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VN Ren'Py Time Heals [Ch. 1 Part 1] [Owl's]

4.30 star(s) 19 Votes

ADAMS Owl`s

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Renders are very good and story its interesting. Hope that the game has more choices and that the choices have impact on the story and the relations with the girls, hope there is more choices to choose (instead of 2 to have 3) in the future,hope that the girls arent all slutty,hope there is more girls. The game has potential but the dev cant get lost on the story,have more choices with impact on story and relations with girls (not only about sex).
There will be more choices in the future that will lead not only to sex, but also to advancing the relationship.
 

JB08

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English and Russian versions should be separate downloads so users can save on bandwidth and download faster.
 

drcynic22

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Dec 5, 2018
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It looks really good, but since there are apparently no choices yet, I'll wait till the next update before I have a go.
 

Crowangel

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looking good but some general and personal notes to follow..
Script needs a look over.. lots of incorrect dialogue and wording
(Personal) MC's hair doesn't suit him and feels like you took a black daz asset for rendering and tried to make him white
Mira's appearance looks a little off at times.. you seem to fall for the same issue others do and have facial animations that cause unneeded facial wrinkles and looks that make the face wrinkle FAR to much for their age..

More to come as i progress

Liking the very Ocean-esq style to this and transitions.. reminds me or should say it feels like something that could exist in the Summer's Gone/Where it all began-Verse
 
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Fun Shaundi

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This is the kind of VN's I like: Not only is has gorgeous renders, beautiful models (both men an women) with accurate realistic body proportions and easy to follow dialogue, but also a story where desperate girls throw themselves at MC right away.

I saw some people says sometimes renders look to dark, but I personally like that type of ambience.

This VN had a solid start, can't wait to see more. Good luck wit the project, dev.
 
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ADAMS Owl`s

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Apr 7, 2023
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This is the kind of VN's I like: Not only is has gorgeous renders, beautiful models (both men an women) with accurate realistic body proportions and easy to follow dialogue, but also a story where desperate girls throw themselves at MC right away.

I saw some people says sometimes renders look to dark, but I personally like that type of ambience.

This VN had a solid start, can't wait to see more. Good luck wit the project, dev.
Thanks for the feedback, it's my pleasure. :giggle:
 
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The Krogan Dude

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I must say the UI and the menu look really good. The models and the renders are gorgeous my major complaint for now would be the lack of dialogues/choices to pick. Even a prologue should be a bit more interactive. I can't really judge the story for now but at least the dad being dead really serves the plot here. I can't say the same thing for most VNs :LUL:
 
4.30 star(s) 19 Votes