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Thx so much !!for a first game you did a real good job. good story and good pics. I hope you continue. thanks for the share
i avoided it u.uanna94. I think it is better to use the word "Lust or corruption" instead of "sex affection".
Unavoidable footlick during bonus scene. I don't like it
Nah nah. Bonus scene footlick not avoidablei avoided it u.u
Oh. Was it foot lick ? My bad. I did it in a rush. Did not check. Would replace it next time =)anna94. I think it is better to use the word "Lust or corruption" instead of "sex affection".
Unavoidable footlick during bonus scene. I don't like it
focus on the grammar first ^_^ use Grammarly, even the free version is decent enough and it fixes your sentences(it's good if you are not a native English speaker like me)Oh. Was it foot lick ? My bad. I did it in a rush. Did not check. Would replace it next time =)
oh cool din know that. actually i have a patreon kind enough to fix my grammar. but i din put it in this version because i did this update hurriedly. i would do it in next versionfocus on the grammar first ^_^ use Grammarly, even the free version is decent enough and it fixes your sentences(it's good if you are not a native English speaker like me)
Thx for the advise. Yea. I was rushing it out a little. I admit. I'll make sure not to do that again in futureReally cute model, the renders arent the best but do the job.
The writing feels really rushed and poorly thought out..