VN Ren'Py Abandoned Hedwun: The Sixth Realm [Ch.1-2 Definitive] [TheSixthRealm]

[andre687s]

Fraeda is a lovely woman. The chemistry between mc and her is just special. I have never seen this in any game. And this is the first vn, renpy game, that i played with a focus, and read each and every line carefully. And biblioza, you shouldn't have killed fraeda.
music and sounds are also nice.

About Fraeda's d- (Some spoilers about the third chapter and Fraeda)

Spoiler: Fraeda

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The dev revealed an information below, and i rated the thread right away !

Good morning !

First of all, thank you for the comments,criticism, and feedback

If you havent played this game yet, then go for it, this message is for those who have completed the first two chapters, below this sentence will be A huge spoiler, well spoilers, you've been warned !

I will be brief and address some answers, then i will be away for several hours :

Spoiler: [B]Questions and Answers - Q&A[/B]

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Spoiler: Fraeda

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With this said, have a good day

 

[James009]

About Fraeda's d- (Some spoilers about the third chapter and Fraeda)

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The dev revealed an information below, and i rated the thread right away !

Thanks man

 

[PinkGoddess]

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biblioza stop making awesome characters, I see right now the red haired girl and I want make another sig with her.. hahaah

I started today the game finally, I cant play much but dude.. DAMN, awesome the quality of the game.. I think this one will gonna be one of the top games of this genre if continues for sure, PLS dont leave the game, keep it up with it pls, I make another fan sig, and this one I gonna put in my signature because the game deserves a bit of promotion, hope u like the sig bwoys

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[Paapi]

Playing with Female mc is optional ?? Any way to play only with male mc ??

 

[GrammerCop]

Engrish was not so bad, we can agree on this but just a simple error checking won't do - a lot of syntaxes are just plain wrong and they show the guy who wrote them was a) not a native English speaker and b) not a very good writer.

For a game that is aiming to be based on a strong narrative, a good translator and proofreader are a must.

Sorry..I was a bit tired. I intended to say "spell checking". I have corrected my post as well.

 

[Otomo]

what is the content of this game ?

 

[francoforte]

Playing with Female mc is optional ?? Any way to play only with male mc ??

you play only the male in this part of the game

 

[h3llonearth]

Female, Male and Multiple Protagonists. So, you play everyone in turns? Or do you choose one for one playthrough?

You play as a man apparently.

 

[Spawn420]

the english could use some proofreading work..
sometimes the auto/skip UI disappearing if you scroll back then go forward again...
most of the game I was able to skip dialogue I have never seen before even with the option unseen text skipping off.. made it kinda annoying to go back to try a different choice only to miss where you paused when trying to skip back to where you left things off...

this is turning into a really interesting story.. hope to see the next chapter soon

 

[redsling]

So do you get a choose a protagonist for the story or is it different protagonist in different arcs of the story?

 

[meinefresse1]

I rly like this one. Amazing Models, great grafics, good story, good amount of playtime. Looking forward to play the next chapter, but

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[Leobbb]

Very nice models indeed. Top quality there. I wish I could say the same about the writing, for a visual novel that lacks interactivity and has only choices writing really needs to be top quality too, but it isn't. I really hope it will improve, looking forward to see more.

 

[userrandy]

One of the tags says mind control, how prevalent is it actually in the game?

 

[Qoo-Rilla]

Fuck. A good example of how to get interest in a story to end like a wall. After Selene died, pressing CTRL began. Selene's death was the same as killing MC and the game ended there. Why download the game just because you should press CTRL. Maybe from this some dev will learn that don’t kill people who play a big role and affect the MC because the game might lose its meaning.

 

[GregIsLove]

"Hey you, You're finally awake"

 

[PeggyBlackett]

So i just went through the prolog/intro/whatever.

It seems as if it's telling me i can't play the game with the sound off.

If that's true, i'll be deleting the game once i find out for sure.

 

[andy6915]

Exhibitionism Tagged. Define exhibitionism in regards to this game, 2 minute throwaway scene, or actually significant?

 

[Zodiac1994]

So i just went through the prolog/intro/whatever.

It seems as if it's telling me i can't play the game with the sound off.

If that's true, i'll be deleting the game once i find out for sure.

You can play with sounds (and music) off. However, it does really add to the experience I feel

On more general note, I really like the VN so far - interesting story although a bit harsh sometimes . Quite a few typos here and there, but nothing 'game breaking'.

 

[Deleted member 986080]

You can play with sounds (and music) off. However, it does really add to the experience I feel
On more general note, I really like the VN so far - interesting story although a bit harsh sometimes . Quite a few typos here and there, but nothing 'game breaking'.

Kind words thank you.

I didn't take the time to proofread the 12K lines. A fixed version will be uploaded in 2 days.


"but nothing 'game breaking' ": While I agree with your point, some sentences sounded fucked up sometimes haha, and I mistyped hundreds of words. But yeah, overall it's understandable.
Being a non-native english speaker slows the process, adding to this my clumsiness when it comes to double-checking things can lead to awkward things haha.


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About the characters dying (S & F) SPOLIERS AHEAD ! (Chapter II - III spoilers)

Spoiler: Spoilers Chapter II & III

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[Deleted member 986080]

Exhibitionism Tagged. Define exhibitionism in regards to this game, 2 minute throwaway scene, or actually significant?

A single scene for now. Probably more in the future.