I like the concept of the game, and also the art work. It is a fairly good game, so far. I would like, however, to see a minor addition into the game. Perhaps as a UI addition, or something. I would like to see the control that you have over each of the ladies in the game. It doesn't have to be a big thing. I was thinking something like a notepad, or something, that only you would know who it is you are looking at. Then transfer the information to the computer later on. Can encrypt that, as well. This way, you know where you stand with this person, and that one. Another addition, and this is more for the story than anything else, is the occasional third option when you are in a kind of tense situation, where you may have to pick one person or another. This option would provide a pause in things, while you kind of white out, from exerting yourself. The reason I thought of this was during the photo shoot, towards the end of the game, you could side with either your step-sister or Corrine, if you chose them. This can result in a slightly modified ending to the confrontation, but also net you a decent amount of power, at the end. Could be for other conversations/confrontations, as well in the game. This is not criticism, or anything, just like having a bit more options, is all.