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Now that you mention it, it makes sense :
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Boy, if she lied, she's a ******
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- May 14, 2018
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Good morning !
First of all, thank you for the comments,criticism, and feedback
If you havent played this game yet, then go for it, this message is for those who have completed the first two chapters, below this sentence will be A huge spoiler, well spoilers, you've been warned !
I will be brief and address some answers, then i will be away for several hours :
With this said, have a good day
First of all, thank you for the comments,criticism, and feedback
If you havent played this game yet, then go for it, this message is for those who have completed the first two chapters, below this sentence will be A huge spoiler, well spoilers, you've been warned !
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Hello F95:ers (and dev if you reading this)
The game is promsing and story is OK so far, BUT it has very limited choices for the MC.
( Sorry dev, game needs more options for the VN reader. Good OR BAD choices are needed )
Let me explain:
Suggestion:
Give the VN readers MORE choices!!.....even FATAL ones.
Players who DIES in the game will still TRY the other options BUT thus feel less controlled in the Story !
The game is promsing and story is OK so far, BUT it has very limited choices for the MC.
( Sorry dev, game needs more options for the VN reader. Good OR BAD choices are needed )
Let me explain:
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Suggestion:
Give the VN readers MORE choices!!.....even FATAL ones.
Players who DIES in the game will still TRY the other options BUT thus feel less controlled in the Story !
- Apr 17, 2020
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Very good mix of fantasy and adult content. After enjoying the first 2 chapters, I look forward to how it will continue.
May I please just ask that you/anyone not tell the dev how to improve the game so that it suits your own needs.Hello F95:ers (and dev if you reading this)
The game is promsing and story is OK so far, BUT it has very limited choices for the MC.
( Sorry dev, game needs more options for the VN reader. Good OR BAD choices are needed )
Let me explain:
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Suggestion:
Give the VN readers MORE choices!!.....even FATAL ones.
Players who DIES in the game will still TRY the other options BUT thus feel less controlled in the Story !
They have a vision and it is unfair of any of us to ask them to change it.
It is their game not ours, their vision not ours, and they know where it's going while we do not!
Devs need to be bloody minded when writing, while listening to critique and complaints is both helpful and healthy, it should never sway you to change your goals and thus change the game to anothers liking becuase, I'm sad to say, it is at this point that it stops being your brainchild and you quickly lose the vision and dream that you had for it!
Christ can you imagine if DonTnod listened to everyone while making 'Life is strange?' The game would never have been released.
Not bad for a start, it shows some potential but the narrative is too slow, fragmented, and diluted with unnecessary scenes that mostly serve as fillers.
Engrish is a bit rough around the edges and the game could use a good translator & proofreader.
Alwin the MC is a bit of a wimp - pretty pathetic character to play as MC, he needs some balls.
Let's hope the next chapter will show some improvement.
Engrish is a bit rough around the edges and the game could use a good translator & proofreader.
Alwin the MC is a bit of a wimp - pretty pathetic character to play as MC, he needs some balls.
Let's hope the next chapter will show some improvement.
Engrish was not so bad, we can agree on this but just a simple error checking won't do - a lot of syntaxes are just plain wrong and they show the guy who wrote them was a) not a native English speaker and b) not a very good writer.
For a game that is aiming to be based on a strong narrative, a good translator and proofreader are a must.
- Mar 20, 2019
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I almost always mute the music in games but I'm glad I trusted the dev and left it on in this one. It added the right atmosphere.
Looking forward to what happens next.
Looking forward to what happens next.
- Jun 4, 2018
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Fraeda is a lovely woman. The chemistry between mc and her is just special. I have never seen this in any game. And this is the first vn, renpy game, that i played with a focus, and read each and every line carefully. And biblioza, you shouldn't have killed fraeda.
music and sounds are also nice.
music and sounds are also nice.
- Jun 4, 2018
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From your comment, it seems that you haven't played the game seriously. Take some time, and go through each text carefully, this game has wonderful story.
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