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I just finished my first full playthrough. I'm impressed. I didn't use the walkthrough, so I there's obviously stuff I missed out on. What I'll probably do now is follow the walkthrough to get everything I missed out on.

But, what I wanted to say is this is easily my most favorite game on here. It's a mix of things.

The willowy, model-like body type most of the girls come with. They're not all the same either. I like to see all the shapes they have, but I really like the long legs, tight-sexy-butts thing going on. I can't fault any of the cast designs.

The steady, continue play of cigarettes and smoking. I'm not a smoker, but it looks really sexy when the girls smoke like that, even Dr. Rivers at one point.

I like that they often have high heels on. And, I like the variation they have. Oh, and I love that you can see those kinds of shoes in their bedrooms. I don't mind seeing fashionable high heels at all.

Umm, I think that covers the main points. I do like that it seems you can fuck all the girls and keep going, and Maureen certainly makes that dream come true. Too many games penalize you from wanting them all. I hope it continues to not matter, and if that means the MC ends up with Maureen (like she wants), then so be it. Just as long as the MC is allowed to play around as he has been. I'm not sure if that would be the case with any other girl. I don't mind the current set up. All the girls are pretty interesting, and I can see the different adventures leading to different things. So, I'm not sure what might come from it. But, I like where it is at the moment.

As for the story... I think it's good. I'm a bit surprised we were never allowed to go back and repeat the first few days so as to unlock alternate paths. Bacon mentioned a couple of times they'd do that (to fix up that stuff with Scut and his mom). But it never happened. Also, I fucked up early on because I thought if the MC did some outrageous stuff while time-travelling, it might come back and alter the current reality too, so as to make the girls sluttier or something. I must have misread or something, since that's not what happened at all. Anyway, live and learn.

There's one part of the game I wish was a bit different. That scene where Juli and Dr. Rivers are smoking, and she says that it's such a pleasure to be able to indulge and not have her husband breathe down her neck or whatever. I think it was something like that. But, then DAY 10 happens, and she says she's been divorced for ages. Those two scenes don't quite mesh. So, it might be worth going back to that smoking scene and reworking what she said a bit, or... you know, you could have her have a husband at home and her cheating on him to be with the MC. I really do like cheating themes, so I wouldn't mind that at all.

Also, with the smoking scenes, if you're looking to make some improvements with them for Chapter 2, maybe you could play around with putting lipstick marks on the ends of them, as the girls smoke? More and more, as the scene progresses, the cigarette burning down until they snub it out? I don't mind that they never change their length. But, I would really find it sexy if the ends took up the color of their lipstick. They don't always wear the same color, so it'd be nice to just see the different colors end up on the cigarettes. What think? More work, but it might be worth it.
 

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Well said tg. Yes, I agree and picked up on similar issues with consistency, but really like where the story is going with Mrs Dellington (very hot GILF btw, more pls!) and this club she runs...all sorts of possibilities for the MC and his harem there I would think??? (y)And definitely agree that Maureen will make for one super hotwife/swinger wife if the story gets that far for the MC.

Love what you've done with the smoking scenes Motz. Giving the option for people to either skip those scenes, or like me, definitely relish them, lol was a master stroke! Keep the wowsers happy, without sacrificing any super hot content. Brilliant.

Improvements - not much really, just maybe tidy up the consistency with the Dr Rivers character (btw I liked that she is married too and might have an open relationship going on?). I'd also love to see a BBW milf/gilf type character maybe at some point (say at the club with her hubby?) and lots more sexy smoking segments pls! (or at least the option for).



I just finished my first full playthrough. I'm impressed. I didn't use the walkthrough, so I there's obviously stuff I missed out on. What I'll probably do now is follow the walkthrough to get everything I missed out on.

But, what I wanted to say is this is easily my most favorite game on here. It's a mix of things.

The willowy, model-like body type most of the girls come with. They're not all the same either. I like to see all the shapes they have, but I really like the long legs, tight-sexy-butts thing going on. I can't fault any of the cast designs.

The steady, continue play of cigarettes and smoking. I'm not a smoker, but it looks really sexy when the girls smoke like that, even Dr. Rivers at one point.

I like that they often have high heels on. And, I like the variation they have. Oh, and I love that you can see those kinds of shoes in their bedrooms. I don't mind seeing fashionable high heels at all.

Umm, I think that covers the main points. I do like that it seems you can fuck all the girls and keep going, and Maureen certainly makes that dream come true. Too many games penalize you from wanting them all. I hope it continues to not matter, and if that means the MC ends up with Maureen (like she wants), then so be it. Just as long as the MC is allowed to play around as he has been. I'm not sure if that would be the case with any other girl. I don't mind the current set up. All the girls are pretty interesting, and I can see the different adventures leading to different things. So, I'm not sure what might come from it. But, I like where it is at the moment.

As for the story... I think it's good. I'm a bit surprised we were never allowed to go back and repeat the first few days so as to unlock alternate paths. Bacon mentioned a couple of times they'd do that (to fix up that stuff with Scut and his mom). But it never happened. Also, I fucked up early on because I thought if the MC did some outrageous stuff while time-travelling, it might come back and alter the current reality too, so as to make the girls sluttier or something. I must have misread or something, since that's not what happened at all. Anyway, live and learn.

There's one part of the game I wish was a bit different. That scene where Juli and Dr. Rivers are smoking, and she says that it's such a pleasure to be able to indulge and not have her husband breathe down her neck or whatever. I think it was something like that. But, then DAY 10 happens, and she says she's been divorced for ages. Those two scenes don't quite mesh. So, it might be worth going back to that smoking scene and reworking what she said a bit, or... you know, you could have her have a husband at home and her cheating on him to be with the MC. I really do like cheating themes, so I wouldn't mind that at all.

Also, with the smoking scenes, if you're looking to make some improvements with them for Chapter 2, maybe you could play around with putting lipstick marks on the ends of them, as the girls smoke? More and more, as the scene progresses, the cigarette burning down until they snub it out? I don't mind that they never change their length. But, I would really find it sexy if the ends took up the color of their lipstick. They don't always wear the same color, so it'd be nice to just see the different colors end up on the cigarettes. What think? More work, but it might be worth it.
 
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ProofreadingRUS

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Autopsy really?
Cyborgs really?
If you are going to take that path does that mean all cyborgs will have to be eliminated?
Thats just great now we dont know whose a cyborg and whose not.
This went from a greatt story to a ridiculous one.
At least no real humans were harmed so far in the making o this story?
I dread to find out how much more ridiculous this story gets.
I finally finished it and hope the next version is not too ridiculous/
MC should stand for moron capacity cause thats what the mc kept doing.
He was too much sometimes and was getting worse.
Lets hope that the next version takes it easy with mc level.
When is the next version?
 

cold_arctus

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Autopsy really?
Cyborgs really?
If you are going to take that path does that mean all cyborgs will have to be eliminated?
Thats just great now we dont know whose a cyborg and whose not.
This went from a greatt story to a ridiculous one.
At least no real humans were harmed so far in the making o this story?
I dread to find out how much more ridiculous this story gets.
I finally finished it and hope the next version is not too ridiculous/
MC should stand for moron capacity cause thats what the mc kept doing.
He was too much sometimes and was getting worse.
Lets hope that the next version takes it easy with mc level.
When is the next version?
Hmm.. so far you are the first who continues says how bad the story is.. I know that everyone has a different taste, the same as for kinks, but tbh. why to you bother playing this game if you don't like the story? Is it a guilty pleasure for you? :unsure:

So far the majority of players and patrons like the story and I think that people are happy to see something different for once compare to other porn game stories.
 
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larry5168

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Autopsy really?
Cyborgs really?
If you are going to take that path does that mean all cyborgs will have to be eliminated?
Thats just great now we dont know whose a cyborg and whose not.
This went from a greatt story to a ridiculous one.
At least no real humans were harmed so far in the making o this story?
I dread to find out how much more ridiculous this story gets.
I finally finished it and hope the next version is not too ridiculous/
MC should stand for moron capacity cause thats what the mc kept doing.
He was too much sometimes and was getting worse.
Lets hope that the next version takes it easy with mc level.
When is the next version?
You seem to have been the only person to date, who didn't like the cyborg theme as no one in the past 50 pages has complained about it. I understand it's different strokes for different folks, but as it hasn't bothered the thousands of other people who play the game, I think you're in the minority here, and I can't see the story changing just to please one disgruntled person
You say it's ridiculous, you probably didn't like the Terminator films then, I am pretty sure they had a cyborg in them and had time travel, no that would be ridiculous wouldn't it
It's funny how you think everything is wrong and yet ask when the next version is out. Don't bother with the facepalm bit, this is just a counter to your point nothing more nothing less
 

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Wow thanks alot for that. I also noticed that some scenes are missing maybe the dev can make something to replay each day in a future version of the game cause what you are up to requires alot of time. However still thanks for offering the save file.

I think a normal save that begins where the last version ended is enough for most ppl ^^
I have uploaded the save files (End of each Day) for v1.0 PE.

Check out the POST.
You can also find it on my . Enjoy!

Ps: The MC's name is Qleaf .. so yeah if someone knows how to change that go ahead, but my job here is done. :D
 
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Can anyone confirm that the option to dump Maureen has been removed from the game?

I didn't see it when I played this new version, and I'm really hoping that I just managed to miss it somehow or it's a bug or something. That seems unlikely given the new scene in the store where Maureen tells Veronika that she has an open relationship with her brother, so I'm assuming that this is now the sole route and the one I liked has been scrapped.

I had chosen to break up with Maureen because I was hoping for a Gaz redemption and romance arc, and it had been looking very promising in the previous update. There was unique dialogue for the girls on the beach if you broke up with Maureen, as well as a chance to take Maureen back at the hospital or insist that you were serious about leaving her. My favourite scene in the game was when Gaz got excited that you had split with Maureen, because it was a sweet moment between the two of them. But now that all seems to be gone, as the main character just tells her that he and Maureen are in an open relationship and that they both have sex with whoever they want. There's not a shred of romance anywhere to be found there now, so that's a huge downgrade. The new Gaz content is also terrible, so I was very disappointed with this update.

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Miðgarðsormr

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I have uploaded the save files (End of each Day) for v1.0 PE.

Check out the POST.
You can also find it on my . Enjoy!

Ps: The MC's name is Qleaf .. so yeah if someone knows how to change that go ahead, but my job here is done. :D
Thank you very much. Imagine the Song "You're the best around" playing for you right now ^^
 
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Any geneticists on board here? I have a question.

Let's say that MC popped back in time, met his mother when she was a teenager, popped her cherry, knocked her up, and nine months later the kid, who grew up to be MC, was born.

He was his own father.

Now, as part of a family research project, his DNA sample was looked at. Half of his DNA came from his mother, and half came from his father. Since he, himself, was the father, half of the father's DNA also came from his mother. Of the other half of his father's DNA, half of that came from his mother. And on, and on it goes.

Apart from having XY chromosomes, essentially all of his DNA would trace back to his mother.

Something for someone to think about.
 
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Can anyone confirm that the option to dump Maureen has been removed from the game?

I didn't see it when I played this new version, and I'm really hoping that I just managed to miss it somehow or it's a bug or something. That seems unlikely given the new scene in the store where Maureen tells Veronika that she has an open relationship with her brother, so I'm assuming that this is now the sole route and the one I liked has been scrapped.
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