VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Tutor [v1.1] [c.Shadow]

[c.Shadow]

will there be more updates , am loving this game wish there was more

Oooow really thank you very much, these comments make me more motivated to give 100% of myself!!

I do not promise anything but I hope this month to release the continuation and I will give you a sample of the sandbox that I made so that you can tell me your comments.

 

[c.Shadow]

Unlike most people, I prefer to leave the default names, which in this case is none. For the MC name I have used the same one that the MC has in another game I am playing, and for the last name the following name that has appeared in the conversation. For the stepdaughter the first female name that has appeared in that same game. And for the wife the following. I'm tired of naming. So the daughter is called 1 and if I have to name more, the next one will be 2 and so on ad infinitum.

They are only the family that you can give them their name... all the other characters will have a default name... I am also looking at putting the default name to the family, but the truth is that I would not like to do it because I want everyone to become attached to the family in their own way.

And in the end give them that happiness or that guilt because they have named the characters that name.

I think that the name has one n more:

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Also, that first option is the only one I like.

I didn't like the stepdaughter. If she can only be controlled my interest in her is absolutely nil. Actually I prefer much more to convince her mother to kick her out of the house and never see her again.

Thank you very much for telling me about that error, if you see more please tell me so that I can make the change before the next update.

And from the stepdaughter I plan to do everything except kick her out of the house, as I said before, she is the key for everything to start

 

[TheDick69+]

Liked the start, will give a review after some more updates. Still some points, a proof reader would be good, even if I've seen cases of much worse Engrish. Here it's not difficult to understand, just a annoyance (and then i'm not a native English speaking person). Then as been noticed before, good looking women and bad looking men. It would have been better not to show the MC at all.

Keep up the good work Dev!

 

[c.Shadow]

Liked the start, will give a review after some more updates. Still some points, a proof reader would be good, even if I've seen cases of much worse Engrish. Here it's not difficult to understand, just a annoyance (and then i'm not a native English speaking person). Then as been noticed before, good looking women and bad looking men. It would have been better not to show the MC at all.

Keep up the good work Dev!

Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked this prologue, I'll be happy to read you again in the following updates.

I am reviewing the English part a lot, I am not a native speaker either, but I am helping myself with some courses.

Hahaha, I chose that MC more than anything because I needed someone who looks old and tired and who shows that he has experience in life, I also want his face to be seen to better understand his moods since I want to denote how this suffers and changes in the passing of history...

But well... I thank you again for having played this prologue and I hope you like the following updates.

 

[YogSothoth1982]

They are only the family that you can give them their name... all the other characters will have a default name... I am also looking at putting the default name to the family, but the truth is that I would not like to do it because I want everyone to become attached to the family in their own way.

And in the end give them that happiness or that guilt because they have named the characters that name.

Well, I don't have any game save, so probably the name will be asdf ñlkj for the MC and 1, 2 and 3 for the wife, the daughter and stepdaughter. asdf is a name that I use a lot when I'm forced to name a MC. I don't usually have to name girls, so numbering them seems like a great option. Although if I have another game open when I play again, I might use whatever name the MC has in that game, and use the first 3 female names that appear in it as names for the mother, daughter, and stepdaughter. We'll see when it happens.

It's nothing personal, it's that I prefer to have pre-established names since I never know what name to put (no, I have never used my name for the MC of any game, and I will never do it)

And from the stepdaughter I plan to do everything except kick her out of the house, as I said before, she is the key for everything to start

Ok, as long as there aren't any forced sex scenes with her. I can accept the MC making her life miserable, and even torturing or blackmailing her, as long as we can avoid all her sex scenes.

Like the example you gave, if I plan for there to be decision events that have their consequences, both in the course of the plot and in the ending.

In my case I will not prostitute the LIs. However, if it has negative consequences in the course of the plot, there is a 100% chance that I will not continue the game after it. And if it's going to have negative consequences for the ending, I'd rather know because I'd rather see no ending than see a bad ending.

 

[Look-see]

Just saw your patreon post. and 3 things.

1. i'd avoid mentioning anything Loli related on there as that could probably get the hammer brought down on you fast if Patreon takes notice.

2. i dont think you're supposed to post images with nudity on a public post for the same reason. usually those posts require them to be locked at least to the lowest tier.

3. gave that Hentai a shot and the Animation style annoyed me the most and not really any good angles

 

[redbear76]

Just saw your patreon post. and 3 things.

1. i'd avoid mentioning anything Loli related on there as that could probably get the hammer brought down on you fast if Patreon takes notice.

2. i dont think you're supposed to post images with nudity on a public post for the same reason. usually those posts require them to be locked at least to the lowest tier.

3. gave that Hentai a shot and the Animation style annoyed me the most and not really any good angles

It seems Patreon catch him :-(

 

[DarkDank]

Sad to see its under review.
Subscribestar?

 

[redbear76]

Sad to see its under review.
Subscribestar?

he hasn't I try to suggest to him.

 

[c.Shadow]

Just saw your patreon post. and 3 things.

1. i'd avoid mentioning anything Loli related on there as that could probably get the hammer brought down on you fast if Patreon takes notice.

2. i dont think you're supposed to post images with nudity on a public post for the same reason. usually those posts require them to be locked at least to the lowest tier.

3. gave that Hentai a shot and the Animation style annoyed me the most and not really any good angles

Thank you very much for your advice, the truth is that if I happen to publish those posts that have already suspended my account, I am looking at how I can enable it again and I will be careful to see what I upload
And about hentai, it's good that you've seen it, I think the same that its angles are very exaggerated but what I most wanted you to notice is the idea of what is going to happen in the bar as in the schools in my novel is very similar not to say the same...

BUT ANYWAY!
The good news is that I already have version 1.1 ready
today I wanted to publish it on patreon but since my account is suspended we will have to wait, but by September 17 it will be for the public!!

 

[c.Shadow]

It seems Patreon catch him :-(

That happens to me for wanting to pass the law...

Sad to see its under review.
Subscribestar?

I'm already seeing how to recover the account u.u
I don't know how this platform is but I'll be investigating, what do you think should I make an account there?

 

[Libita]

Subscribestar is where people move when they get into trouble with Patreon. Happens more often than you'd think, basically every mind control game. So I would advise to move there. You can still try to get your Patreon account working. But even if you manage to do that, this can happen again pretty easily, so it's always useful to have an alternative set up.

I have no experience with the platform itself, but as I said, Subscribestar is basically where everyone moves if they go off Patreon.

 

[c.Shadow]

Subscribestar is where people move when they get into trouble with Patreon. Happens more often than you'd think, basically every mind control game. So I would advise to move there. You can still try to get your Patreon account working. But even if you manage to do that, this can happen again pretty easily, so it's always useful to have an alternative set up.

I have no experience with the platform itself, but as I said, Subscribestar is basically where everyone moves if they go off Patreon.

I was able to recover my patreon account...
But I also already made a SubscribeStar account to have it as a backup, but what I don't know is if I can upload loli content there (which was the reason why I was suspended from Patreon) or should I also be careful with that type of content.

 

[YogSothoth1982]

I was able to recover my patreon account...
But I also already made a SubscribeStar account to have it as a backup, but what I don't know is if I can upload loli content there (which was the reason why I was suspended from Patreon) or should I also be careful with that type of content.

As far as I know in Subscribestar you won't have problems with that type of content.

 

[DarkDank]

I was able to recover my patreon account...
But I also already made a SubscribeStar account to have it as a backup, but what I don't know is if I can upload loli content there (which was the reason why I was suspended from Patreon) or should I also be careful with that type of content.

Substar you should be okay, but I still wouldn't advetise it front and center. But should be fine.

 

[c.Shadow]

As far as I know in Subscribestar you won't have problems with that type of content.

Substar you should be okay, but I still wouldn't advetise it front and center. But should be fine.

Thanks, I'll think about whether to upload that content to networks or just leave it in the game so that this problem of being suspended doesn't happen again....

But anyway, wait for September 17 when I will release version 1.1 to the public, for the time being I will only share it on patreon to respect the patrons

I also thank you all for your support!

 

[DarkDank]

Thanks, I'll think about whether to upload that content to networks or just leave it in the game so that this problem of being suspended doesn't happen again....

But anyway, wait for September 17 when I will release version 1.1 to the public, for the time being I will only share it on patreon to respect the patrons

I also thank you all for your support!

If you want a place to post teaser Loli images, a pixiv could work.
Can't link to it on Patreon but having a link on Twitter should be okay.
Just link to the Pixiv itself and not the particular image in question.

 

[Look-see]

And about hentai, it's good that you've seen it, I think the same that its angles are very exaggerated but what I most wanted you to notice is the idea of what is going to happen in the bar as in the schools in my novel is very similar not to say the same...

personally i like the "Saimin Seishidou" series in regards to the Mind control theme and technically corruption. the fat/ugly bastard tag i could do without though

 

[c.Shadow]

Substar you should be okay, but I still wouldn't advetise it front and center. But should be fine.

But do you think there is no problem with uploading loli doing lewd things?
I was thinking of occupying my DeviantArt account or the Akiwara to upload that content and just share the link so you can enter to see my patreons and soon Subscribers...

I also don't want to be using many platforms so it doesn't get messy if you want to see such content you have to go to this page and so, if not, I want to centralize my content and I was thinking of using Discord by levels to share the normal content and the lascivious

 

[c.Shadow]

personally i like the "Saimin Seishidou" series in regards to the Mind control theme and technically corruption. the fat/ugly bastard tag i could do without though

oof! I loved that series...especially the second one, the girl looks like No.18 from Dragon Ball!

And in my series I won't have fat/ugly bastard as the main character, but they will appear in case the main character wants to share his harem