VN Ren'Py Onhold The Office [Ep. 3 v0.3] [Damaged Coda]

[javikaston]

Gail could record Cindy giving Dave a blowjob and show him to his wife

I like that one better. but I would like it even better if she used that to blackmail him. or since Dave is the head of finance Gail finds a money trail leading back to Dave. Of course, Dave is dirty and he's nearing retirement I'm sure. So he's been taking a bit extra from the company for years and putting it away in an offshore account. Gail uses this to her advantage and turns Dave's world upside down. and one by one Gail finds out what Dave loves the most and takes it from him. Until he is nothing more than he's shown for what he truly is, he's an insecure worthless fuck. with an inferior complex. So he's worked his ass off to hide. His greatest fear. for everyone to see him as a failure as a human being.

Dave saw an opportunity that he wouldn't have ever had if he wasn't the CFO. And this all stems from his past. When he was younger. All the Pretty girls like Gail never gave him the time of day. Therefore he used Gail to get his payback. But by the end, a twisted turn of events leaves him a broken shell with nothing. No job. No wife no reason to live. So the story doesn't show it directly but hints are dropped that He offed himself. Death by high off that's the official story but there are rumors that someone accidentally, on purpose pushed him through a window on the 25th floor. It and Gail Make replaces him. and the next storyline can begin.

I love doing what-ifs and what might bes.

Maybe I will use the above for the outline for short fan fiction. lol

 

[fihesog318]

I am a Dave supporter. It is so hot that he spits in her mouth and has her eat his ass. 50 shades of grey is the top selling woman's book of all time. Many women love to be dominated. Of course, this game is over the top since it is porn rather than fiction or real life. I am looking forward to Dave getting Gail's sister as well, Dave can also pimp Gail out to clients and to help him within the company, etc.

This is a corruption game boys. If you want a bad ending for Dave, fine. But your immaturity and thirst is showing a bit with the "I can save her" for a porn game where Gail is a slut. Guys, DO NOT try and save porn and hooker types.

 

[javikaston]

I am a Dave supporter. It is so hot that he spits in her mouth and has her eat his ass. 50 shades of grey is the top selling woman's book of all time. Many women love to be dominated. Of course, this game is over the top since it is porn rather than fiction or real life. I am looking forward to Dave getting Gail's sister as well, Dave can also pimp Gail out to clients and to help him within the company, etc.

This is a corruption game boys. If you want a bad ending for Dave, fine. But your immaturity and thirst is showing a bit with the "I can save her" for a porn game where Gail is a slut. Guys, DO NOT try and save porn and hooker types.

That's cool. Everyone has their own opinion. I'm happy for you that you get to live out your fantasies through the Bottom Feeder. Also if you wanna see immature you should look up "Revenge: A dish best served cold."

It's a very short fan fiction I created just to beat the shit out of Dave.
You have your play style and I have mine.
Good gaming. Even to the Soulless Dave supporters.


To everyone!

 

[javikaston]

That's cool. Everyone has their own opinion. I'm happy for you that you get to live out your fantasies through the Bottom Feeder. Also if you wanna see immature you should look up "Revenge: A dish best served cold."

It's a very short fan fiction I created just to beat the shit out of Dave.
You have your play style and I have mine.
Good gaming. Even to the Soulless Dave supporters.

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To everyone!

Hey I even found it for ya.

https://f95zone.to/threads/revenge-a-dish-best-served-cold-v1-0-re-dead-broke-inc.96199/

Now this is immature. The quality sucks. but it serves its purpose.

 

[javikaston]

Hey I even found it for ya.

https://f95zone.to/threads/revenge-a-dish-best-served-cold-v1-0-re-dead-broke-inc.96199/

Now this is immature. The quality sucks. but it serves its purpose.

I am a Dave supporter. It is so hot that he spits in her mouth and has her eat his ass. 50 shades of grey is the top selling woman's book of all time. Many women love to be dominated. Of course, this game is over the top since it is porn rather than fiction or real life. I am looking forward to Dave getting Gail's sister as well, Dave can also pimp Gail out to clients and to help him within the company, etc.

This is a corruption game boys. If you want a bad ending for Dave, fine. But your immaturity and thirst is showing a bit with the "I can save her" for a porn game where Gail is a slut. Guys, DO NOT try and save porn and hooker types.

I have question for you. Where did you get the idea that Dave is going to get Ana as well? or is that just something you're hoping for?

 

[Ifartedtoolong]

So no more having to hold down the CTRL button to get past forced scenes like with that ugly turd of a boss? Sounds good to me but I would of just preferred Gail being given the option to kick the fucker in the nuts and then blackmail him to keep him from doing anything and promote her or she would report him and bring his tiny little world crashing down on top of them.

 

[javikaston]

So no more having to hold down the CTRL button to get past forced scenes like with that ugly turd of a boss? Sounds good to me but I would of just preferred Gail being given the option to kick the fucker in the nuts and then blackmail him to keep him from doing anything and promote her or she would report him and bring his tiny little world crashing down on top of them.

PREACH!!!!!!

 

[blink66]

Exhibitionism scenes look cool.

 

[Maxh]

Hey fellow Gail fans. I was on the discord earlier and saw some feedback on the scenes. And it got me wondering.
Does anyone have any comments on the content. Maybe what could be done to make the game better. Both in terms of scenes and writing ?

Coda has already stated. He's fixed the relationships. Text color and there will be no more forced scenes can anyone else think of anything else?

A lesbian catfight with lezdom ending with Gail's office rival, preferred a "Man-handle" lezdom instead of BSDM or creepy body part worship would be a nice change from the norm... Also an all too common trope that this game and many others tease the audience with is that the Game will have some kind of maledom, it also lets the female protagonist be a bitch to strangers... But so often there is never a rape scene where she is put in her place, weather it's a rival/enemy or a minor antagonist in a alley/bus or something the game Dev will tease it for multiple updates and it never comes... I feel that too many game devs are afraid of hard and fast consequences as if it will move the story too fast or something... Normally these types of hard and fast events are limited to RPGM games and even then alot of the time the game Dev will still pull punches. RPGM games also suck because of how long they take to play... The absolute worse offender for this type of tease is "L&P AWAM" who at this point is just milking his simps on Patreon and will have to wait another 10 years to see the second scene with boobs.... I personally feel that Gail has been enough of a bitch on certain paths/decision to warrant getting some rough treatment, hey maby Dave will be forced to watch Gail get rekted... Maby you never intended to see Gail get too roughed up and always wanted cater to corruption as much as possible. But the game hints at more hardcore outcomes and if the more hardcore outcomes were in your intentions then please stop with the teasing and get to the good stuff... I promise it won't ruin the pacing of the story.

 

[javikaston]

How and why do you want Gail to get rekted? To you what is Gail?

Also, I'm not Coda. Just a game fan. That loves to what if and Game theories. This is why many of my posts are like these. I like having talks with others to see how they feel and what they like and dislike. I know Coda does look at the forums from time to time. And I like interacting with the community even the Dave supporters. Even though their minds are twisted lol.

We all have our own kinks.

 

[Maxh]

How and why do you want Gail to get rekted? To you what is Gail?

Also, I'm not Coda. Just a game fan. That loves to what if and Game theories. This is why many of my posts are like these. I like having talks with others to see how they feel and what they like and dislike. I know Coda does look at the forums from time to time. And I like interacting with the community even the Dave supporters. Even though their minds are twisted lol.

We all have our own kinks.

Honestly other than the Lezdom I'm not to picky about Gail getting related by maledom... I just don't want it teased for several updates just to have it phoned in or abandoned

 

[javikaston]

I hear ya. I'm tired of seeing guys period. If I wanted to see a dick. All I have to do is look down. I wouldn't mind seeing some girl-on-girl action for the next couple of updates. While that happens some events can all unfold in the background and then when Gail comes back from her vacation or whatever. She gets new issues she has to deal with. possibly having to deal with more rival companies trying to take their clients. This isn't a basic sex game. The scenes are amazing. The obv errors that should have been fixed in update one and there are still in the current release. Reflects poorly on the game as a whole. Brings the overall product down. If the writing was on par with the renders. Coda could be making a lot more money than he is now. There need to be more subplots. Stuff out of the office. More meaningful choices as a whole. It can be difficult to write something like that but if its tracked properly it can be done effectively. If the current writer knows how. balancing the main plot and side plots isn't really that hard. The best part about it is the side plots don't have to do anything with the main plot. For the most part especially in this game. The subplots can be used to develop the characters more not just Gail. But even Dirty Dave. Use the subplots to expand the setting outside of the office.

The characters feel kinda shallow. It really does remind me of the tv show. From what I watched. I feel like there was very little character development or if there was very shallow. and felt empty. It was very plot-driven and not character-driven like the more quality shows are.

Well, that's my two cents on the issue. Too much dick. Not enough pussy and there are more.

see ya in the next response.

 

[Pi Quantum]

The subplots can be used to develop the characters more not just Gail. But even Dirty Dave. Use the subplots to expand the setting outside of the office.

I think Dirty Dave is here to stay, as the only way Gail can get rid of him is by trading up to Fat Hugo, who will make sure Dave never touches her again. The downside for Gail is that he's more likely to use her a corporate whore for friends and clients, rather than keeping her to himself. Bonus points if one of them is Gail's Dean at the university, who's now wondering if she's secretly into him after Dave's vibrator tricks...

More pussy could be achieved after a follow up visit to Kat at the boutique. Even better if we find out that Kat is Cindy's baby sister in a plot twist, so Gail can really stick it to Cindy by fucking her baby sister in front of her - on top of beating her to the promotion. Would be interesting to see just how far Cindy would be willing to escalate their conflict after that shock...

I couldn't resist teasing Noah, so my chances of more incest pussy from Ava are close to zero now.

Agree that we need more meaningful plot, as the taxi scene was bizarrely improbable (even with max corruption) and the long dinner date with Frank looked more like an opportunity to show off graphic assets than progress the plot. Will still give credit to Coda for listening to feedback, as the taxi scene ended up in the Gallery and his earlier descriptions of Gail's thoughts and sexual activities were a lot clumsier and long-winded than the current ones. If he can keep delivering lot that measures up to the high graphical standards, this could be a great game.

 

[S.t.s]

YESTERDAY AT 11:42 AM
Progress - Episode 3 v0.2
Hi everyone,Just a little update on the progress report. Event 2 rendering is done 50%. Dialogues for event 1 are complete. I will be postin

 

[pcaf]

I want more Dave. More Noah. More exhibitionism. More hetero scenes but less vanilla. A submissive slut Gail would be perfect.
And less lesbian.

I hereby submit my request.

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

I think Dirty Dave is here to stay, as the only way Gail can get rid of him is by trading up to Fat Hugo, who will make sure Dave never touches her again. The downside for Gail is that he's more likely to use her a corporate whore for friends and clients, rather than keeping her to himself. Bonus points if one of them is Gail's Dean at the university, who's now wondering if she's secretly into him after Dave's vibrator tricks...

More pussy could be achieved after a follow up visit to Kat at the boutique. Even better if we find out that Kat is Cindy's baby sister in a plot twist, so Gail can really stick it to Cindy by fucking her baby sister in front of her - on top of beating her to the promotion. Would be interesting to see just how far Cindy would be willing to escalate their conflict after that shock...

I couldn't resist teasing Noah, so my chances of more incest pussy from Ava are close to zero now.

Agree that we need more meaningful plot, as the taxi scene was bizarrely improbable (even with max corruption) and the long dinner date with Frank looked more like an opportunity to show off graphic assets than progress the plot. Will still give credit to Coda for listening to feedback, as the taxi scene ended up in the Gallery and his earlier descriptions of Gail's thoughts and sexual activities were a lot clumsier and long-winded than the current ones. If he can keep delivering lot that measures up to the high graphical standards, this could be a great game.

Whatever happened to that young muscular body guard (can’t remember if he has a name) if Gail can get him to fuck her then maybe she can get some control back, or she could do him to make her boss jealous if she’s refraining sex from him

 

[MoretZ]

guys help me with sound and music?
cause i played without music and sound

 

[Maxh]

How and why do you want Gail to get rekted? To you what is Gail?

Also, I'm not Coda. Just a game fan. That loves to what if and Game theories. This is why many of my posts are like these. I like having talks with others to see how they feel and what they like and dislike. I know Coda does look at the forums from time to time. And I like interacting with the community even the Dave supporters. Even though their minds are twisted lol.

We all have our own kinks.

If your not Coda what game do you develop your name sounds familiar... Maby I saw it in the thread before but F95 says your a game dev

 

[grumpyoldcat]

Is there any anal content in this game?

 

[Sadowdark]

Is there any anal content in this game?

I don't remember, but I don't think there is