With the utmost respect, i think this last chapter needs some rework. We skip past a lot of potential hotness. Frankly, creampie-ing the captain instead of playing it off for a joke is a must. Also seeing the girls grow in size a bit would be nice, instead of skipping ahead 8 months.
Only suggestions of course. I respect the craft the Dev has put in.
Only suggestions of course. I respect the craft the Dev has put in.