VN Ren'Py The Mason Gambit [Ch.10] [CorForce Productions]

[xapican]

Kudos Dev great game, ! enjoyed it from the begining, till the end looking forward to the next chapter,
well about the intro, I would say nothing happens without a reason,
this is a Avn which don't need the Sex nice that it is inside but it doesnt really need it ,intriguing detail a VN with this quality and the thread has only 25 pages, ? Good that the Intro is there, i would say And all what it has been said in it is totally true, all that happens day to day on this site, so no it is not cringe from my point of view
Kudos Dev great Idea and great Story !

 

[jak1165]

Boy, Dev is just gonna keep beating you over the head with "promiscuity BAD" thing, huh?

And he wonders why people who post on a site for pirating harem porn games gave his game a negative review?

 

[Xharz]

This dev is SERIOUSLY to hung up on preaching his belief's in the game, i get it and frankly i agree with like 80% but still its a rant/sermon about how he seeings relationships. The game would be ALOT better is he simply made the talks and interactions and relationships the way he thinks they should be without the ideology sermon's and ranting. Like instead of preaching just do the game as an example of your views. really takes alot of the appeal away from you creation bro, and detracts from the story.

 

[Xharz]

Kudos Dev great game, ! enjoyed it from the begining, till the end looking forward to the next chapter,
well about the intro, I would say nothing happens without a reason,
this is a Avn which don't need the Sex nice that it is inside but it doesnt really need it ,intriguing detail a VN with this quality and the thread has only 25 pages, ? Good that the Intro is there, i would say And all what it has been said in it is totally true, all that happens day to day on this site, so no it is not cringe from my point of view
Kudos Dev great Idea and great Story !

The intro is fine, but its also way tomuch ranting dude. the relationships could have shown his opinions and beliefs just fine without the rant/sermon crap. like seriously really detracts from the story first you have a tirade about his views at the beginning thats as long as a short VN, then there are REPEATED long rants arguing his opinion and views everytime theres a date or romantic type set up. REALLY detracts from the story, the game as a whole, the immersion, and even makes his beliefs seem annoying and ridiculous. which kinda bugs me sense i even share many of the same beliefs. lol

 

[Aeakos]

I like myself a good slow burn romance.

But LARPing as Army man was cringe af lmao. I dont give a shit about "your wife" being a virgin when you met. Just let me play the game.

An Army man that calls pistol mags "clips"...

 

[jak1165]

The intro is fine, but its also way tomuch ranting dude. the relationships could have shown his opinions and beliefs just fine without the rant/sermon crap. like seriously really detracts from the story first you have a tirade about his views at the beginning thats as long as a short VN, then there are REPEATED long rants arguing his opinion and views everytime theres a date or romantic type set up. REALLY detracts from the story, the game as a whole, the immersion, and even makes his beliefs seem annoying and ridiculous. which kinda bugs me sense i even share many of the same beliefs. lol

Yeah he detracts from the story by telling us himself, instead of letting his writing do it for him.

There are good games on this site that have little or even no sexual content. There are good games with slow burn romances. There are good games where the sex scenes are not the focus. All of that is fine.

There are no good games where a dev has the audacity to basically call his entire audience a bunch of "liberal snowflake degenerates" in the intro when he himself knowingly posts on a site where you can pirate loli incest rape games

Edit: Holy shit this dialogue with Nicole bro "I'd have to be retarded to sleep with some guy I'm not going to marry". Who the fuck thinks like that?

Dev has fucking issues. Both literally and figuratively lmao.

 

[punisher2099]

Yeah he detracts from the story by telling us himself, instead of letting his writing do it for him.

There are good games on this site that have little or even no sexual content. There are good games with slow burn romances. There are good games where the sex scenes are not the focus. All of that is fine.

There are no good games where a dev has the audacity to basically call his entire audience a bunch of "liberal snowflake degenerates" in the intro when he himself knowingly posts on a site where you can pirate loli incest rape games

Edit: Holy shit this dialogue with Nicole bro "I'd have to be retarded to sleep with some guy I'm not going to marry". Who the fuck thinks like that?

Dev has fucking issues. Both literally and figuratively lmao.

The dev isn't going to change anything and you can't do a damn thing about it. Either accept it or move on.

 

[jak1165]

The dev isn't going to change anything and you can't do a damn thing about it. Either accept it or move on.

I know I cant. That would require some with a doctorate. He should see a therapist for his personal issues lol.

As much as I am fan of slow-burn romances, there isn't any actual slow burn. Every potential love interest is already in love with him. There's no development. Its quite frankly, pretty lazy and shallow.

It'd be easier to accept if the writing was....well...better. I could give the dev some pointers, if he wanted

 

[punisher2099]

I know I cant. That would require some with a doctorate. He should see a therapist for his personal issues lol.

As much as I am fan of slow-burn romances, there isn't any actual slow burn. Every potential love interest is already in love with him. There's no development. Its quite frankly, pretty lazy and shallow.

It'd be easier to accept if the writing was....well...better. I could give the dev some pointers, if he wanted

I became one of the devs patrons just to spite people like you. It brings a smile to my face the way these fictional characters feel triggers you so much.

 

[Raziel_8]

Hm, the visuals in ch9 seem off, extremly bright/oversaturated lighting. Is the dev changing his preference ?
Kind of threw me off a bit after playing ch 1-8 and the rather extrem change in ch 9.

 

[motseer]

Hm, the visuals in ch9 seem off, extremly bright/oversaturated lighting. Is the dev changing his preference ?
Kind of threw me off a bit after playing ch 1-8 and the rather extrem change in ch 9.

I noticed that as well. I assumed the dev was trying to adjust for the numerous night and dark room scenes. Maybe something about half way between would be better.

 

[sergesan]

what is with this intro....dont you want anyone playing the game for the s...storm at the beginning...and if it isnt about sexual things...what does it do on this kinda sites?? yeah whatever i look for it a little and see where it gets me... ok wrong game for the wrong site!? good quality and the writings good but i´m here for the SEX and not for politics or religious beliefs....maybe better for another VN-forum

 

[Raziel_8]

what is with this intro....dont you want anyone playing the game for the s...storm at the beginning...and if it isnt about sexual things...what does it do on this kinda sites?? yeah whatever i look for it a little and see where it gets me... ok wrong game for the wrong site!? good quality and the writings good but i´m here for the SEX and not for politics or religious beliefs....maybe better for another VN-forum

You know that this is an adult forum, not a porn site, there are also games with no sexual content at all.
And some of us like a good story with sex as a bonus.

 

[Vaftrudner]

I tried searching but did find any previuse mention about it.
But atleast for me there is a broken image of Allison in the bathroom, has anyone else gotten that or is it just that i have gotten a bugged file?

Spoiler: Broken image

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[jak1165]

I became one of the devs patrons just to spite people like you. It brings a smile to my face the way these fictional characters feel triggers you so much.

Spending money on a porn game to own the libs lmao. I feel so owned right now bro.

I was promised a slow burn romance with "traditional values". I got a game where the love interests seem to be the MC's "step sisters", "stepmother", and a woman he just met who is instantly infatuated with him.

Where slow burn?

 

[jak1165]

Very well put together. Keep in mind that the Greeks and Romans were just two cultures among more than a hundred that could be named, spanning more than 5000 years on dozens of different continents or islands. We would consider many of their sexual traditions and practices gross or barbaric - all the way up to mutilations and deformations of various types. These and other practices would make the behavior of the Greeks and Romans seem puritanical.

I agree that the author expresses strong beliefs in a particular lifestyle and perhaps is a little over zealous in its presentation. But, be careful that you don't put yourself in a small box when criticizing it. Many (in this thread) have become obsessed with the views on relationships in the story to the point of ignoring many other extraordinarily poignant topics (The crusade against human trafficking, for example.). It is becoming tiresome and distracting. If people are truly so offended one would think they might look for free entertainment elsewhere. Unless, the crusade against this AVN IS their entertainment.

IMHO

I agree with this. There is a framework of a good story here that deals with tough subjects like domestic abuse, trafficking, suicide, and ptsd

But also a world where everyone who has premarital sex is dead, a whore, a drug addiction, or all 3. Except for the MC

 

[punisher2099]

Spending money on a porn game to own the libs lmao. I feel so owned right now bro.

I was promised a slow burn romance with "traditional values". I got a game where the love interests seem to be the MC's "step sisters", "stepmother", and a woman he just met who is instantly infatuated with him.

Where slow burn?

We are in chapter nine and the mc had sex with only two people so far. That seems like slow burn to me.

 

[motseer]

I agree with this. There is a framework of a good story here that deals with tough subjects like domestic abuse, trafficking, suicide, and ptsd

But also a world where everyone who has premarital sex is dead, a whore, a drug addiction, or all 3. Except for the MC

Hehehe well... I understand what you mean but, words matter and I don't think you mean exactly what you said. If so, then by having sex with both Nicole and Allison, the author has already put MC in opposition to the very ideals he is promoting. No, I don't think he cares about the institution of marriage so much as the idea of a committed relationship - even if that relationship is a non-traditional one. I'm OK with agreeing to disagree. But, I also felt a need to point at some unfair biases that were starting to develop over a single issue. As I said, IMHO.

 

[xapican]

Actually, the MC is in a big conflict with himself, about the traditonal values and monogamy, to a point where he has to put his mind around things, as well Allison, or is my english so bad that I missunderstood, ? and we are not even close to look in what will happen when both sisters make a move on him, what I think it will happen in a few chapters
and yes the whole romace thing is running beside on second plane the main dish is about human trafic.

 

[motseer]

Actually, the MC is in a big conflict with himself, about the traditonal values and monogamy, to a point where he has to put his mind around things, as well Allison, or is my english so bad that I missunderstood, ? and we are not even close to look in what will happen when both sisters make a move on him, what I think it will happen in a few chapters
and yes the whole romace thing is running beside on second plane the main dish is about human trafic.

Exactly right. The special circumstances of the viral infection in combination with the conflicted MC over traditional concepts of strict monogamy were meant (I think) to promote the evolution of an open dialogue rather than present a bigoted opinion. I guess we'll find out as the story progresses.