As the renders from the new update shows us again, our friendly family cuckold fiance is again trying to show of his GF and makes hobos jerks off to her. 
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Would you please stop posting content from my Patreon site here. This content is for Patrons only. I already produce a free, Public version of my game, why do you have to take the private stuff too? Stealing other people's work is not cool!
I don't steal anything, I transmit the updates about the development of your project to people who are interested in your project, not the content of your project. People pay you to be able to download and play your game, not to read the emails you send about the current stage of development.
But fine, it is your choice to think like this and you are free to do so. I'll stop posting anything regarding your game and I hope you'll catch every nasty stealer
But fine, it is your choice to think like this and you are free to do so. I'll stop posting anything regarding your game and I hope you'll catch every nasty stealer
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Story is nice and the art is good, i especially like the normal sized girl MC in a ntr game, you are probably the second to do this with the original maker of "corrupting jennifer" (even the remake now gave her a double D).
You should stop adding sex scene and story for now and focus on spellcheking and expending a lot the text everywhere on your game, you are moving too fast between scenes with little text that sometimes are provoking plotholes, like when MC tell her boyfriend that she had tips and the boyfriend don't question or mention if she work on a restaurant or something. Not once did she tell him where she was working before that and you missed a way to make him jalous and being petty.
You should stop adding sex scene and story for now and focus on spellcheking and expending a lot the text everywhere on your game, you are moving too fast between scenes with little text that sometimes are provoking plotholes, like when MC tell her boyfriend that she had tips and the boyfriend don't question or mention if she work on a restaurant or something. Not once did she tell him where she was working before that and you missed a way to make him jalous and being petty.
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Firstly, thank you for agreeing to stop; I appreciate that. Secondly, I must correct you when you say people don't pay for the updates; the regular updates are a Patron perk; they are private, for Patrons only.
However, you have made me wonder whether you realized these were for Patrons only? If not, then I apologize for being so shirty. Hopefully, we are both the wiser.
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Thanks for the advice. Actually, in your example, Amy does tell Dave about the job (when they meet after shopping before she goes for the trial run), but I take your point.
I can understand using a "loveScore" value as a win/lose condition in a game, but what is it actually supposed to represent? The game hints that it's Dave's love for Amy (cause he says so at the beginning), but judging by the way the value fluctuates throughout the story, I'd say the changes to this value are totally arbitrary.
Considering that the value represents "Dave's love for Amy", I can understand why the value increases when she complies with his lewd requests, but how is it possible that the value decreases when:
- Amy chooses to do something lewd for money when Dave isn't even present.
- Amy is forced to participate in something lewd (e.g. she gets raped), when Dave isn't even present.
Makes absolutely no sense. Not only because Dave wouldn't know about it, but also because, if he knew, as a fucking cuck who loves to see his GF being groped and abused, he would actually be pretty happy about it. Not to mention that "his love" decreases when they run out of money (i.e. Amy keeps refusing to do lewd stuff), I'd imagine he would be twice as happy about it. It would only make sense if this value only decreases when Amy refuses to comply with Dave's lewd requests or when she gets into an argument with him etc.
If it's NOT "Dave's love for Amy" contrary to what the game tells us, and the value is supposed to represent "Amy's love", or the "mutual love", things would make even less sense.
It's currently best to set this value to something high and then go through the story without worrying about it.
Considering that the value represents "Dave's love for Amy", I can understand why the value increases when she complies with his lewd requests, but how is it possible that the value decreases when:
- Amy chooses to do something lewd for money when Dave isn't even present.
- Amy is forced to participate in something lewd (e.g. she gets raped), when Dave isn't even present.
Makes absolutely no sense. Not only because Dave wouldn't know about it, but also because, if he knew, as a fucking cuck who loves to see his GF being groped and abused, he would actually be pretty happy about it. Not to mention that "his love" decreases when they run out of money (i.e. Amy keeps refusing to do lewd stuff), I'd imagine he would be twice as happy about it. It would only make sense if this value only decreases when Amy refuses to comply with Dave's lewd requests or when she gets into an argument with him etc.
If it's NOT "Dave's love for Amy" contrary to what the game tells us, and the value is supposed to represent "Amy's love", or the "mutual love", things would make even less sense.
It's currently best to set this value to something high and then go through the story without worrying about it.
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You are overthinking it. The dev just wanted to add a mechanic to instill a sense of risk if you act too depraved during the day.
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Try thinking of it from Amy's point of view. It's what she believes is happening to their relationship. If she does something bad, then she believes it corrodes their relationship. If she does something that seems to make Dave happy, then she believes it makes the relationship stronger. When she contributes money, she believes she's investing in their future together. You are right, this isn't particularly realistic or logical, but as Acquiesce46 says, it's just a game mechanism and this is supposed to be just an entertaining fantasy game, not real life. Hopefully, you can still enjoy it.
Still makes no sense, cause even if the "love score" represents "Amy's view" on their relationship, the game only takes Amy's actions into account, not Dave's, even when she's clearly displeased by them.
- Amy thinks she's done something bad -> reduce love score.
- Amy thinks Dave's done something bad -> love score remain unaffected, as long as she doesn't react badly.
And why would her view on their relationship be negatively impacted when, for instance, she gets sexually abused?
It also doesn't make any sense to use the value this way to determine a win/lose (i.e. break up) condition. She may be thinking "I believe I have failed to make Dave happy so that means it's game over for us.", but what about what Dave thinks of it?
It also fails to explain why Dave says "I love you this much" (referring to initial love score of 5) at the beginning? Clearly, Dave is the one who determines the initial love score, not her, at least that's what the game implies.
If she's stupid enough to believe that swallowing some other guy's jiz or sucking some other guy's dick is what makes Dave happy, then why would she have a problem doing that kind of thing even when he's not around? She'd think it would make him happy, particularly if she believes she's investing in their future together (i.e. doing it for money)? And also, what about when Dave spends the money irresponsibly? Why doesn't that negatively affect "her view" on their relationship?
Whether it's realistic or not isn't important, my main complaint is that it's inconsistent and because of that, it becomes quite annoying. I'd most definitely enjoy the story more, if it didn't try to be a pseudo game and just be content with being a story with branching paths. It makes no sense to end the story abruptly cause the MC has done too many lewd things, this is a porn game after all. There's nothing entertaining about being forced to avoid porn, in a porn game.
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A good week: 55+ renders done. I'm a little ahead on render-count, but a little behind on the story.
Still need to find some music for the evening event, and the cartoon is going to be harder than usual. However, with a couple of days to go I should be finished in time for early release on Nov 1st.
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I personally appreciate the share of this information, but I will let you know the dev kind of went off the last poster to share the update news. It's a page or two back.
Take the info however you will