Do you track the paths? Because I also started a new game after I noticed that my latest save had the mika, dorothy and jenxjill paths disabled while playing the current update. And even after doing that, when I got to the new update on a new save those paths became "false" once again. There is no error screen for that, you can only notice it when you reach a branch and can see which of the paths you take. But it is also just an assumption on my side, that this is what the other member meant by errors, it might have been something else, just wanted to bring attention to it, because i do have to manually reactivate those variables again.
As for the Plot, the main line is about White Fox, what do you know about it? It has something to do with Jennifers death? Aside from that we have: Ashleys Fiancee, Cynthias Husband, Mayas In Law, Dejas Father, Mayas Trauma, Jennifers Issues, Melissas Issues, Mikaelas Debt, Mikaelas Tatto Shop Plans, Ashleys Gym Plans, Tara (seems to be the only one that is a true sidecharacter that stumbles into the mcs life), Allessias Background and current situation, Dixies Issues, Jills Drug bust, Jills Romance, Lily's obsession (also negligence? like is she still there? forgotten by the Author?), Andreas Psychotic Actions, Thenas Issues and I probably forgot even more that i cant remember of the top of my head. But see where I am going with this? If there was a questlog it would be bursting by now and what I meant when i wrote the previous post is that i am concerned about the author not being able to follow through on all of these, or if he does, then because of the amount it will be halfhearted. On the other hand if he makes detailed sidestories, then it will be years to cover it all.
Now to the MC, drugged an tazed isnt really an argument. What next, some of his girls get taken hostage or he gets attacked in his sleep, so he couldnt do anything against it? One could possibly think that if youre after a group that is apparently highly trained and you were trained by them at some point, you would know some things about how they operate and would prepare contingency planS, several!, to deal with them. To deal with unexpected situations, to not be useless in your own four walls. The taser scene was fine, got surprised even while knowing he was lured, was overconfident and payed for it. But after such a stunt he gets jumped in his own office and gets done in, that is something i consider useless².
But hey just an opinion, still liking the game and hoping for interesting continuations on all the paths.