The intro is fine, but its also way tomuch ranting dude. the relationships could have shown his opinions and beliefs just fine without the rant/sermon crap. like seriously really detracts from the story first you have a tirade about his views at the beginning thats as long as a short VN, then there are REPEATED long rants arguing his opinion and views everytime theres a date or romantic type set up. REALLY detracts from the story, the game as a whole, the immersion, and even makes his beliefs seem annoying and ridiculous. which kinda bugs me sense i even share many of the same beliefs. lol
An Army man that calls pistol mags "clips"...
Yeah he detracts from the story by telling us himself, instead of letting his writing do it for him.
The dev isn't going to change anything and you can't do a damn thing about it. Either accept it or move on.
I know I cant. That would require some with a doctorate. He should see a therapist for his personal issues lol.
I became one of the devs patrons just to spite people like you. It brings a smile to my face the way these fictional characters feel triggers you so much.
I noticed that as well. I assumed the dev was trying to adjust for the numerous night and dark room scenes. Maybe something about half way between would be better.
You know that this is an adult forum, not a porn site, there are also games with no sexual content at all.
Spending money on a porn game to own the libs lmao. I feel so owned right now bro.
I agree with this. There is a framework of a good story here that deals with tough subjects like domestic abuse, trafficking, suicide, and ptsd
We are in chapter nine and the mc had sex with only two people so far. That seems like slow burn to me.
Hehehe well... I understand what you mean but, words matter and I don't think you mean exactly what you said. If so, then by having sex with both Nicole and Allison, the author has already put MC in opposition to the very ideals he is promoting. No, I don't think he cares about the institution of marriage so much as the idea of a committed relationship - even if that relationship is a non-traditional one. I'm OK with agreeing to disagree. But, I also felt a need to point at some unfair biases that were starting to develop over a single issue. As I said, IMHO.I agree with this. There is a framework of a good story here that deals with tough subjects like domestic abuse, trafficking, suicide, and ptsd
But also a world where everyone who has premarital sex is dead, a whore, a drug addiction, or all 3. Except for the MC
Exactly right. The special circumstances of the viral infection in combination with the conflicted MC over traditional concepts of strict monogamy were meant (I think) to promote the evolution of an open dialogue rather than present a bigoted opinion. I guess we'll find out as the story progresses.
Yeah two people who were, like I said, basically infatuated with him from the jump. That's not a slow burn. That's just dragging it out. There's no character development because there's no character. They dont grow. They dont change.
