Trying to read the walk-through makes me feel like i'm having a mental breakdown... WHY would the sections be written out of order!?! WHY include obviously outdated instructions?
I think that in fact it must be related to the fact there's a number of aspects of the game design that turn this from being a solid 5/5 down to a 3/5. At some point the idea that the game is supposed to be "discoverable" and "fun" is lost: 4-6 hours of gradual "grinding to increase corruption" suddenly turns into fractured confusing endgame choices.
The coding: **EXCEPTIONALLY** high quality development practices, possibly the best I've seen in a Renpy game.
The renders: well, I guess kind of cute and they do the job. Perhaps dev has a Potato GPU and thus the small/grainy images
The gameplay: grind-to-reward balance is poor and gets worse to the end. The "what to do next" is super unclear at times, and other times requires you to make dumb time-gaps/manual navigation to progress
The mini-games: some of the better examples seen on Renpy, but due to the excessive grind they get repetitive.
The eroticism: not really that sexy
All in all, it feels like it needs a shakeup, cut out the worst 30% of gameplay design, and it would result in a cracking little game.