VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Manifest: Shadows Over Manston [v2.2] [White Phantom Games]

4.20 star(s) 37 Votes

AJBit

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Mar 9, 2018
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In this version I did not get the chance to save Mrs. Miller's daughter from being raped by her girlfriend? Did I do something wrong? I didn't even see her raped. Was this story arc removed?
 

ThunderRob

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May 10, 2018
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after playing a couple more times looking at all the routes i could..the "divorce papers" REALLY need to be brought up STAT..because MC is turning into an anti-immersion MC..when Jane shouts at him he needs to shout back and bring up the fucking divorce!!! am afraid if it dosnt become an option by next update i'm gonna roll my eyes and roll my playing right out of here...i cant hold on waiting for this game i once loved so much.
 
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Draakaap23

Dying is always an option
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Jul 5, 2017
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This dev has some good ideas for a game and the story for it, but the writing is/was never good and it really shows for the (side) characters and MC. Then there are just too many girls/women! I know, I know, can't have to many in a porn game...At least not in a game that gets finished properly. I have lost hope for this game, dev is also 'focusing' on the girls I do not care about.
 
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privitude

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Jun 26, 2017
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Yes, you have the option to look away
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I was thinking more she asks if you want to watch her pee, the game asks if you want to peek, etc. Not an unusual mechanic, nor is it an unusual or unreasonable question to wonder if a particular kink is an unavoidable part of the game, or just something you can choose to do.
 

ThunderRob

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May 10, 2018
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why anyone would say no to watching a cutie pee is beyond me..i just do not get that reasoning ..totally senseless..my brain cannot accept it :sneaky:
 

DiroGoodboy

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Oct 18, 2016
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Fucking hell this is one of those very selected porn games that make me feel actually guilty for having sex with other women. I just want to help them all.
 

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I was thinking more she asks if you want to watch her pee, the game asks if you want to peek, etc. Not an unusual mechanic, nor is it an unusual or unreasonable question to wonder if a particular kink is an unavoidable part of the game, or just something you can choose to do.
I'm not sure what you're getting at. That's literally what the game offers you - a chance to look away.

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Alfius

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Sep 30, 2017
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Loving this game.... MC is an absolute asshole, but his daughter and her friend are so cute.!!!

Dusk and her evilness are very intriguing. Can not wait to see where the story goes.
 

Zippity

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Nov 16, 2017
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Well it's been a little over a year since I last played/read this VN/Game... A few of the original issues I had run into were fixed in some ways... But overall I still think it has some issues and quirks to work out... You can tell the developers did put a lot of time and effort into the addition of a lot of new content over the past year, and they did try and put some focus on certain story elements with both intrigue and many various characters... But the story telling isn't always the greatest, with inconsistencies, some confusing moments (perhaps based off older choices made?), some over the top events and characterization, breaking of immersion now and then, a few pointless events, and so on... There are still a few spelling and grammar errors, but those can be easily fixed... I do applaud the developers for putting in the effort... But it still has some improvements needed, and I'm not sure all of them are fixable by the developers... We'll have to wait and see what the future holds... I'll most likely check back sometime later down the line, to see how the developers are doing... I went ahead and updated my original review...

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Moonis

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I wish that shady stuff with terrorists or whatever they are, would be put into background. I don't see anything interesting with that story line, except perhaps more co-op with those couple hot women cops.

What I want to see, is intimacy with daughter, secret relationship with Hannah (perhaps with daughter knowing/taking part) and hot scenes with all of Ms. Miller's daughters. Scenes with that hot redhead student is nice content. Thanks for that.
 

MrJethro

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Feb 9, 2018
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played alone and reached a game over... tried the walkthrough and while reading it... too much directions, too many routes and shit... its too confused... avoid this, stay on this, follow on this... dammit... i really liked the game, but then the routes and shit pissed me off... so no more shadows... bye
 

erkper

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May 16, 2018
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Yeah, gotta agree with most of the recent comments here - this game is convoluting itself to death. I tried starting from scratch to build some specific character routes and I kept failing miserably as I was unable to follow the twists and branches even with the walkthrough. Think I'll drop it for a few months and MAYBE try it again later...
 
4.20 star(s) 37 Votes