I'll be waiting for the second part of the post, because the first one it's really cryptic! haha
Okay, so, I've been on the fence about making my own AVN for a while now. I have several ideas, and some of them I've actually written scripts for the first act. One of them is a game called, "The Second Half."
So, I'm cursing myself out for second guessing myself and not just going ahead and doing it, meanwhile someone else has a game just starting that uses the same title! But, it's not
really that big a deal. There's lots of titles that have been used more than once in games, movies, books, and everything else. It just reminded me that I should make a decision already.
Oddly enough, you are actually using the phrase very differently than me. In my idea, it's a reference to the saying, "they tie it all together in the second half." My game idea is more about a guy tying up the loose ends of his past. So, pretty much the opposite of your game!
I'm just after the part where
I was wracking my brain trying to see if I know Buffy well enough to remember what scene that is on the TV (I think it's from the musical, when everyone is blaming Dawn, because they think she summoned the dancing demon. Yeah, I've seen it more than once. So sue me.)
Anyway, your game seems great so far! Yeah, there are some small issues with grammar and punctuation, but overall the English is pretty darn good compared to a lot of what we see around here. I'm really enjoying playing it, so I'm glad I spotted it. I hope it does well for you.
EDIT: and now I see his new "vehichle," lol. I love it.