VN Ren'Py Abandoned Three Rules of Life [v0.5.0] [Red Dust]

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Raziel_8

Raziel_8

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Grimstar said:
Feel like I'm the only one who actually enjoyed Sarah's introduction.
She isn't clingly like Mira, doesn't have baggage like Danielle, Ada or Rose.
She has one of the best models in the game.
She's willing to share you.
You can tell she's a freak in the sheets.
And she just seems fun overall.
Only thing that would ruin her is if you found out the football team ran a train on her.
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Well there was Sienna, which is the best looking girl so far, with a good character, so i couldn't care about Sarah.
And as u said no baggage or secrets, just a stranger... i really want her as a maingirl.

Well i wouldn't rule it out, the football team runing a train on Sarah :whistle:
 
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UncleFredo said:
I was asked to sign in. Not certain what that means, but since I have no account there...
So I was supposed to sign in to my google account. Not happening.
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That has nothing to do w/ Patreon. Google Forms requires a Google account. The survey is set up not to collect emails.

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But if you're not comfortable w/ it, that's certainly up to you.
 
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Raziel_8 said:
Well there was Sienna, which is the best looking girl so far, with a good character, so i couldn't care about Sarah.
And as u said no baggage or secrets, just a stranger... i really want her as a maingirl.

Well i wouldn't rule it out, the football team runing a train on Sarah :whistle:
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Sienna? I only remember Erika. Hopefully she becomes and LI.
 
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Damn, I dunno what's going on but I'm banging everyone lol. I believe everything was pretty light or had some type of reasoning where the MC might have fallen to temptation during the previous updates. It maintained the illusion that the MC wasn't truly acting out of character.

Not done playing this release yet, but this update pushes things along with each girl enough to start making them rather serious relationships. At this point, the MC is really coming off as some kind of expert con man that can pursue like 10 different girls and be "genuine" with all of them lol. The illusion is breaking. Giving a lot of freedom to the players is a good thing, but I think it can backfire unless it is definitely supported by the narrative. The MC should be cognizant of the fact that he is simultaneous engaging in serious romantic relationships with multiple girls. This can manifest as an inner conflict if the MC is being portrayed as a good kid, or the MC can simply be a cheating playboy. What breaks immersion is when the MC can take actions that are not in sync with his general persona that's been developed thus far and it's never addressed.

I'm sure people could argue that each of us is the master of our own playthrough. That's true. We could have broken things off or not pursued multiple girls in the first place and treated them as good friends. However, I am firmly in the camp that believes that choices that are available need to be supported by the script.
 
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Okyturi

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Grimstar said:
Feel like I'm the only one who actually enjoyed Sarah's introduction.
She isn't clingly like Mira, doesn't have baggage like Danielle, Ada or Rose.
She has one of the best models in the game.
She's willing to share you.
You can tell she's a freak in the sheets.
And she just seems fun overall.
Only thing that would ruin her is if you found out the football team ran a train on her.
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Sarah is introduced 3 episodes too late. Usually such "sex bomb" open/slutty characters are for episode1-2 when MC still doesnt have sexual/or any relationships with other main heroines and author wants to add some sexual content to a porn game so keep players more interested/attract them.
But since its already good amount of content/action with main LI - Sarah is just some random slutty sidechick that pretty much nobody cares about but probably wouldnt say no to a hot scene with her.
 
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ClockworkGnome said:
Don't worry, if any of them ever become LIs, I'm sure they'll also have secrets they refuse to talk about, exes who they just can't get over, and they'll probably know tons of stuff about why our mom left.
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I mean, everybody and their dog seems to know more about his mom and why she left than the MC does...

Can we maybe settle for a different set of problems for those 3 ?
Like:
-MC, i musst confess i'm a bit of a cuck and want to see u with other girls.
-MC look, i like my man to be confident, has some self esteem and he certainly aint taking shit from anybody (looks at MC)... :KEK:
-I have this ex and i want to see him completely humilated and destroyed, so i have made this little plan, it includes u fucking all those which he holds dear. Now don't worry, he has no brother and the father died mysteriously as my ex reached adulthood. As for the grand finale, we will drugg him, chain him and force him to watch how u fuck his gf, sister and mother in front of him....it will be glorious.
 
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Someone few pages back told that Damon and Naomi might be siblings. I'm starting to believe in that theory. It's pretty solid and the two of them, they have some similiarities. And it's not just skin, their faces do look almost same. I'm realy starting to think that she might be Mayors daughter. Did our Mayor had an affair? And most importantly is Alexandra really her mom? Lexa seams pretty close with Damon. Could it really be that she's Damon's mom as well? Or doeas she treat him from being gay or something. There's also one part of me telling that Damon is terminaly ill. Hope i'm wrong.
 
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I should have brought this up before, but oh well...

For all the fans of Penny, see if you agree with me:

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No frustrations, but it's just that we always want them a bit bigger, right? :ROFLMAO:
 
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Grimstar said:
Feel like I'm the only one who actually enjoyed Sarah's introduction.
She isn't clingly like Mira, doesn't have baggage like Danielle, Ada or Rose.
She has one of the best models in the game.
She's willing to share you.
You can tell she's a freak in the sheets.
And she just seems fun overall.
Only thing that would ruin her is if you found out the football team ran a train on her.
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Heh, sorry but Sarah strikes me more like a sexy comic sidekick that will probably have a hot episodic role at some point like... football team gangbanging her and her cheerfully waving our MC over to jump in on the action.
The author did not bother to add any depth to her except to point out she likes dicks (plural).
 
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smbreda said:
I should have brought this up before, but oh well...

For all the fans of Penny, see if you agree with me:

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No frustrations, but it's just that we always want them a bit bigger, right? :ROFLMAO:
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well i don't like massive 'Bobies' soo fine for me :D
 
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smbreda said:
I should have brought this up before, but oh well...

For all the fans of Penny, see if you agree with me:

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No frustrations, but it's just that we always want them a bit bigger, right? :ROFLMAO:
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I thought i was going crazy they do seem smaller once Penny is naked
 
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TheLonelyGhost

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I'm glad a new update is out but the thing about Damon was so obvious to me I really thought it was already established. Took me a moment to realize that the last slide was supposed to be a big reveal... Still really good though!
 
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