I hope Angelina path is different of the path she took on the 2nd chance. there is a scene in that game, although is a very hot scene, i don't like it, because she is the main love interest of the main character of this game.
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Yes, if I at that point had known that I would write a background story for Angelina and her stepfather then I would never have written that scene in 2nd chance (Season 2). I understand that it can make people concerned. Perhaps someone in THS will try to corrupt her, but she will not have sex with any other male character than MC in this story.
Don´t get me wrong, the scene is very hot. Personally I just don't like to share main character love interests.
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Ok, really like this one. Have not read 2nd Chance.
The bad, the renders are not the greatest quality but certainly far from the worst I have seen (and do improve over the story to be fair). I do think there are far too many reused renders for scenes though. Animations, honestly are terrible, utterly terrible. I'll say it again, if can't do them properly (and I know what a PITA and time-sink they are) you're just better not having them at all. But that's my own perspective. Also refer back to reused renders again here. More effort to tell the story/show what is happening could be made (in line with this, a pet peeve of mine is dialogue/descriptions not matching what is seen).
The good, the story is great, content is up my alley for sure. Dialogue actually seems to be written by an adult and not a 14yo virgin. Sex dialogue also kept to a minimum which is also a preference for me (though I don't play/read VN's for the lewds). Sheets on beds! Gain huge marks for this alone, so many just don't bother and it irks the fuck out of me. Character models are nice, script is pretty good and the relations all happen in a reasonably organic way which is also another major plus point. Another major plus is the internal monologuing. I think you have it just right, too many VN's have far too much.
Third person narrative? Didn't bother me personally. Is it unusual in a VN? For sure but it's not a deal-breaker or jarring. I wonder if this comes from 2nd Chance which was test based? There are some slight issues with plot/what happens/MC's actions etc (like I think moving Jenny into the house was a little out there) but that is more expecting something from a character we are playing, but ultimately, we are not that person, so what 'we' would do/say in a given situation is different. I do think some things could have been expanded on, for example, when we find out THS are monitoring Jenny's phone...why did we not question if they are doing the same with us? Little things like that I would do/wonder/ask but our MC doesn't...
Regardless, enjoy this and looking forward to seeing where it goes.
The bad, the renders are not the greatest quality but certainly far from the worst I have seen (and do improve over the story to be fair). I do think there are far too many reused renders for scenes though. Animations, honestly are terrible, utterly terrible. I'll say it again, if can't do them properly (and I know what a PITA and time-sink they are) you're just better not having them at all. But that's my own perspective. Also refer back to reused renders again here. More effort to tell the story/show what is happening could be made (in line with this, a pet peeve of mine is dialogue/descriptions not matching what is seen).
The good, the story is great, content is up my alley for sure. Dialogue actually seems to be written by an adult and not a 14yo virgin. Sex dialogue also kept to a minimum which is also a preference for me (though I don't play/read VN's for the lewds). Sheets on beds! Gain huge marks for this alone, so many just don't bother and it irks the fuck out of me. Character models are nice, script is pretty good and the relations all happen in a reasonably organic way which is also another major plus point. Another major plus is the internal monologuing. I think you have it just right, too many VN's have far too much.
Third person narrative? Didn't bother me personally. Is it unusual in a VN? For sure but it's not a deal-breaker or jarring. I wonder if this comes from 2nd Chance which was test based? There are some slight issues with plot/what happens/MC's actions etc (like I think moving Jenny into the house was a little out there) but that is more expecting something from a character we are playing, but ultimately, we are not that person, so what 'we' would do/say in a given situation is different. I do think some things could have been expanded on, for example, when we find out THS are monitoring Jenny's phone...why did we not question if they are doing the same with us? Little things like that I would do/wonder/ask but our MC doesn't...
Regardless, enjoy this and looking forward to seeing where it goes.
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bro this is the main thread not the review section
as for the not not questioning the phone bit im pretty sure that the MC is kinda aware off such things because he already knows all members are monitored for safety of THS and/or its members which is explained early on if i remember correctly
I love it when people give feedback to the story/game. Much more interesting than anything else people discuss in this thread.
Yes, there's too much reuse of renders and it's done on purpose. I don't want it to take too long between each update we release and I want the story to progress. Therefore we reuse some of the renders when it's possible. The plan is to do more work on renders and animations when the story is finished. We will go through the entire game and replace/insert new renders where we see that it's needed. The same goes for animations. We may even hire some more professional help for this if we can afford it.
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I gathered that would be the reason and understand. Regardles, still a great story I'm enjoying.
Guys Struggling to find the path with the receptionist, saw some images in the galary but not sure what to do
You need to ruin your relationship with Jenny. If Jenny doesn't come with you to Provo then you will have time to flirt with the receptionist.
I'm not very far into the game but I'm already seeing inconsistencies regarding choices made. The wife asks the MC not to have sex with Jenny due to the perception of age, I choose to honor the wife's concerns and tell her I won't sleep with the girl, I have chosen every option not to do anything with Jenny sexually but then I'm talking to the daughter and answering questions as if I've been having sex with Jenny. It would be one thing if the story states that the daughter is assuming the MC is having sex with Jenny and the MC is going along with the assumption for some reason but that is never stated. So it appears regardless of the choice, the MC is banging the maid even though you're not.
Also, why is there the ambiguity regarding the age of Jenny, is she underage? If she is then that needs to be established prior to any sexual activity taking place, if she's not then that needs to be addressed straight away so there isn't any doubt. I am choosing not to engage in activity with her because I think she's going to end up being underage. I know "it's just a game, who cares" is the likely response but it matters to me in my play-through. So I was fine going along with the wife wanting the MC not to have sex with Jenny but I feel like the game is just assuming we are having sex anyway.
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Okay further along in the game now and I guess it doesn't matter what you promised your wife or how you feel, you're having sex with Jenny whether you want to or not. Oh well.
Also, why is there the ambiguity regarding the age of Jenny, is she underage? If she is then that needs to be established prior to any sexual activity taking place, if she's not then that needs to be addressed straight away so there isn't any doubt. I am choosing not to engage in activity with her because I think she's going to end up being underage. I know "it's just a game, who cares" is the likely response but it matters to me in my play-through. So I was fine going along with the wife wanting the MC not to have sex with Jenny but I feel like the game is just assuming we are having sex anyway.
*Additional*
Okay further along in the game now and I guess it doesn't matter what you promised your wife or how you feel, you're having sex with Jenny whether you want to or not. Oh well.
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Thanks to the Dev for this game as I'm really liking the story line, along with the rest of course.
The only parts I disliked is when early on the MC sprays his load all over his wife's body.
Been married over 50 years and have never done a cum dump outside of any holes, whenever one was available, at least
Just too unrealistic even for a sex game, sorry.
Same with MC & other girls...
Once the MC is banging some pussy the only reason to pull out would be to change positions or switch to anal.
Sometimes MC has choice to cum inside, (preferred), and sometimes just sprays or no choice.
Best if player ALWAYS has a choice IMO.
Understand the difference when MC & virgin girls are only doing oral or hj's.
The only parts I disliked is when early on the MC sprays his load all over his wife's body.
Been married over 50 years and have never done a cum dump outside of any holes, whenever one was available, at least
Just too unrealistic even for a sex game, sorry.
Same with MC & other girls...
Once the MC is banging some pussy the only reason to pull out would be to change positions or switch to anal.
Sometimes MC has choice to cum inside, (preferred), and sometimes just sprays or no choice.
Best if player ALWAYS has a choice IMO.
Understand the difference when MC & virgin girls are only doing oral or hj's.
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Yes, there will be some elements that's a little bit more "porn" than what's normal in the average bedroom with man and wife. I try to show that they have a kinky sexlife and that MC is the dominant in the relationship. I also want some variations in the sex scenes. I try to create a story that you can allow yourself to believe in, but there will of course be elements that's a little unrealistic.
I'm excited for the next update! Been counting down since I read what happens at the end of day 37. Can't get here soon enough
Hopefully it will be available for Patreons soon and on F95 before the end of the year.
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Btw, curious....don't recall seeing the scene in your right hand side of your sig...is that from this? Did I miss it for some reason or am I just being forgetful?
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An excerpt from the developer notes:
"When it comes to NTR, I'm not trying to please those who hate it or those who love it. The game is not very NTR-heavy, but there's a few elements in this big game. Early in the story Angelina is exploring her sexuality with another girl, one of MC's love interests has a girlfriend and late in the story there will even be the possibility for a threesome with another man. This scene however is easily avoidable and actually very hard to find."
Is this still in the plans (threesome with another man)? Would it be with the stepdaughter (I hope so)?
You read the developer notes, right? So avoid calling me names, I'm just asking, and I think that's still allowed, right?
"When it comes to NTR, I'm not trying to please those who hate it or those who love it. The game is not very NTR-heavy, but there's a few elements in this big game. Early in the story Angelina is exploring her sexuality with another girl, one of MC's love interests has a girlfriend and late in the story there will even be the possibility for a threesome with another man. This scene however is easily avoidable and actually very hard to find."
Is this still in the plans (threesome with another man)? Would it be with the stepdaughter (I hope so)?
You read the developer notes, right? So avoid calling me names, I'm just asking, and I think that's still allowed, right?