Well it's been a little over a year since I last played/read this VN/Game... A few of the original issues I had run into were fixed in some ways... But overall I still think it has some issues and quirks to work out... You can tell the developers did put a lot of time and effort into the addition of a lot of new content over the past year, and they did try and put some focus on certain story elements with both intrigue and many various characters... But the story telling isn't always the greatest, with inconsistencies, some confusing moments (perhaps based off older choices made?), some over the top events and characterization, breaking of immersion now and then, a few pointless events, and so on... There are still a few spelling and grammar errors, but those can be easily fixed... I do applaud the developers for putting in the effort... But it still has some improvements needed, and I'm not sure all of them are fixable by the developers... We'll have to wait and see what the future holds... I'll most likely check back sometime later down the line, to see how the developers are doing... I went ahead and updated my original review...
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