My own humble opinion here.
In spite of some (I didn't say "several", please note) issues or bugs, I happened to find out a true gem with this novel. I'm calling it so because it's a not a game. It's well plotted, has a story in development and it's original.
As a result, I couldn't stop to play until its end because it's addicting, so I decided to patronizing its dev., there are few around like this one.
Well done, Motkeyz. I appreciated your choice to let your story to be hosted here, and will follow carefully your work.
With best regards.