VN Ren'Py The Mason Gambit [Ch.10] [CorForce Productions]

[indio68]

The whole crossover thing is getting out of hand at this point, especially if background infos get twisted to fit this game. It also shows the lack of creativity from the dev for not being able to come up with own characters and stories, IMO. Then there is ther obvious downgrade in the renders. I don't know why it was necessary to use these filters and to change the characters this much. Not to mention this constant preaching about "how sacrad love and sex" is. I mean, yeah, I wouldn't also want a relationship with the townbike or someone who is incapable to bind herself emotionally, but she being not a virgin anymore wouldn't automatically rule her out for me. But this constant preaching is gettimg to the same level those woke "activists" or the new wave of militant feminists are, and, oh boy, I wish I could shot them to the moon. You made your stance clear, no need to beat the dead horse any further. We got it, dev. And for over half a year waiting time, it wasn't really an impressive update, IMO. If we can stomach thos more than obvious flaws, there still lies a story beneath, that sadly didn't progress really with this update. I hope next time it will get back on pace.

ditto..except for the story...i think it's ok...even if this disgression from the main story wasn't necessary,it gave us a little info on past days from Nicole and MC story...but all the rest is true...ugly new renders at top

 

[indio68]

Nicole , Selena , Allison , Rebecca and Tanya that showed up in tis update got a lot more uglier.
and some other names too that i don´t remember.

even the MC looks kinda different

yea i didn't have reached so far at the moment i wrote it...damn what a mess decv made... this seems not the same game at all now..

 

[Maevos]

I understand that this dev has a lot of trust in his relationship with his wife and he has very strong opinions about loyalty and such. But can you imagine the level of destruction this guy will go through if he ever finds out that his wife has cheated?

All this preaching makes me feel like he's trying to prove something but he's only tempting fate at this point. Fuck, I feel dirty just talking about somebody elses private life, but I can't help it when it's shoved down my throat from the very start of the game.

 

[Bobbycanfly]

This has to be the most unintentionally hilarious game/KN I have ever played.

 

[heimdal74]

What happened with the girls' faces, we don't recognize them anymore,
they're not beautiful,
they look like something prefabricated in the pornographic industry

personally I don't like the graphic artistic touch at all,
there are too many retouching effects,
it looks anything but natural,
a shame

 

[deadfly]

Well this bundle of hypocrisy has many levels, talking about commitment in a harem game with changed renders. You would make a great coach, preaching something you dont practice. But joking aside I kinda lost my interest in this one, because the baggage it keeps bringing up with its inconsistencies just keeps increasing without contributing anything that would make it worthwile. Good Luck!

 

[grumble314]

What happened to the renders in this update?

 

[Zamu77]

I don't have a problem with a girl having sexual relations before we met, as long as I am the only guy in her life while we are a couple.
I DO, however, have a BIG problem with a girl who "sells one thing and delivers something else". Like becoming fat after she gets a ring on her finger or SUDDENLY CUTTING HER HAIR UGLY AND SHORT!

 

[Call of Booty]

Geez,what happened with renders? They all look like ugly angry bitches.Waiting this long for an update to find that. Well,good bye Jason and no, you won't be back like Arnold

 

[michael1984]

Yeah have to say the women of the game changed looks wise for the worst

What even happend ? specially Selena she looked the worst facial wise

Bit of a shame caus i liked the game up until now

 

[Cr0thus]

Games graphics, storyline, and characters have gone to shit and it is just one long rant now. At the beginning the game was decent but now ever other line is a rant about loyalty and values like that's what we want in a game is to be preached at.

 

[botc76]

Good to see people are finally seeing this for what it is. If a dev has so many screws loose as this guy has, that shows in the game and vice versa, a game with that type of content clearly shows the dev has serious issues.

It also just enforces my opinion that I don't really give a damn about who does it and from where they are coming from, I don't want to be preached to constantly, while playing a game, reading a book or watching something

 

[Mario4don]

Well this bundle of hypocrisy has many levels, talking about commitment in a harem game with changed renders. You would make a great coach, preaching something you dont practice. But joking aside I kinda lost my interest in this one, because the baggage it keeps bringing up with its inconsistencies just keeps increasing without contributing anything that would make it worthwile. Good Luck!

Exactly as you say hypocrisy to the max because they keep preaching all the time that only "true love" counts and only one partner for life and if a woman has had a boyfriend before or even masturbated then she is already a slut or even a whore.
And meanwhile what does MC do after he keeps constantly preaching about this "only one true love" ?
He is gathering himself a harem. LMAO

Besides if I remember correctly Nicole admits that she had a boyfriend even though she didn't sleep with him, so I think she should still be considered a slut because she's definitely not "pure" if she had a boyfriend even without sex before MC.

I must admit that even though this is kinetic novel which I am not very fond of because I definitely prefer games in which I have choices available and possibility to choose and decide at least to some extent about MC and his behavior I tried to play this game and give it a chance and at the beginning I even liked this game and plot seemed quite interesting to me but unfortunately this constant and intrusive reminders at every step in the game that every woman who has had a boyfriend before or even masturbated is nothing more than a slut or even a whore effectively discouraged me from even further trying to play this game.

 

[FatGiant]

I tried to play this update. I did. I went as far as leaving the place where Nicole was with Jaye. I then realized that I had fast clicked through all that was said, because I can no longer stand this "evangelization", this hypocrisy, this machismo, this attack on self-determination and sexual freedom.

This a regress to 1940's "values" trying to paint all woman emancipation efforts as slutiness. I don't know if it was even referenced in this disaster of a "story", but, I wonder what this Dev would do to Homosexuality. To abortion. To women that want anything else but be a wife and a mother.

I will not even discuss the graphics, at this point, they don't matter anymore.



Peace

 

[Harem4life]

To all those guys bitching about Dev's opinions, why don't you all just leave? This is clearly not a game for you all. Please find something better to play. Posting about how you don't agree with dev won't change anything.

Yeah he believes in true love and one partner for life kind of thing and he is still forming a Harem but

1) most of them are infected. It's not like they have many choices.
2) MC isn't casually fucking anyone unlike other games. He even turned down a girl in a bar. He believes in falling in love and making love. Once he fucks someone he won't leave them for ever. So yeah, it is a lifetime thing for him.
3) MC don't like skanks. He doesn't have problems if a woman isn't virgin. For example, his stepmom isn't a virgin and he still wants her. He don't like those girls who treats sex casually.

To women that want anything else but be a wife and a mother.

Funny you say that. MC appointed a female as his company's CEO. His team consists mostly of females. The one he reports to is a woman.

He want his girls to use their Amazonian traits and learn new things.

 

[FatGiant]

To all those guys bitching about Dev's opinions, why don't you all just leave? This is clearly not a game for you all. Please find something better to play. Posting about how you don't agree with dev won't change anything.

Yeah he believes in true love and one partner for life kind of thing and he is still forming a Harem but

1) most of them are infected. It's not like they have many choices.
2) MC isn't casually fucking anyone unlike other games. He even turned down a girl in a bar. He believes in falling in love and making love. Once he fucks someone he won't leave them for ever. So yeah, it is a lifetime thing for him.
3) MC don't like skanks. He doesn't have problems if a woman isn't virgin. For example, his stepmom isn't a virgin and he still wants her. He don't like those girls who treats sex casually.



Funny you say that. MC appointed a female as his company's CEO. His team consists mostly of females. The one he reports to is a woman.

He want his girls to use their Amazonian traits and learn new things.

Sure.

Where do you get that we are against the MC? His choices or his behavior?

We are against the proselytizing the author does through the MC and a seemingly kidnapped character from another game. The "story" isn't the issue, it's the continuous, non-stopping, permanent evangelization that the author uses the MC to do.

Now he even brings in another character that we all LOVE to pieces, it is probably one of the most loved characters in this site, to make a spectacle of debasing her for his own ends. It's not the "story", it's the author.

And it is absolute hypocrisy to claim to stay loyal to the one true love and have a cadre of "true loves", if any of the women did the same, as SHOULD be her right by his rules, he would do worse than what he did to his mother. So, those "special" rules and benefits only apply to him. The women exist to be his.

About the mother, that was the supreme show of hypocrisy. She's free to use her body as she sees fit. To have sex with 20 football teams at the same time, it's NONE of his fucking business. He may like it or not. It's irrelevant. But infecting her on purpose to punish any man she may wish to have sex with is WAY, WAY too far. He could cut the funds, that's the limit. Anything else is way too much.

The problem is that this isn't a "story" this is preaching material, for people that want to CONTROL their lovers. That want to have the right to demand fidelity, but, not offer it. To own the women in their life. To never be compared by removing any chance of it. To pretend to be strong when they are insecure.

I understand. This is a "story" for boys that don't know what a woman is. That are afraid of being compared and losing in the comparison. And those boys will follow these ideals. Leading to a life of celibacy or imprisonment because of domestic violence or psychological abuse.

I wish you good luck.

I don't plan on coming back here, but, will reply if called.

Peace

 

[Avaron1974]

To all those guys bitching about Dev's opinions, why don't you all just leave?

You know when people see a car wreck and just have to see what happened?

This is that car wreck.

It's a complete mess, it will never be popular and the devs views being forced down the readers throat is one of the reasons this will never take off.

Yet the dev keeps doing the very thing that turns people off and basically made sure his game will always be dead. It's fascinating to watch.

The fact that the dev is actively self sabotaging his own creation is one of the reasons some of us keep watching.

It's a huge case of what not to do when developing a game yet not only did the dev ignore 2 years worth of criticism on that very point but he doubled down on it.

Now it's all down to the dev what he does but it's also down to the dev that after 2 years, this still has less than 40 subs.

Now lets look at the content beyond the complete nonsense. It has an incest based harem and a badass MC with a team of kickass women. That alone would have made this a success.

Then the dev decided that what everyone reading an adult game wanted was rants about "traditional values" but dialed up to 100. That is the reason it will never be a success.

It's just fascinating to watch.

 

[AM97]

Now he even brings in another character that we all LOVE to pieces, it is probably one of the most loved characters in this site, to make a spectacle of debasing her for his own ends. It's not the "story", it's the author.

Wait. Was that Jaye from Chasing Sunsets at the start ?
There's no way

 

[FatGiant]

Wait. Was that Jaye from Chasing Sunsets at the start ?
There's no way

Yep.

 

[Issikka]

Is it just me or is chapter 10 much worse in terms of graphics quality? Everything seems so grainy and unpolished that it's like a first chapter by a beginner dev...