Played through it now... like it.
But its not the same author like the one from Haley (at least for 3/4 of the Haley game, cause iam convinced that the writer changed in the end, cause the dialogues were getting sloppy in that game in the end and way not so enjoyable), so much is clear to me. But just like Haley, i had many grins on my face... viitgames knows how to implement humor in the dialogues. And besides the fact that there are mulitple errors and wrong used phrases or words, the dialogues are just fine, correct the errors and nothing is wrong in that department. but as you can see, english is not my strong attribute either, but iam not writing stories in english... so... in this case you should get rid of the errors in the game
The renders are good, nothing exceptional but overall the same quality as in Haley...
elena is not my type though... ok iam a huge fan of readheads, but not every readhead is a turn on for me... I dont like Elenas face, eyes and lips... but its just my taste. Nothing wrong with her.
Belle looks very nice though...and she might be a brat, but despite that i like her... cant really tell why, she make me laugh and is cute. And i think most of her "bitching" is an act. Deep down i would bet she is a whole other girl. Will be fun to watch to get that girl on the surface if its well written.
I can already see good potential in that game, will wait for some more updates to decide, maybe ill revisit at fall this year? Will see...
So far, i like it, get rid of the errors and the annoying font and everything is fine. And if youre improving in the animations (Haley got some animations but they werent really good, could go without them too) this game wil be great i think.