Well, I think this game is the most interesting game that I had played in the last 6 months.
I must admit that I played the game in ctrl at first because the preview and cover pictures seemed not very interesting and I had a little dizzy after a day. After the time passed, I got more and more interested by looking at the cg and story(even in the ctrl way) so I deleted the save and played it again in normal way.
I am glad that I didn't drop the game by rush playing or I would lose the change to read a such interesting story. I originally planned to sleep at 0000 but cannot stop playing until finished it at 0430! With such interesting story the first two chapters already had, the game can definitely put a sale on steam like acting lessons and win almost 80% ero-game if you guys keep working on it.
However, there are still some opinions I have for such a great game.
First, there are still some bugs in the game after the hotfix(I just download the game from google drive link at front page yesterday, don't know it is the latest version or not), found one which missed the image of selene99 during the gameplay.
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Second, the bgm are nice(especially the theme song on main menu) and the animate is ok, but some of the sound effect is awful. For example, the moan of
selena make me feel annoying as it loops in a fast way. It is recommend to pause a little longer between the moan loop or just simply remove the sound effect to prevent unsuitable moan sound, which is not match to the character's setting(personality, age, etc), from the characters.
Third, it is not a bad idea to have a achievement system that make people have motivation to unlock pictures and play the game again, but it is better to have some tips for player to know how to unlock it. For me, the "Monk" achievement really beat me when I tried to unlock it. I tried so many times but it still 2/3 and I had no idea how to unlock, it made me feeling frustrated and I finally unlocked it by just random picking choices. Therefore, an in-game tips show up by kicking the name of achievement I think will solve the problem or you can just have a official walkthrough if the tips system is not put in the game.
These are some suggestions to the game for now, and I also have some questions want to ask the developer
1, What is the plan for protagonist's ending? Taking Alwin as example, is Alwin's ending be 1on1 or harem? Can Alwin start a relationship with multiple character in the same time?
2, It is sure that the game will have more than one protagonists, will the protagonist's story all go in parallel lines or some will join into one like joining Alwain's team? If some will join into one, will there be a situation that protagonist have a relationship with the other protagonist(like Alwin x
Maerin or Nahyun)?
3, We now have 3 fighter(definitely Alwain and
Eoden, not sure about
Marisa, may be rogue?), 1 ranger(
Fraeda) and 1 wizard(
Nia) in Alwin's team, will there be more teammate like Dwraf from dwarven kingdom, barbarian from norse kingdom or wood-elf from Air'gialla in the future?
4, I first though
Nia and her people are the wood-elf but it turns out they call them high-elf, so is it has a different setting and different look between the tradition elf(you know,long ear,slim,etc) and the elfs in the game?
5, Since all of Alwin's team don't recognize the
dark elf, I guess there is no
dark elf in Hedwun?
6, How can the protagonist build their relationship with the other characters? You need to choose every right choices or count how much points you get to form a relationship? Since you can save some characters by choosing the right choice, will the relationship system link with it(which mean will some character can only be saved if protagonist is having relationship with him/her)?
7, Which one,
Nia or Maerin is the older sis? Based on their race and model is hard to tell...Also, can we build our relationship with both of them at the same time? Hated to choose one of them in the final...
8, Mind to be a spoiler to talk a little bit about
Rhesis and the last lady on the preview picture in the front page? Will they appear in ch3 and what are their role?
These are the questions for now, hope you can make a great game in the future!
btw, how come I have the strong feeling that
Eoden will die in the middle of the adventure? Well you know, the brother and friend type person, close to Alwin, most importantly the only male apart from Alwin in the harem team, I can see the dead flag standing all over his head, I am sure he will say something like marry someone or retire after this mission if this is an animate you know~
Moreover, I must say that the
Fraeda we first met is much more beautiful than the red hair tied version