Thank you for your feedback, and you generally kind words, I have to ask though, like we are aware that writing is our weakest point even though we made a lot of improvement, it is meant to appeal to a wider crowd, and not be too hard to read, when it comes to choice of words. People that not only has English as a primary language.
However I have to ask you, in this case how can you say that this is written by 12 year old virgins? I mean we're all people and we're definitely not virgins, we both have a lot of experience with women and no two women are exactly the same, what kind of writing do you expect? "As I approached her, the the moans started getting louder, love juice dripping out of her tunnel of love, her rose petals exposed with the sweetest fragrance... As I grabbed her shoulder she shivered in pleasure whispering, yamete kudasai, oneechan"?
Nah but seriously, I can recommend some other games that are more focused on the lovecraftian style of writing, text based games that are great but text based
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