VN Ren'Py The Lost Love [Ep. 5 U2] [SpeedPostX]

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SpyderArachnid

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SpeedPostx said:
About Chloe:
I understand your frustration. And I agree with you Chloe is a total bitch. But that's how I wrote her. I want people to see the difference between characters. And her being a bitch suits her character, she is an independent scientist who thinks that she is going to discover something that will save this human society. Obviously, that person would be narcissistic, arrogant, and yeah a bitch.

About Mc:
Now about Mc handling her situation, I talked about this with wWb(Proofreader) we were going back and forth about how should Mc handle this, cause Chloe is not a one-off character. She is going to be very important to the main plot of the story. Her storyline helps in moving other characters's storylines (You will see in the future). That's why we decided to keep her in the building instead of just introducing her in Ep3 and then never showing her off otherwise we have to create another scientist to move the story.
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I'm not frustrated about Chloe. Her character is fine. She came out exactly as you wanted, which is awesome. Kudos for that.

My problem is how the MC handled it. I get it, you want her to be important to the story and such. But unless her experiments are going to blow up the apartment buildings for story reasons, or release some chemical in the vents to infect everyone, I don't see why she has to stay in the apartment building. She can go practice her experiments elsewhere without being in the building and still be included in the story (just like several other characters who are not living in the apartment building, yet are part of the story).

She's costing the MC money and refusing to pay rent and is a bitch about it. MC needs to think without his dick and grow a backbone and kick her out. She can go live elsewhere and still be a part of the story. Instead the MC goes full simp mode and lets her walk all over him (which honestly doesn't make sense with the MC's current personality).
 
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SpyderArachnid

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SpeedPostx said:
I did imagine this scenario where Mc did kick Chloe out but after that Chloe's storyline will stop. Cause why would an arrogant person like Chloe will interact with Mc ever again who kicked her out or kicked her out while she was unconscious? She would never help him after that. At that moment we thought this scenario would be more appropriate for future scenes.

But I do see your point and I will have a talk with wWb on this.
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She was only unconscious if you decided to jerk off to her while she was streaming. Then the MC whips out his dick which leads to the whole thing of her humping the MC and then orgasming and then going unconscious.

If you didn't jerk off to her, none of that happens and she isn't unconscious. MC just had to walk in there, see what she was doing, and start going off on her. I'm pretty sure she would of shut off her stream as MC rants about her being a bitch and not paying rent. Which in turn, wouldn't of rendered her unconscious. MC gives her an earful, tells her to pack her shit and get out or he calls to cops to escort her out.

In the end, she is Lily's friend, who is tight with the MC. Once Chloe is kicked out, she'll probably go to Lily. And if Lily is a decent enough friend (to the MC), she'll give Chloe an earful too, which would lead to Chloe maybe apologizing to the MC for how she has been acting and everything else. And now she can stay with Lily instead of in the apartment, but slowly get back into the MC's good graces after realizing she screwed up everything.

You ask, why would Chloe interact with the MC ever again after kicking her out? Well, why would the MC interact with Chloe in general after the way she is treating him? He wouldn't. No one would. No one wants to interact with someone who treats them that way. Chloe is the one who is causing this rift, not the MC. The MC is not at fault for anything, even after kicking her out. It is all her fault. She'll soon realize that after she's been kicked out and had to turn to Lily. Which will lead to them interacting again later in the story because of Lily's help/influence after Chloe realizes she messed up.

It would be a humbling situation for Chloe to knock her down several pegs and realize that she can't always get her way. Which will make her a better person in the end after she realizes her mistake.
 
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The Lost Love [Epi.3 Beta] Unofficial Android Port

There is no textbox in my ports, so enjoy the game. My ports now have alternate save file, even if you uninstall the game your files will be safe in "Storage<Documents<RenPy_Saves" folder.

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SpeedPostx said:
About Chloe:
I understand your frustration. And I agree with you Chloe is a total bitch. But that's how I wrote her. I want people to see the difference between characters. And her being a bitch suits her character, she is an independent scientist who thinks that she is going to discover something that will save this human society. Obviously, that person would be narcissistic, arrogant, and yeah a bitch.

About Mc:
Now about Mc handling her situation, I talked about this with wWb(Proofreader) we were going back and forth about how should Mc handle this, cause Chloe is not a one-off character. She is going to be very important to the main plot of the story. Her storyline helps in moving other characters's storylines (You will see in the future). That's why we decided to keep her in the building instead of just introducing her in Ep3 and then never showing her off otherwise we have to create another scientist to move the story.
I hope you understand my pov.
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Chloe being a cunt isn't a problem tbh, she's your character and you can do whatever kind of direction you want for her.


the big problem is the protagonist either barging into her room and or leaving without trying hard, the two choices aren't logical at all, you either leave or be a perv, that's no way to handle player agency. if she's going to be an important character, let the protagonist deal with her in a way that doesn't compromise lewds and logical action because that's going to make players have a harder time to trying to suspend their disbelief and tolerate a main character that's illogical. that's my take on it at least, I like this game but the protagonist handling chloe's rent could've been done better.
 
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fishbrain

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What's the beginning scene of Ep3? I went from the start and just skipped through but there's no breaks between episodes and the end came a lot quicker than I expected.
 
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is the game suppose to cut out right before the mc go through the door to see jenn ?
 
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