Night visits when Irith isn’t asleep enough have ‘you return to your chambers and fall asleep’ followed by ‘you return to your room and soon fall asleep’
Speaking of night visits, if Grex can’t pump out two loads, why does he stick around? Admittedly, the rising and falling of her bosom are a compelling argument.
Also, does she sleep in that crown‽ That looks uncomfortable!
Holy shit, you actually changed it so that she only uses the razor when you bring it to her! Now that's attention to detail!
The note on portal travel has extraneous commas
The overnight scenes with the queen (with 23, with the court lady, and with kneeling maids) are not in the gallery
When Nyx is brought through the portal she is both topless and clothed. Not complaining too much, but it makes “Why are your boobs out, Princess?” and “I would never display mine like that…” even funnier.
Nyx will comment on the 5,000g reward when she's in the dungeon
“I will take half of any money, you might have hidden from me.” has an extraneous comma, and no speaker
Nyx can bring Irith wine while she is locked in the cage
Gwynn doesn’t actually tell us the gem combo when it is researched
Exceptions:
An exception occurs at night after “Enemy positions on the portal field will now be reinforced at night!”
Two exceptions occur when sending Nyx to the tavern after she has been given the option to the tavern, and the dancing outfit has been acquired
And
An exception occurs when opening the quest log after Gwynn’s arrival
