desmosome

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Playing the submissive path. Currently at the card game in basement.

I like the story set up. I like the characters and the writing in general. There is one thing that bothers me a bit. There is too much internal thoughts being shown. Some of it is inevitable and even helps in learning about the characters. However, it seems to be a little bit excessive here. You don't have to verbalize all their thoughts. In a game like this, their thoughts are often kind of retarded (comes with the territory lol). It's much better to show than tell. Slight arousal at seeing the penis can be more elegantly expressed with a render or 2. Things like admiring the body and stuff should be visually represented rather than writing out her actually thinking that. It's kind of absurd to be thinking that in the situation they are in, but some involuntary reactions can be shown visually. Also, constantly saying "like we have a choice..." and things like that makes the characters look dumber than what they could be otherwise. They do have a choice. There are a number of things she could try. The driving force in this path is the submissiveness and probably the trauma from the incident when she was younger. So her telling herself she doesn't have a choice is just lying to herself. She is just afraid for herself and her daughter. It's better to leave this unsaid and just show her emotions through the visuals when possible.
 

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The Point of No Return [v0.20] [Compressed]

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redwind21

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It would be a fitting ending to see them all end up pregnant with Stan's babies as part of a corruption route.
 

jaredhsieh65

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Seriously Heros ....
We need you ......... to ....... made a mod for this game....

Or you can teach me how to made it ?!
 

introvtx

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DS23G so submission route is when Jennifer is corrupted and develop feelings for Stan and with/without Maya variant (I don't actually know there is a variant, both are submissive in my playthrough).
resistance route is when Jennifer refuse and ignore the men demands and Maya corrupted and fall for Stan.
deception route is when Jennifer prevent Maya to be abused and is actually have control in sexual situation (and the dream where she pushed Stan on the bed)

did I get it right?
 
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leyre

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So, have we reached the "point of anything hapenning" at all?

Edit: Kek, when something finally happens its a fucking girl who came out of nowhere
 
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Grimtown

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"Noneya666 tagged a Thread The Point of No Return [v0.20] [DS23Games] with incest"

Can anyone tell me what content got tagged here? :) Thanks in advance.
 
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