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I would also be happy if you could fix the info about "3D" models in you review to not to confuse the people who would read that.
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about that... shouldnt her boob a bit more perky instead of hanging... also a bit to middle instead spreading to side...
i am not an artist so i wouldnt know how to model a real booby or my expectation to boobs is just unrealistic
I haven't played through all of the content yet, but this might just be my favorite game I've come across here so far(and I've played all of the designated popular ones from that section). It's not necessarily because of the lewd content, which I personally don't prefer to other games, but because of the basic logic of the game and the environment itself, which I find very poetic, interesting and generally jibing with my vibes about what's a good story space. I really applaud you for that, and I'm sorry if I'm not more coherent in my congratulation, but I'm sure I'd offer some awards to this game in certain departments compared to the other erotic ones like it, if I had the chance to. That's just to say, I really think it far surpasses other games in certain ways, that I find highly valuable. So, really, thank you for that. The idea is great, and don't pay attention to those who say you stole it without merit. Whatever the inspiration for it, it's clearly very different in a lot of ways from the game it's similar to story-wise, and insofar as the similarities stop at the older male/younger female relationship and codependency in a survival-like deserted environment, and the names of the female character and that of the game, I'm not even sure where such an argument gets its meat to begin with.
This is truly an awesome game, and you are a wonderful developer, especially if we are to observe the indended directions you have in mind for the future development of the game, as well as how you apparently wish to listen closely to our feedback. The proof of concept is spectacular and I'm honestly enjoying just going back and forth in this tiny world you've created at present. I think you can make something extremely exciting with this, and I can't wait to see what it is. But if I were you, I'd retain the mysterious tone as much as possible, and limit the number of protagonists to the two currently available, at least for now. That way, you know for sure you'll protect the magic it currently has.
EDIT: Just a small caveat, my only complain with this game is the Ellie art. I think it's bad, but that's just me, and perhaps some people like it. But the art of everything else is spectacular. So thumbs up for that, and perhaps rethink Ellie a little - as a suggestion from me.
EDIT2: Is there any penalty for annoying Ellie(are there any internal stats that track her mood towards us) by saying the wrong thing or anything like that? I'm mainly asking in order to know if I can experiment without having to save.
This is truly an awesome game, and you are a wonderful developer, especially if we are to observe the indended directions you have in mind for the future development of the game, as well as how you apparently wish to listen closely to our feedback. The proof of concept is spectacular and I'm honestly enjoying just going back and forth in this tiny world you've created at present. I think you can make something extremely exciting with this, and I can't wait to see what it is. But if I were you, I'd retain the mysterious tone as much as possible, and limit the number of protagonists to the two currently available, at least for now. That way, you know for sure you'll protect the magic it currently has.
EDIT: Just a small caveat, my only complain with this game is the Ellie art. I think it's bad, but that's just me, and perhaps some people like it. But the art of everything else is spectacular. So thumbs up for that, and perhaps rethink Ellie a little - as a suggestion from me.
EDIT2: Is there any penalty for annoying Ellie(are there any internal stats that track her mood towards us) by saying the wrong thing or anything like that? I'm mainly asking in order to know if I can experiment without having to save.
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I not an artist too, and have no knowledge at the drawing anatomy. But I think, everything depends on what you are going to compare her to. If you'll compare her breasts to the many other artists' drawings, they look a lot different, but if you'll compare them to the real breasts, I think her look makes more sense. But I see what are you talking about. Hope they don't look too strange.
Does anyone else thinks that it is something wrong with her breasts and that they should be changed?
I've used this girls body as a reference, I just tried to make them a little bigger:
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Wow... Thank you so so much for all the good words, that really means a lot for me. And I really hope I'll be able to make the game only better with each update. This is very kind of you, to say such kind words and it really helps to continue working on the game when I know that there are people who enjoy playing it.
When I first released the game a couple of days ago and posted a link to reddit, I didn't get any feedback at all. Same story happened with the itch, and at some point I thought the game was a complete shit and no one liked it at all.
It's always nice to know what other people think about your work, at least if something is bad, I'll know what I should improve.
I cannot be objective while looking at my art and I cannot be sure if it is good, so I try to get as much feedback as I can.
Thank you so much for your comment. I am really happy to see such kind comments about the work I've done.
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Could you be more specific please? What exactly didn't you like, so I could know where the problem is. Is it her look? Face/body? Or the style of drawing all together?
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I was going to implement such a system in the first release, but as it has only some events it was not needed. But in future I want to make the relationships dynamic and more realistic. Let's take the spanking scene for example. It will work like this: she will get angry at the main character for doing such things to her, but it will also make her more lewd. And so on. So I'll try to make every event to influence on different parts of her personality and change it. So her behavior could be altered in different ways.
But in the current version there is no such a system, so she won't be angry at you or anything else.
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yea thats it... even if a bit droppy but it wont over the side body... unless its too big and lying on back... only fake breast in porn do cause they loaded with silicon
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Spent some time at google looking at some naked breasts again. And now I'm sure I have to redraw them.
The good thing is that I haven't created to many clothes yet, so it won't be to much work as it could be.
Thank you very much for pointing that out.
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I'm thinking about making them look like they look on this photo maybe.
What do you think?
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Too damn big don't go the 12 year olds fetish root like every other dev does when modeling daughters it always ends up looking like the daughter is older than the mom without wrinkles. yes about 0.3% of young girls have large breast
but there's a reason most don't its not the norm.(just so the dummies don't get it wrong young doesn't mean child at 18 girls still haven't finished developing especially their breasts which usually keep growing till the mid twenties or if they get pregnant then gravity begins to be the next change)
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That is a good point, I'm not going to make them bigger, I just want to change them so they look more naturally. maybe I'll even make them smaller
