VN Ren'Py The Lost Chapters [v0.6 Public] [Asura Interactive]

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JohnF95zone

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So, I get around the time to play the (latest release) game for the first time (for at most 6 hours), and I did not find the game to be confusing or myself lost at all :ROFLMAO:. Probably the issues with some players are to be able to keep track of all the so many characters of the game (yes there are a lot of characters) and the heavy 'original' myth fantasy lore blend-in with (sorta futuristic) modern life.

I guess you (I mean I, myself) have to play the game yourself to know what it is all about, and cannot possibly rely on any third-party opinion:p.

I am not sure how much content I have seen or played, if not mistaken up to day 4 maybe (just one day after MC 'mom' and 'sister' slept at her apartment), and although I don't know everything (the whole story) but at least I can understand, guess, link the stuff that were already told (although not in the chronological order).

I just love Eve:love:, the MC. The sex scenes are HOT too although I usually don't like the stereotypical lesbian porn but the lesbian scenes in the game are really good (most if not all, some are too simple and could be longer I guess:unsure:).

The narrative is slowly but progressively unfold, at least for the player (it can be faster by playing multiple paths simultaneously), but as far as the MC is concerned, she is mostly unaware. Her main concern is making money as an IT computer security lecturer at the prestigous Mara Institute.

Overall, great game(y):love:. Cheers.
 

gregers

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The scenes involving the MC are mostly fine, the flashbacks (or dream sequences or whatever) are just boredom on toast. Come watch some character you don't know or care about get raped by some other character you don't know or care about, then—in one of the dumbest tropes on the Internet—magically fall in love with their rapist. Oh no, now both those idiots are dead, what a tragedy! Oh well.
 
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Agni2013

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So, I get around the time to play the (latest release) game for the first time (for at most 6 hours), and I did not find the game to be confusing or myself lost at all :ROFLMAO:. Probably the issues with some players are to be able to keep track of all the so many characters of the game (yes there are a lot of characters) and the heavy 'original' myth fantasy lore blend-in with (sorta futuristic) modern life.

I guess you (I mean I, myself) have to play the game yourself to know what it is all about, and cannot possibly rely on any third-party opinion:p.

I am not sure how much content I have seen or played, if not mistaken up to day 4 maybe (just one day after MC 'mom' and 'sister' slept at her apartment), and although I don't know everything (the whole story) but at least I can understand, guess, link the stuff that were already told (although not in the chronological order).

I just love Eve:love:, the MC. The sex scenes are HOT too although I usually don't like the stereotypical lesbian porn but the lesbian scenes in the game are really good (most if not all, some are too simple and could be longer I guess:unsure:).

The narrative is slowly but progressively unfold, at least for the player (it can be faster by playing multiple paths simultaneously), but as far as the MC is concerned, she is mostly unaware. Her main concern is making money as an IT computer security lecturer at the prestigous Mara Institute.

Overall, great game(y):love:. Cheers.
Thank you for the kind words. Regarding the length of the sex scenes, it's mostly because my lack of hardware. I need to keep a balance between story scenes and sex scenes, and there are only so many renders my poor laptop can pump out in two months.
I hope you will continue to enjoy what I have store for you next. :D
The scenes involving the MC are mostly fine, the flashbacks (or dream sequences or whatever) are just boredom on toast. Come watch some character you don't know or care about get raped by some other character you don't know or care about, then—in one of the dumbest tropes on the Internet—magically fall in love with their rapist. Oh no, now both those idiots are dead, what a tragedy! Oh well.
Thank you for the comment. This is my first time publishing my writing for the world to see. and I believe I still have a lot to improve. I hope the next updates would be more to your liking. I would very much appreciate if you continue to share thoughts and critiques here.

I would have been honestly surprised if you actually cared for those two. In an ideal world I would taken time to flesh out their relationship more, but I can spend only so much time on what are quinary characters with deadlines to keep.
 
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gregers

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Thank you for the comment. This is my first time publishing my writing for the world to see. and I believe I still have a lot to improve. I hope the next updates would be more to your liking. I would very much appreciate if you continue to share thoughts and critiques here.

I would have been honestly surprised if you actually cared for those two. In an ideal world I would taken time to flesh out their relationship more, but I can spend only so much time on what are quinary characters with deadlines to keep.
It's all good. Writing is hard and it takes guts to put it—and yourself—out there.

I would query why you would include such an extended sequence with characters that you yourself consider quinary. If I were the editor I'd suggest either cutting it down (or out entirely) or taking some time to consider why the player should care about that section and building on that. But it's your game and only you know where you want to take it, so do what makes sense to you.
 

Agni2013

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who is that muscle chic in game? she appear only short in the middle of the game or? i am in love with her.
...and here it is, the duality of man. I am very happy to hear that you like her. Unfortunately, she is unlikely to appear anytime soon.
 
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...and here it is, the duality of man. I am very happy to hear that you like her. Unfortunately, she is unlikely to appear anytime soon.

too bad. she is so hot. i cum on her while she fuck that spy. female warior. badass bitch.
 

Kukipett

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...and here it is, the duality of man. I am very happy to hear that you like her. Unfortunately, she is unlikely to appear anytime soon.
When the game switched to that fantasy universe, i was puzzled, i'm not a big fan of fantasy and i was not really happy about all this. But after a while it all felt like a crazy wet dream you experience sometimes, where nothing makes sense but you feel stangely good and when you finaly wake up, you try to remember all that shit and you notice that you have a rock hard dick. So you try to remember because you feel it was so exciting but it slips between you fingers like some sand and disapears unfortunately. That's what i felt about this general story who loved that little spy, i love her, her muscles her dick and her deep humanity and love.
 

null91

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I only finished this game because of the muscle dick girl. when I realized that she was only there for a short time, I lost my will. the story is boring. pale. empty. confused. what's worst is that you can't get attached to the characters because they are superficial. that at least there was sex between the two sisters, so I can at least praise that. my friend, my advice is to make a game with that muscle girl. futa trans protagonist. historical era. and believe me you will break records.
 

JohnF95zone

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I only finished this game because of the muscle dick girl. when I realized that she was only there for a short time, I lost my will. the story is boring. pale. empty. confused. what's worst is that you can't get attached to the characters because they are superficial. that at least there was sex between the two sisters, so I can at least praise that. my friend, my advice is to make a game with that muscle girl. futa trans protagonist. historical era. and believe me you will break records.
That would be a different game that serves as an extended standalone side story, or perhaps a series / trilogy origin backstory (sequel) of this game. The developer already mentioned that she/he wanted to tell more about them but ultimately has to cut it short due to many reasons, mainly time. I guess that is also highly dependent on the outcome of this game (which I believe is the passion project for the developer); and the fans and patrons demand (and support) for it (other game).

Personally, I am supportive of this idea (as long as it is not implemented right now) because the developer is very talented storyteller and graphic artists only limited (mostly) by hardware capability. For now, I would just love it if the developer focus on this game only. Cheers.

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When the game switched to that fantasy universe, i was puzzled, i'm not a big fan of fantasy and i was not really happy about all this. But after a while it all felt like a crazy wet dream you experience sometimes, where nothing makes sense but you feel stangely good and when you finaly wake up, you try to remember all that shit and you notice that you have a rock hard dick. So you try to remember because you feel it was so exciting but it slips between you fingers like some sand and disapears unfortunately. That's what i felt about this general story who loved that little spy, i love her, her muscles her dick and her deep humanity and love.
That dream like feeling is precisely what I have been going for. The main character herself is confused as to what is going on. Things will become clearer over time, I promise. :)

I only finished this game because of the muscle dick girl. when I realized that she was only there for a short time, I lost my will. the story is boring. pale. empty. confused. what's worst is that you can't get attached to the characters because they are superficial. that at least there was sex between the two sisters, so I can at least praise that. my friend, my advice is to make a game with that muscle girl. futa trans protagonist. historical era. and believe me you will break records.
Thank you, but maybe in another game. I can't just up and drop this project. :)

That would be a different game that serves as an extended standalone side story, or perhaps a series / trilogy origin backstory (sequel) of this game. The developer already mentioned that she/he wanted to tell more about them but ultimately has to cut it short due to many reasons, mainly time. I guess that is also highly dependent on the outcome of this game (which I believe is the passion project for the developer); and the fans and patrons demand (and support) for it (other game).

Personally, I am supportive of this idea (as long as it is not implemented right now) because the developer is very talented storyteller and graphic artists only limited (mostly) by hardware capability. For now, I would just love it if the developer focus on this game only. Cheers.

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Precisely. I can always delve into the hypotheticals of what could have been. This is a porn site, and the most popular trends seem to be a male protagonist fucking his mo- *ahem* landlady and female roommates after being away for a long time. If it's a female protagonist, she is an slut, and is meant to be fucked, raped and groped at every step. Nothing wrong with those per say, but I feel like I am a bit of a contrarian. I like reading stories, and writing them. I would like for even the filthiest smut I read, to have a nice story in them. So this is my attempt towards that.

Everyone, I know my writing is not the best in this site, English my third language. If you happen to come across any mistakes, I would be very thankful if you point it out. Cheers!
 

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Hey, wanted to say, I played the update before teh last (so not the lastest), but havent gotten around to leaving something here. But for the most I want to say its nice to see a potential MC who could be Dominate/Alpha. I mean that kabadon on Ashley was so dam hot. The way she put the fear into her just worked. Just that all the female MC games I see mostly here is them becoming submissive or letting people do what they want with them. Alpha females need some love too. so this game has potential for me. Also love the suspicion she has a passive lust aura/pheromones ability that makes people lust for her. Even if they have partners ^_~ Evident in Ashley/ember and her own family. May go far to reveal what she truly is ^_~

Also going to say, the Selene dream was the scene 2nd best scene in the game. While selene can easily been seen (mistaken?) as the villain and scheming character. Her dream you really nailed it. I dont think I've seen a dream in VN game here just as good. You really showed us what type of character she is by that alone and all in the randomness of a true dream. Her vunaubility, despair, and her resolve to move forward. All captured very nicely. While her design not really in my tastes. Understanding her character like that really boosted her in most my interesting characters. Also left her to deal with Ashley, cause I was curious to what she would do to her for our MC ^_~

Now the best scene... well. Lets just say how baddass that was when (asuming MC ?) pulled that spear out of her and threw it back killing her target. That was just so baddass it hurt, it could go into the Guinness book of baddass records. Hell if someone asked you to put something baddas on your resume, thats what you put. That was just something I had to say was something great.

Oh and lastly, I kinda like a bit voyeurism uninration and was curious on the tag when I first started. Aand well scene with Selene didnt disappoint. her reaction was gold. Definitely made her curious now.

Anyway, definitely going to wait on some more to play when more comes out. This is a good game with interesting story.
 
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JohnF95zone

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because it can't be play, even im using joyplay apps it still not working.
Okay, I get that but I suggest that you first engage the Android modder to solve the issue(s) that you are facing (I think there is also an Android port by estrada777 which is linked in the OP). This is (usually) is the faster approach and most issues can be solved quickly too.

Waiting for an Official Android build takes a longer time (or never), depending on how the demand, willingness, capability, work etc of the developer. Also, since I did not read that Asura Interactive is planning for Official Android, your chance of getting one is slim.

Generally speaking, only request the developer (especially for solo developer like Asura Interactive) to provide official (name your platform here) port when all the other options are exhausted. You need to understand that it takes a lot of work to develop game just for one or two platform, adding another one is more work (especially testing and making sure they work seamlessy in the same fashion across all platforms).

I get that it is a good thing (Official Android) and I am not against it (even if I don't play on mobile) but I also want you to understand that it is NOT in the best interest of the developer to do that given the circumstances of this project (at least not for now, but the most sensible choice would be when the game is finished). If this project is developed by 'big' studios with half a dozen of team members than it is almost a crime not to provide Official mobile platform build. Cheers.
 
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Okay, I get that but I suggest that you first engage the Android modder to solve the issue(s) that you are facing (I think there is also an Android port by estrada777 which is linked in the OP). This is (usually) is the faster approach and most issues can be solved quickly too.

Waiting for an Official Android build takes a longer time (or never), depending on how the demand, willingness, capability, work etc of the developer. Also, since I did not read that Asura Interactive is planning for Official Android, your chance of getting one is slim.

Generally speaking, only request the developer (especially for solo developer like Asura Interactive) to provide official (name your platform here) port when all the other options are exhausted. You need to understand that it takes a lot of work to develop game just for one or two platform, adding another one is more work (especially testing and making sure they work seamlessy in the same fashion across all platforms).

I get that it is a good thing (Official Android) and I am not against it (even if I don't play on mobile) but I also want you to understand that it is NOT in the best interest of the developer to do that given the circumstances of this project (at least not for now, but the most sensible choice would be when the game is finished). If this project is developed by 'big' studios with half a dozen of team members than it is almost a crime not to provide Official mobile platform build. Cheers.
Sorry Mate! but i don't have Computer im just using Smartphone. :cautious:
 
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