him to enjoy both in equal amounts?
Preach! I'm in femboy camp too, would hate to see MC grow DD melons :cry: Doing dom stuff from time to time would be great too, even though I'm more into sub, but variety can't hurt.
 
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Zephea

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Great game! Just played through, and was honestly a lot of fun. Quite a few surprises, a little intrigue..., sexy as heck and even though it has the (bad word alert) 'grind' of most every game - you managed to give it enough variety that you cannot really just 'click though it'. Bravo!
Looking forward to the next release and you may have found another donor. Thank you.
 
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