VN Ren'Py Abandoned Their Beautiful World - Divinity [v0.1.1] [Bright Sun Studios]

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Guygee

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That's one of the reasons I choose a fantasy world over real history. I'm no historian (even though I know quite a bit about the Ancient Greek) and I want freedom over my stories. Lots of stuff is certainly inspired by real Greek myths like Icarus and Pygmalion and such though. If you know the stories, you'll probably recognize my versions of them.

Also... isn't Wonder Woman an Amazon? I don't really watch/read DC, but I'm pretty sure she isn't Greek or Roman, right?
I'm liking your thinking a whole lot. I'm a keen student of history and majored in the classical and Homeric periods. Very keen to see how this develops, especially if the sex content becomes sophisticated and erotic (as opposed to perfunctory and merely pornographic. I've written in the genre so feel free to start a Conversation if the mood takes you.

From memory the Theseus legend has him married to Hippolyta (IIRC), Queen of the Amazons, though it didn't end well. So it may be a stretch to WonderWoman but the link is there...

Good luck with your work, I hope & expect it'll be appreciated.
 

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I tried to included a few NPCs as possible so that you don't constantly think 'hey, that's an AC character'.
a little tip: when i want screenshots from a game free of npcs, take a couple in short intervals then simply copy paste from one to the other and cover up the npcs, naturally that wouldnt work for some of the busier parts in the ac games but for smaller areas its a nice and simple technique.

and i think something bugged out because i couldnt level past 10, so i used console to set level back to 1 every so often in order to keep earning skillpoints, and maybe it was because of that tampering mc was not able to get off more than one shot despite the upgrades, also i only spent 1 point to keep from shooting too fast but as a result the stamina ran out too fast instead(which was upgraded to max) and if i wanted mc to get off as well i couldnt spend any stamina on the fancy sex techniques

as always with your games im excited to see where it will go and i think its great you can play as futa this time around, hope you get to chase after futas too in the future
 

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I just posted a patch for the game (version 0.1.1) that fixes a few bugs. See the OP and you can download the patch from there
 

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a little tip: when i want screenshots from a game free of npcs, take a couple in short intervals then simply copy paste from one to the other and cover up the npcs, naturally that wouldnt work for some of the busier parts in the ac games but for smaller areas its a nice and simple technique.

and i think something bugged out because i couldnt level past 10, so i used console to set level back to 1 every so often in order to keep earning skillpoints, and maybe it was because of that tampering mc was not able to get off more than one shot despite the upgrades, also i only spent 1 point to keep from shooting too fast but as a result the stamina ran out too fast instead(which was upgraded to max) and if i wanted mc to get off as well i couldnt spend any stamina on the fancy sex techniques

as always with your games im excited to see where it will go and i think its great you can play as futa this time around, hope you get to chase after futas too in the future
That level bug is indeed kind of weird. I myself went to level 16 without issue and I've heard of someone going to level 22 without problems. If someone else encounters it too, I'll look into it.

Also, balance during sex scenes is something that still needs to looked at. It was way worse during development, but it still isn't perfect. Future versions will improve that, so don't worry
 

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so im very curious about something with this game

now i have a huge interest for games that allows alternate clothing as this game seems to plan so here is my question

i know the game is still rather early but are there alternate clothing in the game now or is that something planned for later and as such do you have a somewhat rough idea of when that would be a plan you can share

and lastly what kind of clothing are we talking about ? are we talking full costume sets or being able to choose parts individually like pants(or whatever style of clothes is used in this world) and chest part separately ?
 

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so im very curious about something with this game

now i have a huge interest for games that allows alternate clothing as this game seems to plan so here is my question

i know the game is still rather early but are there alternate clothing in the game now or is that something planned for later and as such do you have a somewhat rough idea of when that would be a plan you can share

and lastly what kind of clothing are we talking about ? are we talking full costume sets or being able to choose parts individually like pants(or whatever style of clothes is used in this world) and chest part separately ?
At the moment there are 4 different outfits in the game. They don't change anything visually though as you only actually see the MC during sex scenes when he/she isn't wearing clothes. At the moment it's really only a stat increasing thing like armor in most RPG. I don't have plans to change the way outfits work at the moment, but that can always change somewhere down the development timeline
 

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That level bug is indeed kind of weird. I myself went to level 16 with issue and I've heard of someone going to level 22 without problems. If someone else encounters it too, I'll look into it.

Also, balance during sex scenes is something that still needs to looked at. It was way worse during development, but it still isn't perfect. Future versions will improve that, so don't worry
im not worried, you havent disappointed me yet with any of your games, im confident you wont this time either
 
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Fixes the bug where you start with way too much money
And here I was thinking it was an intended feature as some sort of test lol
Great game by the way
Also don't know if any one has reported this but some times talking to Josephine during her intro causes crashes.
 

Aces_high69

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This new patch only works if you start a new game ?Because josaphine is still got script error sometimes when speaking to her and the orphanage has too .I got a horrible feeling the answer is yes and i have to start a new game :frown: ,i was level 68 ,yes i had nothing to do so played this for erm well all day lol :FeelsBadMan:
I know sad ,but i really wanted to get sex stats to max and i did :eek:penedeyewink:
Also how many players can u have sex with so far? is it 5? mother sister and 3 at lost virgin orphanage?
I agree with others too,YOU should un fix that money bug u and put that back ,how am i going to feed all those kids at the orphanage without that money ?:p lol
 

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This new patch only works if you start a new game ?Because josaphine is still got script error sometimes when speaking to her and the orphanage has too .I got a horrible feeling the answer is yes and i have to start a new game :frown: ,i was level 68 ,yes i had nothing to do so played this for erm well all day lol :FeelsBadMan:
I know sad ,but i really wanted to get sex stats to max and i did :eek:penedeyewink:
Also how many players can u have sex with so far? is it 5? mother sister and 3 at lost virgin orphanage?
I agree with others too,YOU should un fix that money bug u and put that back ,how am i going to feed all those kids at the orphanage without that money ?:p lol
Making money is supposed to be a part of the gameplay. But Josephine is the main source of income, so... I suppose whatever is troubling your with her should be fixed. You shouldn't need a new save though.

Can you upload your save here? Then I can take a look at what is going wrong

Also, when running into a script error, place post the crash log here instead of saying 'oh, the game crashed at this and this point'. The crash log usually shows me what's actually going wrong, so that really helps me

Lastly, if both of these are still bugs in your game, you might have installed the patch incorrectly. But if you post a crash log, I can see if it's another bug or not
 

Aces_high69

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i'm pretty bad when it comes to uploading saves or not even sure how to take screen shots to show the script errors ,soo sorry if i come across abit stupid here thats probably because i am when it comes to that :idontcare:but how would i do that?:FeelsBadMan:
 

Aces_high69

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at the moment i should add i just clicked ignore and it went to the next page so it wasn't game breaking and i got paid so it never bothered me
 

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i'm pretty bad when it comes to uploading saves or not even sure how to take screen shots to show the script errors ,soo sorry if i come across abit stupid here thats probably because i am when it comes to that :idontcare:but how would i do that?:FeelsBadMan:
When the game crashes, you get various options at the bottom of the screen such as 'Ignore' and 'Rollback' and such. One of those should be 'Copy' click on that and the entire crash log should be copied to your clipboard. Simply paste it here and I can take a look at it
 

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Also how many players can u have sex with so far? is it 5? mother sister and 3 at lost virgin orphanage?
Yes, that's them all. Originally I had planned to include Livia as well as a sex partner in version 0.1, but she eventually became a much slower building character (because she's much more reserved sexually than Fivae or Sivenne). So her story simply isn't far enough yet to open up sex with her
 

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Another Bright Sun game ? sweet, I'll look into it once I shorten my backlog of games... Your the creator of Blooming Love right ? Loved that game despite not being into Yuri myself, I thought the story was cute, I just wish we had gotten a small glimpse of the baby-sister/daughter in the ending... (she was a teen by the very end right ? they mentioned her taking the hotter older sister's vibe right ?).
 

Aces_high69

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Sorry for wasted posts as i had just restarted pc and went to do what u showed me and now both are fixed now but i did have a traceback with orphanage
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
File "game/hub_orphanage.rpy", line 130, in <module>
NameError: name 'orphange_money' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:

File "hub_random_events_outside.rpyc", line 65, in script call
File "hub_random_events_outside.rpyc", line 65, in script call
File "hub_random_events_outside.rpyc", line 65, in script call
File "hub_random_events_outside.rpyc", line 65, in script call
File "hub_random_events_outside.rpyc", line 65, in script call
File "hub_random_events_outside.rpyc", line 65, in script call
File "hub_random_events_outside.rpyc", line 65, in script call
File "hub_random_events_outside.rpyc", line 65, in script call
File "hub_random_events_outside.rpyc", line 65, in script call
File "hub_random_events_outside.rpyc", line 65, in script call
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File "hub_random_events_outside.rpyc", line 65, in script call
File "hub_random_events_outside.rpyc", line 65, in script call
File "hub_orphanage.rpyc", line 121, in script
File "C:\Users\Aces\Desktop\jen\TheirBeautifulWorld-Divinity-0.1.0-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1729, in execute
if renpy.python.py_eval(condition):
File "C:\Users\Aces\Desktop\jen\TheirBeautifulWorld-Divinity-0.1.0-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1943, in py_eval
return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)
File "C:\Users\Aces\Desktop\jen\TheirBeautifulWorld-Divinity-0.1.0-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1936, in py_eval_bytecode
return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
File "game/hub_orphanage.rpy", line 130, in <module>
NameError: name 'orphange_money' is not defined

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Their Beautiful World - Divinity 0.1.0
Fri Jul 27 16:25:07 2018
But as i just said i just went to do what u said and both are fine which i am very happy with now thank u so much ,im so happy i dont need to start again
 

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Another Bright Sun game ? sweet, I'll look into it once I shorten my backlog of games... Your the creator of Blooming Love right ? Loved that game despite not being into Yuri myself, I thought the story was cute, I just wish we had gotten a small glimpse of the baby-sister/daughter in the ending... (she was a teen by the very end right ? they mentioned her taking the hotter older sister's vibe right ?).
As my signatures would suggest, I did make Blooming Love, yes. I've also been working on High School Crush Simulator for the past few months though if you didn't know.

There is a reason why I didn't show the baby/daughter of the couple in Blooming Love though. The very last scene (and the new baby-sister of the couple) is purely a setup to a possible future sequal for the game. Knowing that it shouldn't be too difficult to figure out who the main couple of that potential future game is going to be. So I didn't show them as I hadn't designed them yet and didn't want to commit to a quick and simple character design for characters I might end up using as main characters later
 
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Aces_high69

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Yes, that's them all. Originally I had planned to include Livia as well as a sex partner in version 0.1, but she eventually became a much slower building character (because she's much more reserved sexually than Fivae or Sivenne). So her story simply isn't far enough yet to open up sex with her
Thank you ,but not having Livia i was actually quite happy as so she is my favourite so far ,she's so cute when you speak to her:heartcoveredeyes: ,so that gives me more to look fwd to on the next update ,She's worth waiting for
 
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