seems like another one of those Pixiv comic strips converted to Renpy.
Not much plot to talk about or conflict to deal with.
This was never comic strip, just a fun little side project, so yeah it is light on plot and conflict lol
I get the impression that there are plans for sequels, or something like that. Maybe this short or maybe a longer game. I say that because of the ending. Anyway. The last scene was definitely the best.
The only thing I would "ask" is that, if you have that freedom that you don't have to worry about patreon and shit like that, you should take advantage of it and do more 'incest talk'. There are almost no games with this. The only thing close to this is two sentences at the end. Evan saying "fuck your own son" (and it's not even in a sex scene) and Giselle mentioning incest. That's why I say to take advantage and do more of that. In sex, in everyday conversations, etc. I find it incredibly hot in an incest game but like I said, there are virtually no games that do that. They just stick to replacing 'mom' with 'landlady' and that's it. It gets monotonous and very artificial.
And yes, I noticed that Evan is not very comfortable with Giselle talking like that in the least. But Giselle did like it and we see her thoughts. Maybe in her thoughts it would be okay for her to say that kind of things, if Evan doesn't like it. Which is weird. What the fuck, Evan?
Obviously it's a short story but I liked it. Giselle is very sexy. It's good to see MILFs who look MILF age. Or at least something close to it.
I get what your saying about the appeal of having dialogue like that, I just found it difficult to put it in without it coming across as forced.
I thought the fact it doesn't have the usual landlady stuff would be enough, but I'll consider it for other projects going forward, it doesn't quite fit with this game
And thanks for Giselle praise, MILF's not looking like MILF's in these games is something that really bugs me as well lol
now I kinda wish she would just reverse-rape him
whats with his reluctance anyway aint she hot
Yeah she's hot....and also his mom
If you are after incest with dirty talk (poured on so thick it's more comedy than incest fetish imo) I'd suggest the incest mod for Love Season; Farmer's Dreams. The whole damned village is related after that is added (not just Nova/Nina being made into sister/cousin like I was expecting) and everyone's favorite sentence is a form of "let's make an incest baby!" It's rather long, esp compared to this one, and takes over 45 mins even if you skip without reading anything (prob a few days of actual reading and still isn't finished). And yeah Evan was weird. I can understand that not everyone is into being a literal motherfucker but WTF, if he didn't want to do it then why do it? It's not like she held him at gun point or tied him up and raped him.
He mentioned near the end she blew him while he was sleeping, and hasn't really been taking no for an answer. But she's still his mom at the end of the day, that's why its therapy and not calling the police lol
so you know how to make good games... color me shocked
Shocking!
Hello Oppai Auteur
Thank you for the short but very interesting story.
Unfortunately, the text box very often overlays the graphics, which I personally don't like that much. a transparent text box and/or a different position would be a significant improvement.
Animating some scenes would certainly have been more complex, but would have upgraded your project significantly.
maybe you're still considering making an animated remake.
good luck with your other projects.
Never really noticed that with the text box before, I tend just to leave that as is, I know some people mod the text box so maybe one of them will come along at some point
And when it comes to animation I don't really have the rig for that, and even with I did I don't have the skills, so there are no plans for animation at any point
Wooow I loved the story of this game. Hopefully there will be a second part.
I never really considered a second part while writing it, although I did make a model for the therapist so I guess we could follow mom on her journey to get better
MC has a dick of a different color
Texture issue, gave him a wet skin shader cause he was just out the shower but it wouldn't apply to his dick lol
I'd already set up about 30 renders before I noticed, so I know not to do that next time lol
Honestly, mc's mother is hot, I really like her model.
But mc is a complete idiot, I don't like him. His mother flirts with him, she wants him, and he? ''NO?! mom, what are you doing?
blah blah blah... and he's also sad. Fucking loser. Annoying gay MC.
Thank god my main man
Qmil679 did a PT of this, Jesus H Christ the son is the most whiny annoying fuck I've ever seen in a VN.
Yeah, for fans of M/S games, I don't recommend this game. MC is probably gay as he constantly refuses advances from his mother.
His mother really has to try hard to get the MC to finally agree to have sex with her. And he's sad during sex, he doesn't look happy at all.
Throughout the game, MC refuses his mother, he doesn't want to have sex with her and he thinks it's wrong.
When MC's mother told MC to switch position to missionary because she wants to look into him in the eyes while he fucks her, MC thinks it's creepy...
The game ends with the MC thinking it's wrong that a mother wants to have sex with her own son and forces her to go to a therapist because she's not normal.
It's a pity that such a beautiful mother (I really like her model) is wasted in such a VN with a loser MC.
Yeah you don't want too much realism in this stuff. In reality a son might be appalled, but who needs reality in ones entertainment?
Interesting response to a more unwilling son character
I will say I don't really consider Evan the MC, or Giselle for that matter, they both have their role in the story.
I just messed around with the formula a little, the mom being the aggressive one, and the son not being a complete creep lol
And I wouldn't say I was being all that realistic in this game. Evan had a more realistic response to incest yeah, because I liked the idea of the son not being the hyper horny one. But when it comes to Giselle couldn't be more unrealistic, she's ready to go in a second even though its her son, which I played up for laughs
Sorry you found him annoying, I found it funny
Kudos for the bush though, but not enough bush in the bush.
There is just no pleasing some people