Siddington

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I have to admit I'm so torn on this game. Julia and Eve are cute and the dialogue between them can be incredibly funny but I can't help feel with almost every conversation in game that I would tell Julia to go fuck herself with the way she treats the MC. The MC's complete lack of self respect is also too jarring for me. At this stage is seems you have to go full submissive to get any good content. Maybe that will change in future update as Julia opens up more but it honestly just feels like you're Julia and Eve's bitch-boy at the minute. Hope this changes as otherwise it's shaping up great.
 
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Noir Desir

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May 15, 2017
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Thanks for your interest in my :)

"Eva (Poll)
I decided to change Eve a little, to make her look more cute and sexy. You have three options to choose from, of course the first one is the closest to the original Eve.
Eva 1 9%
Eva 2 75%
Eva 3 13%
I do not like any of them 3%
Poll ended Feb 22, 2018
64 votes total"



eva test.png eva test1.png
 

Noir Desir

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May 15, 2017
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Thinking About You Redesigned

As you know, there are many great games on Patreon. My humble game is one of the smaller projects. There are many better-looking games, more professionally made, with better gameplay, more popular... Of course, competition is good for you :) Because of competition I have to start doing my game better, which is good for you too :)
I have been working on many changes over the past two months. I don't promise you a revolution, rather an evolution, but I hope that after these changes my game will be better and give you more pleasure :)

So, what's new?

- Better looking graphics. I do my best to make my game look better.
- Images in 1920×1080 (Full HD)
- More images for each scene. No real animations in this game, but I would like to give you the illusion of movement and animation.
- Optional activities - if you want, you can hug girls, or watch them when they change clothes, or take them for a walk, etc.
- More dialog options.
- New mechanics of erotic scenes. Now you will have to look at Julia, at her face, at the reactions of her body, to know if you're doing something right or wrong. It'll be fun!

Plans for the next few weeks:

- v.01 redesigned - I need a public demo, and v.01 is short, so making a new version will not take much time. There will be some new content, so I hope you will play v.01 again.
- A new scene for + 10 $ Patrons. A very interesting scene, you'll see!
- Birthday Edition inside the main game. A lot of new erotic content.
- v.05 - the new part will be shorter than v.04, because, as you can see, I'm working on other things at the same time. But I hope it will be very funny :)

 

botc76

The Crawling Chaos, Bringer of Strange Joy
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Damn shame about the redesign. I get wanting to upgrade and I can guess at the motivation, but I was really looking forward to finally getting something out of the dominant route, instead of having to continue to be a submissive tool.

Edited to add: I mean, a shame because the story won't go forward, not that I have any problem with your intent to better your game.
 
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Noir Desir

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May 15, 2017
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Damn shame about the redesign. I get wanting to upgrade and I can guess at the motivation, but I was really looking forward to finally getting something out of the dominant route, instead of having to continue to be a submissive tool.

Edited to add: I mean, a shame because the story won't go forward, not that I have any problem with your intent to better your game.
Dear Aguirre ;) I understand what you mean. But game really needs changes. Better graphics and some gameplay changes are necessary. I hope that these changes will allow my game to grow faster in the long term.
 

botc76

The Crawling Chaos, Bringer of Strange Joy
Donor
Oct 23, 2016
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Dear Aguirre ;) I understand what you mean. But game really needs changes. Better graphics and some gameplay changes are necessary. I hope that these changes will allow my game to grow faster in the long term.
Hey, it's your game, I'm just getting fun and porn out of your efforts.
You do what you think is best for your project and I'll enjoy it.
 
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JJI

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Jun 18, 2017
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Dear Noir: You do not have many fans because your output is irregular but you do have fans and we are looking forward to your new work. On the one hand, it is admirable that you are learning and improving. On the other hand, if you had a partner or two you could deliver a good chapter every month - your dialogues are great - and attract a following. I hate to see you waste your time on details when your special skill is writing.
 
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eddie297

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Jun 17, 2017
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This VN brings some fresh air among the overused formulas that we see here frequently, but perhaps it should be added in the genre fdom/msub since it is apparently the only route that is offered, or that is rewarded.
 

Daasss

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The dev said that in the following updates the 'strong male' route will be extended with its own rewards.
 

5ever

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Jul 21, 2017
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Thinking About You Redesigned

There are many better-looking games, more professionally made

[...]

- Better looking graphics. I do my best to make my game look better.

[...]
Well, there may be some better looking, more professional games out there, but honestly not so many.

While you maybe didn't have the largest renders and the most images per scene, your art has a unique style and flair which I personally found to be way more beautiful than those super polished games using the renders directly as they are, but sometimes lacking soul. I really like your art and your facial experssions are also quite good. That said, your writing and giving depth to the characters are your big selling points!

Yeah maybe Eve wasn't the hottest looking 3d render in the world, but it was refreshing to see a "normal" girl for once. Like with humans in reality the real charming point is the character.

I understand that you are trying things that might get you more supporters and I am absolutely looking forward to those changes, but for me personally you are just going from a 87% perfect package to a maybe 9X% package (hard to judge without experiencing the difference).

Long story short, be proud of your creative skills! :)
 
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