VN Ren'Py The Nymphomaniac [v0.2.0] [Origami Games]

[AnyName'llDo]

A more interesting read than I was expecting. Good luck to the dev.

 

[OleJackRipper]

Main focus is story?

Not that I'm against that.

I'm here for good porn. So I don't mind the skewedness being adjusted to 50% story-50%sex/porn. Hell, I'll take a 60/40 even. I personally don't see the point in 95/5 like I believe a few games have been to do.

 

[motseer]

...The title doesn't hint at that, however, so my guess is the "Dark" element is that he's secretly a Democrat.

Honestly, from what I have read here I'm not considering trying this, for now at least. But, I couldn't resist tossing you a reaction and a comment... simply because not may have the cojones to say that out loud... even in jest. Kudos.

 

[loikl]

It seems that the dev achieved what he was looking for, creating expectations with practically nothing.

So far there are 10 comments assuming (with some reason) that the "dark themes" are related to the ntr, others criticizing the MC for being a loser (also with some reason), but so far they are all theories, the only truth is that The dev seems like another "misunderstood writer" who swears that his project is going to focus on the story... so that 3 scenes later it will be a compendium of sex.

I may be wrong, but based on the general information it offers, I think it's best to avoid this until update 5 (if it arrives), and see if it's something more stable or just a "let's see what happens" type project.

 

[xXwankerXx]

So another loser MC...*sigh* very sad.

Well, he sound like a whiny bitch just cuz his bitch cheated on him or left him for another guy, but thank fuck he ain't our usual creepy, awkward virgin dork who has a seizure when a decent-looking woman walks past him.

"Dark theme" = Cuck theme?

Nothing's mentioned about that so far, and I don't think there will be any. Ok, the MC whines like a bitch cuz his girl dumped or cheated on him, but that's the only cheating so far. Dude's a beast in bed that puts even the best porn actors to shame and all the sluts he fucks are impressed by his sexual prowess, so unless the dev makes some changes that would contradict the story, I don't think there will be any cucking involved. Dude seems to be cucking-proof.

Such things do create trauma after all and you either move on or get stuck in the past. That would explain the "Your decision in the present will determine the path you take.

I agree, but too much of that trauma would look ridiculous. So, a fucking cheap slut cheated on him. So fucking what ?? Dude fucks whores and sluts into a coma with his dick, why should he keep being so depressed about a stupid failed relationship like our usual small dicked insecure beta bitch would be ?? But yeah, he's too much of a depressed, dumb wimp for my taste. He reminds of that useless MC from Fallen Roads who blew shit way out of proportion with his depression just cuz his girl may or may have not cheated on him. Ridiculous.

 

[xXwankerXx]

Hmm possibly but I don't think betrayal or cheating would justify an "extremely dark theme" but who knows, this place is weird sometimes!

Exactly. Hope choices will actually matter here cuz all that depression and dark thoughts are greatly exaggerated. A bitch cheated on him, he should move on and live his best life. Fuck her. She ain't worth a tear if she didn't give a shit about him.

So do you start the game as a cuck? Because that's implied in the overview. I mean there are many pussy MCs but being cucked opens another can of worms.

No, the MC's no damn cuck, but he's too much of a whiny bitch bitching about his GF having cheated on him or left him, which may not be everyone's cup of tea. Hope things will improve on this front in the next updates.

Well if it is simply plot as your gf cheated on u, u kicked her out ( minimaly) and now girls are just piece of dumb meat for u with only purpose in their life to be fucked in degrading way by mc, than i dont see problem with dark story...

It is called ..well..nymhopaniac...

Damn, you must be doing great with the ladies IRL, man. Stop flexing that misogynistic bullshit so hard cuz nobody will cheat on you if you don't give them a reason to. And you ppl got it wrong. The MC is the (male) nympho here, not one or more LIs. I know it sounds weird, but he's the one with a very big sexual appetite, not the women... he fucks the shit out of two of them, from which one is a prostitute or an actual nympho, in this update, and they want more... they get addickted to him.

 

[ryansFLYIN]

Ok, wow, that was not what I was expecting.

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My wild theory after the first drop: Alice was planted in MC's life to build him up with the purpose of breaking him down with this one scene to start him on some sort of transformation. Might be a huge stretch, but I feel like throwing that out there.

Now, the renders are good not great. The animations could be better, but not the worst I've seen lately. I really really like that we have a couple frames of just changing facial expressions to show a change in mood. But that "wait 3 seconds after clicking" bullshit has to go. Honestly. I did not do that. I saw one cut scene at the end that I almost missed, don't know if I missed anymore, but cut that shit out right now. No one is going to wait 3 seconds after every click.

End result is I am eating dinner late tonight because I didn't want to pause to go cook anything. Intriguing story so far, but just please don't let answers be drawn out for more than just a couple updates - if not next update, we gotta know what happened with Alice by the one after.

 

[holaje12]

Ok, wow, that was not what I was expecting.

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My wild theory after the first drop: Alice was planted in MC's life to build him up with the purpose of breaking him down with this one scene to start him on some sort of transformation. Might be a huge stretch, but I feel like throwing that out there.

Now, the renders are good not great. The animations could be better, but not the worst I've seen lately. I really really like that we have a couple frames of just changing facial expressions to show a change in mood. But that "wait 3 seconds after clicking" bullshit has to go. Honestly. I did not do that. I saw one cut scene at the end that I almost missed, don't know if I missed anymore, but cut that shit out right now. No one is going to wait 3 seconds after every click.

End result is I am eating dinner late tonight because I didn't want to pause to go cook anything. Intriguing story so far, but just please don't let answers be drawn out for more than just a couple updates - if not next update, we gotta know what happened with Alice by the one after.

I think it is pretty clear MC at least "thinks" his girl cheated. There is a "flashback scene" where he is going into his house and he hears moans coming from inside, and just when he is about to see whats going on he wakes up.
The story kinda tells things might not be what they look like though.
Later a big black guy appears and he is looking for MC, and when he goes to MC's parent's home they blame him for what went wrong with MC and his trauma. So put one and two together and thats why I got the idea that his girl was BBCd in the past. But the black dude also says MC is living a lie or something like that so it is possible his ex didnt cheat, at least I hope so because her ghost isnt bad and she is clearly a LI so...

 

[ryansFLYIN]

I think it is pretty clear MC at least "thinks" his girl cheated. There is a "flashback scene" where he is going into his house and he hears moans coming from inside, and just when he is about to see whats going on he wakes up.
The story kinda tells things might not be what they look like though.
Later a big black guy appears and he is looking for MC, and when he goes to MC's parent's home they blame him for what went wrong with MC and his trauma. So put one and two together and thats why I got the idea that his girl was BBCd in the past. But the black dude also says MC is living a lie or something like that so it is possible his ex didnt cheat, at least I hope so because her ghost isnt bad and she is clearly a LI so...

I mean, he did respond with "Betrayal" when the psych said "Alice" in the word association game, and he said it with anger, so it's likely that she did cheat on him, unless that scene is a red herring. So that's why I think that the scene did happen that way, but not with the motives that you first think of in that scenario.

Is she an LI? Honestly, I chose to not be vulnerable with her because I was still under the initial assumption that she was just a cheatin' ho.

As for Frank... he seems to persuade Thomas into giving him info - another indicator of something paranormal or something. I don't have a good read on him, but I don't think he NTR'd the MC.

 

[Morho]

Exactly. Hope choices will actually matter here cuz all that depression and dark thoughts are greatly exaggerated. A bitch cheated on him, he should move on and live his best life. Fuck her. She ain't worth a tear if she didn't give a shit about him.



No, the MC's no damn cuck, but he's too much of a whiny bitch bitching about his GF having cheated on him or left him, which may not be everyone's cup of tea. Hope things will improve on this front in the next updates.




Damn, you must be doing great with the ladies IRL, man. Stop flexing that misogynistic bullshit so hard cuz nobody will cheat on you if you don't give them a reason to. And you ppl got it wrong. The MC is the (male) nympho here, not one or more LIs. I know it sounds weird, but he's the one with a very big sexual appetite, not the women... he fucks the shit out of two of them, from which one is a prostitute or an actual nympho, in this update, and they want more... they get addickted to him.

Why u bringing real life in game is mystery for me. But thx for aditional info about prostitutes...not my kind of mc...

 

[PlayerUnknown47]

Well It's a pretty vague description, there will be another MC loser so cuck theme It looks like a scam.

 

[Havenless_]

Every time a developer says their game will touch on "dark" themes I kinda expect only two things:

-A Lessons in Love attempt, with "murky imagery", cryptic dialogue and "complex" and unnecessarily confusing plot.
-Love interests with rape plot in their past.

Hopefully there is something more original than that here. I'm curious as to what direction this will take.

 

[robrize2169]

interesting enough that i look forward to playing the next update. not sure what to make of the story though. obviously, Alice is either missing, or dead, or cheated on mc and left. but with his obviously high libido, perhaps she left him because he was fucking all the girls around him because he is a sex addict and she couldn't cope?
another possibility for the story is that Nora and red eyed woman are vampires..dark themes could mean the supernatural? just a theory, probably wrong about that. but since i love vampire stories, i am hoping this is the beginning of one. anyway. on to the next game.

 

[Origami Games]

Hi everyone! Origami here, I have read your comments, unfortunately this is not my thread. I have literally just sent for a Game Update Thread Request where I will be the person who posts the updates, etc. Regarding the 3 seconds in the beginning, I will delete that as per your requests. Regarding the tags, I was led to believe that I cannot put tags that are not present in the current updates. Thank you all for playing

 

[Draver1]

Mallory?

 

[Draver1]

Hi everyone! Origami here, I have read your comments, unfortunately this is not my thread. I have literally just sent for a Game Update Thread Request where I will be the person who posts the updates, etc. Regarding the 3 seconds in the beginning, I will delete that as per your requests. Regarding the tags, I was led to believe that I cannot put tags that are not present in the current updates. Thank you all for playing

You can put planned tags that are not yet in the game in the "genre" spoiler, or until you get ownership of the thread, in a post, and then a mod should add them to the OP.

 

[xXwankerXx]

Why u bringing real life in game is mystery for me.

Cuz it applies to RL, too ?? What else should I compare the story here with ?? All those 'well-written' cuck games and whore simulators ?? Sadly, there really are guys (girls and women too) IRL who get through this and act exactly like the MC in this story does. It's beyond me why they'd be depressed about a cunt or a dickhead who obviously doesn't give a shit about them if he/she cheats on them, but different ppl, different reactions, I guess.

That aside, did you actually play the game and pay attention to the story at least a lil bit ??The MC's a depressed idiot bitching about his ex cheating on him and/or dumping him for another guy. It's not yet fully explained, we just get a flashback scene of him coming home and hearing a woman moan while getting fucked, ofc. There's no 'visual confirmation' tho. How isn't cheating RL fact ??

Might be a huge stretch, but I feel like throwing that out there.

Anything's possible, so you might as well be right about it, but to me all the 'depression' and whining sound ridiculous, especially for this kinda reason. I would've understood this if his girl was killed in front of his eyes trying to protect him from some lunatic, or he witnessed the death of his parents/best friend(s), or something really heartbreaking like that, but for a supposed horse-dicked male nympho with a sexual appetite that puts even the horniest motherfuckers and porn actors to shame to be so depressed about a bitch cheating on him sounds ridiculous, cuz one cancels the other by default, IMO.

Hope the dev will give us choices that actually matter when deciding how the story plays out and how the MC acts, cuz it's too much depression and over-the-top whining for my taste, especially since the reason for that is something ridiculous like a cheating slut doing what sluts usually do.

but with his obviously high libido, perhaps she left him because he was fucking all the girls around him because he is a sex addict and she couldn't cope?

That wouldn't explain why he's so upset about her leaving him that he don't even wanna hear her name anymore, but this 'ghost', or 'imaginary friend', or whatever the she is he created to cope with the breakup can only mean that she either cheated on him and dumped his ass or she was killed. I honestly would prefer it was the second option, cuz the first one is too simp-ish for a supposed male nympho and obvious manwhore who only pumps and dumps women before feelings get involved.

 

[xXwankerXx]

Regarding the tags, I was led to believe that I cannot put tags that are not present in the current updates.

Hey, man. Welcome to the forum, and congrats on releasing your first game. About the tags, there's a planned tag section in the spoiler tag in the OP under Genre you can add them to, and those tags should reflect all the kinks and fetishes you want in your story and plan to add in the next updates. My advice is to be honest and transparent about anything so ppl know what they get themselves into and also get their money's worth, if they decide to support your project.

As for Frank... he seems to persuade Thomas into giving him info - another indicator of something paranormal or something. I don't have a good read on him, but I don't think he NTR'd the MC.

As crazy or far-fetched as it may sound, I honestly suspect the guy was either the dude who fucked his precious Alice he simps so much for, like you said, OR he could be his biological dad, and the MC's mixed race. It would explain why Linda didn't want to see him and his dad was so angry when he popped up wanting to tell the MC the truth about the supposed 'lie' he's been living in. Any of those two sounds like a possible scenario. Screenshots in the spoiler bellow.

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[Prokopije]

Hello. Monogamy route possible?

 

[fishbrain]

Every time a developer says their game will touch on "dark" themes I kinda expect only two things:

-A Lessons in Love attempt, with "murky imagery", cryptic dialogue and "complex" and unnecessarily confusing plot.
-Love interests with rape plot in their past.

Hopefully there is something more original than that here. I'm curious as to what direction this will take.

The possibility of that second one is why I won't play it yet, it's too much of a trigger for me. Especially with such a stern warning.