VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Tarnish of Silver [v0.1] [Shino88]

[BlasKyau]

I hope that every character won't tell their age like that blondie guy.knowing the MC's age character is enough. also the blondie guy is tall and maybe devs can change that character has autism, why i say this because there is NO WAY a family or people close to you just let some strange guy sleep one room with a girl that you know???!!! at least there should be important things that make'em can be one room!

I assume he will be a character on the NTR path of one of the girls. I don't have the "pleasure" of meeting him. I supouse that in my game he has died horribly destroyed by demons or something similar. Very sad.

 

[Shino88]

I hope that every character won't tell their age like that blondie guy.knowing the MC's age character is enough. also the blondie guy is tall and maybe devs can change that character has autism, why i say this because there is NO WAY a family or people close to you just let some strange guy sleep one room with a girl that you know???!!! at least there should be important things that make'em can be one room!

Yup. It doesn't make since like you said, but if I tell you anymore about it, it'll spoil stuff up ahead. All I can say is: there is an explanation.

 

[Deleted member 254042]

I assume he will be a character on the NTR path of one of the girls. I don't have the "pleasure" of meeting him. I supouse that in my game he has died horribly destroyed by demons or something similar. Very sad.

little spoiler, if u don't do amber NTR path. when u have a change to help this yellowhead with 1 of ur girl, the girl just have an eye for him like love for the first sight. which is ok. but when she wants him to be in her room... NO, i mean it's ok but why would the whole family just agree with her?! which is absurd. eventhough th MC said "NO" but step mother just say "oh c'mon she already adult enough to have sex toy in her room". that's all that i can tell. the rest NTR still great for me...

 

[Deleted member 254042]

Yup. It doesn't make since like you said, but if I tell you anymore about it, it'll spoil stuff up ahead. All I can say is: there is an explanation.

Thank you for the answer. i hope u can continue this work. really love this. just go wild but i still hate linda and the others just agree with amber...

 

[Shino88]

Oh and, this need mind control and corruption tag. This game sorta centering around them.
One small question :

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I think a mind control-ish aspect in games like these is really necessary. Because, they've been living together for years. Why in the fuck would their relationships start taking these turns just a few days ago? It'd only make since if something like mind control was introduced.
You can expect handjobs, kissing, vanilla and softcore and mostly teasing stuff for the mc with the girls for the next couple of updates, after that, it might start getting somewhat kinky. as for the femdom and NTR routes, it'll be a little faster to get into the real thing I guess.

 

[Shino88]

Thank you for the answer. i hope u can continue this work. really love this. just go wild but i still hate linda and the others just agree with amber...

Yeah and it's understandable. Feel free to point out any plot holes you find please. If anything, it'll help me improve my work.

 

[Shino88]

Didn't think my posts were causing problems. But, what tf ever.

Huh? They aren't at all.

 

[BlasKyau]

little spoiler, if u don't do amber NTR path. when u have a change to help this yellowhead with 1 of ur girl, the girl just have an eye for him like love for the first sight. which is ok. but when she wants him to be in her room... NO, i mean it's ok but why would the whole family just agree with her?! which is absurd. eventhough th MC said "NO" but step mother just say "oh c'mon she already adult enough to have sex toy in her room". that's all that i can tell. the rest NTR still absurd but ok for me...

As I'm not going to do the NTR route, the spoiler doesn't affect me much.

The harem (love) paths, which are the only one I'm going to do, are looking good to me, but to find out definitely it's better to wait to see the next updates.

The only thing that doesn't convince me is that 25% of LIs (for now) have only domination / submission path. I guess I'll have to use the appropriate button to skip about a quarter of the sexual scenes of the game.

 

[Chris2041]

I think a mind control-ish aspect in games like these is really necessary. Because, they've been living together for years. Why in the fuck would their relationships start taking these turns just a few days ago? It'd only make since if something like mind control was introduced.
You can expect handjobs, kissing, vanilla and softcore and mostly teasing stuff for the mc with the girls for the next couple of updates, after that, it might start getting somewhat kinky. as for the femdom and NTR routes, it'll be a little faster to get into the real thing I guess.

i onl

I think a mind control-ish aspect in games like these is really necessary. Because, they've been living together for years. Why in the fuck would their relationships start taking these turns just a few days ago? It'd only make since if something like mind control was introduced.
You can expect handjobs, kissing, vanilla and softcore and mostly teasing stuff for the mc with the girls for the next couple of updates, after that, it might start getting somewhat kinky. as for the femdom and NTR routes, it'll be a little faster to get into the real thing I guess.

i hope it isnt to slow one thing that i dont understand in these types of games why in the loves path everithing has to be so slow but in the NTR paths the girls inmediatly fuck the bad guys Whyyyyyy is not more normal to fuck somebody that you already like than someone that you just know in the street and you dont know him and maybe is an asshole or a killer
it dosnt seem natural to me , i get that you are going whit the slow inocent MC gettin more kinky .
i hope it dosnt get to slow in the harem path is what im saying here .
so far in the love path you only get a kiss and in the NTR path the bad guys get a free blowjob
if this is the case in gonna wait a lot to the game get updates in the harem path .
Good luck whit your game , and sorry for my bad english

 

[Deleted member 254042]

Yeah and it's understandable. Feel free to point out any plot holes you find please. If anything, it'll help me improve my work.

well, i say it now.
first: who is Mr.Blake? Is he a teacher? or maybe uncle? uncle will be great though
second: the choice when we go to Blake room, does it need to be choosing between "blake in his room" or "blake is not in his room"?? . how about when the MC going into his room but the mc know that blake is in there with someone and then mc can choose between "just enter the room" or "wait for him to get out" if mc choose "wait for him.." blake will get out then MC will enter the room and will see linda was drinking a milk (if you know what i mean)

 

[Deleted member 254042]

i onl

i hope it isnt to slow one thing that i dont understand in these types of games why in the loves path everithing has to be so slow but in the NTR paths the girls inmediatly fuck the bad guys Whyyyyyy is not more normal to fuck somebody that you already like than someone that you just know in the street and you dont know him and maybe is an asshole or a killer
it dosnt seem natural to me , i get that you are going whit the slow inocent MC gettin more kinky .
i hope it dosnt get to slow in the harem path is what im saying here .
so far in the love path you only get a kiss and in the NTR path the bad guys get a free blowjob
if this is the case in gonna wait a lot to the game get updates in the harem path .
Good luck whit your game , and sorry for my bad english

"in the NTR paths the girls inmediatly fuck the bad guys Whyyyyyy" like shino88 sensei said they were trapped for a year( and they must be wanting sum gud fuck). also that MC fault because choose to drug the whole school with the drug from blake.

also my thought why the yellowhead and blake can have their "D" got sucked by the girls is because the guys already confeess to them before MC can get on em(always happen on most NTR games). the MC also still can't believe if the drug actually work so he waits. and MC can't just say want sum sex with the girls because as you can see "The Girls" are people who close with the MC and if he say that and drug not really work, the MC will got embrassed and can't get his hand on them. So like a protagonist the Mc just need to take it slow so he can get his "D" on them.

 

[Chris2041]

"in the NTR paths the girls inmediatly fuck the bad guys Whyyyyyy" like shino88 sensei said they were trapped for a year( and they must be wanting sum gud fuck). also that MC fault because choose to drug the whole school with the drug from blake.

also my thought why the yellowhead and blake can have their "D" got sucked by the girls is because the guys already confeess to them before MC can get on em(always happen on most NTR games). the MC also still can't believe if the drug actually work so he waits. and MC can't just say want sum sex with the girls because as you can see "The Girls" are people who close with the MC and if he say that and drug not really work, the MC will got embrassed and can't get his hand on them. So like a protagonist the Mc just need to take it slow so he can get his "D" on them.

I don't know you but in a postapocalictic world where are demons and people get killed I don't wanna fuck somebody I know That day but ok
I Dont really have a problem whit what you say I only hope the harem path is too slow I see some games that in the love path only get a hand job and in the NTR path the girls are already getting gangbanged I hope this isn't the case I want to see action and kinky shit on both paths
I sorry if I sound rude in the last comment

 

[Shino88]

i onl

i hope it isnt to slow one thing that i dont understand in these types of games why in the loves path everithing has to be so slow but in the NTR paths the girls inmediatly fuck the bad guys Whyyyyyy is not more normal to fuck somebody that you already like than someone that you just know in the street and you dont know him and maybe is an asshole or a killer
it dosnt seem natural to me , i get that you are going whit the slow inocent MC gettin more kinky .
i hope it dosnt get to slow in the harem path is what im saying here .
so far in the love path you only get a kiss and in the NTR path the bad guys get a free blowjob
if this is the case in gonna wait a lot to the game get updates in the harem path .
Good luck whit your game , and sorry for my bad english

Thanks, Christ.
Okay, here's my explanation for my approach in this game in terms of pacing each route (Might get bored while reading):
I think the best part of a 1guy getting a girl (or girls) path without any ntr or kinks is the slow development or sort of corruption that happens along the way, I personally find most games with this kind of route (specially ones with relationships that are morally wrong) very enjoyable, until the mc has totally got the girl and can do what ever he wants with her. That's when I usually stop playing. It's just a couple's normal sex life. You can find it on pornhub without having to sit for a couple of hours playing a game and picking options. (For example: DMD. It was very enjoyable for me at first, but once they became a couple and the game simply stuck to vanilla only stuff, it was so boring I left it. I only went on playing after that because of the promise of new stuff, like those sharing and bdsm points, but I never got any of that.)

As for the NTR path, building up an ntr relationship slowly is nice, I don't find it obligatory, but it's a plus. And the most significant feature that affects it's pacing is that the relationship is not morally wrong at all, if the relationships are left to default, the characters lived with the mc their whole lives and they shouldn't sexualize each other at all, which can't be said about say, Linda and Blake. Which makes their relationship easier to develop.

 

[Deleted member 254042]

I don't know you but in a postapocalictic world where are demons and people get killed I don't wanna fuck somebody I know That day but ok
I Dont really have a problem whit what you say I only hope the harem path is too slow I see some games that in the love path only get a hand job and in the NTR path the girls are already getting gangbanged I hope this isn't the case I want to see action and kinky shit on both paths
I sorry if I sound rude in the last comment

You are not rude dude. don't think about the slow harem path just think what will happen to the mc at the good building harem path in the future. in real life people who do ntr always get what they want fast but in the end lost what they got faster.

 

[BlasKyau]

I think a mind control-ish aspect in games like these is really necessary. Because, they've been living together for years. Why in the fuck would their relationships start taking these turns just a few days ago? It'd only make since if something like mind control was introduced.
You can expect handjobs, kissing, vanilla and softcore and mostly teasing stuff for the mc with the girls for the next couple of updates, after that, it might start getting somewhat kinky. as for the femdom and NTR routes, it'll be a little faster to get into the real thing I guess.

I'm not a big fan of mind control. It all depends of how you develop it, but much times is something that, in my opinion, not really fits in the games that I usually like (romance). But we will see in the next updates.

 

[Badjourasmix]

Some people already said this and I think this theory might be right; the reason why things move so fast with the blonde guy and amber is because he is probably a demon and has some kind of mind control power. I've said this in another thread, ntr routes are like playing online games with cheaters, they don't care about the consequences so they can do whatever they want to reach their objective. That is why things with them move so fast. The mcs in these games where they have familial relationships with the girls, they can't really advance things that fast because those characters will have reservations about starting a sexual relationship that they wouldn't have with other characters that aren't related to them.

 

[Deleted member 254042]

Thanks, Christ.
Okay, here's my explanation for my approach in this game in terms of pacing each route (Might get bored while reading):
I think the best part of a 1guy getting a girl (or girls) path without any ntr or kinks is the slow development or sort of corruption that happens along the way, I personally find most games with this kind of route (specially ones with relationships that are morally wrong) very enjoyable, until the mc has totally got the girl and can do what ever he wants with her. That's when I usually stop playing. It's just a couple's normal sex life. You can find it on pornhub without having to sit for a couple of hours playing a game and picking options. (For example: DMD. It was very enjoyable for me at first, but once they became a couple and the game simply stuck to vanilla only stuff, it was so boring I left it. I only went on playing after that because of the promise of new stuff, like those sharing and bdsm points, but I never got any of that.)

As for the NTR path, building up an ntr relationship slowly is nice, I don't find it obligatory, but it's a plus. And the most significant feature that affects it's pacing is that the relationship is not morally wrong at all, if the relationships are left to default, the characters lived with the mc their whole lives and they shouldn't sexualize each other at all, which can't be said about say, Linda and Blake. Which makes their relationship easier to develop.

It may be out of topic but i hope u can put sandbox at the end of the game so we can pick the girl and talking to the them, not a boring repeatable gallery. and if we pick ntr path we can take a peek at what the girls and ntr guy doing.

 

[Chris2041]

Thanks, Christ.
Okay, here's my explanation for my approach in this game in terms of pacing each route (Might get bored while reading):
I think the best part of a 1guy getting a girl (or girls) path without any ntr or kinks is the slow development or sort of corruption that happens along the way, I personally find most games with this kind of route (specially ones with relationships that are morally wrong) very enjoyable, until the mc has totally got the girl and can do what ever he wants with her. That's when I usually stop playing. It's just a couple's normal sex life. You can find it on pornhub without having to sit for a couple of hours playing a game and picking options. (For example: DMD. It was very enjoyable for me at first, but once they became a couple and the game simply stuck to vanilla only stuff, it was so boring I left it. I only went on playing after that because of the promise of new stuff, like those sharing and bdsm points, but I never got any of that.)

As for the NTR path, building up an ntr relationship slowly is nice, I don't find it obligatory, but it's a plus. And the most significant feature that affects it's pacing is that the relationship is not morally wrong at all, if the relationships are left to default, the characters lived with the mc their whole lives and they shouldn't sexualize each other at all, which can't be said about say, Linda and Blake. Which makes their relationship easier to develop.

ok i like that but why when you get the girl it has to be only vanilla stuff
other thing that can be good is that in NTR path you can enter in a revenge path where you take back the girls and start being very dominant whit them .
sorry if i was being rude i dont want this to become another queen opala where you have to wait 10 updates to the MC gettin something that game really get me mad ......
one way that in harem path can be making more faster is if you can bring a guy back home, you also can bring a girl and since you dont know her you donst have the problem like the others girls of being to slow because you dont have any relationship whit them .
well to much text i hope it goes well whit the game and both paths are good . sorry for my english have a good day

 

[Chris2041]

Some people already said this and I think this theory might be right; the reason why things move so fast with the blonde guy and amber is because he is probably a demon and has some kind of mind control power. I've said this in another thread, ntr routes are like playing online games with cheaters, they don't care about the consequences so they can do whatever they want to reach their objective. That is why things with them move so fast. The mcs in these games where they have familial relationships with the girls, they can't really advance things that fast because those characters will have reservations about starting a sexual relationship that they wouldn't have with other characters that aren't related to them.

Ok if this is the case that would be really cool weell only the next update can tell

 

[Shino88]

It may be out of topic but i hope u can put sandbox at the end of the game so we can pick the girl and talking to the them, not a boring repeatable gallery. and if we pick ntr path we can take a peek at what the girls and ntr guy doing.

Yeah, if all goes well, there will be a gallery and behind the scenes NTR events in the upcoming builds.