- Mar 21, 2018
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Another great update, love how it's not like a bunch of other stories where you're sneaking around someones back. Everyone is on the same page and loves each other. Very refreshing!
- May 19, 2018
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Got to say, after playing all the games on here in which you are taking advantage of everyone, its refreshing to have a cutesy love story about a 3 way relationship. 10/10 love this game.
- Sep 11, 2017
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Zombie can't be dead its definition is undead.
- Aug 8, 2017
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I just got done with the first beach scene and just had to come and put this down.
I love the gist of the story but in the beginning it went to fast for me.
2 days and J is in love with MC.
I wish it would have taken some time to build up to this, like 2-3 weeks or more with several mishaps like what the boyfriend did.
1 night sleep on the side and the next night she is in the middle. Should have taken 1-3 weeks to get that far.
I love the gist of the story but in the beginning it went to fast for me.
2 days and J is in love with MC.
I wish it would have taken some time to build up to this, like 2-3 weeks or more with several mishaps like what the boyfriend did.
1 night sleep on the side and the next night she is in the middle. Should have taken 1-3 weeks to get that far.
- Aug 8, 2017
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- May 14, 2017
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- Aug 10, 2018
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no alive would be living, undead is a technically dead being that is still somehow (by magic or virus) animate.
the dog is alive then ... boom hit by car
the dog is dead then ... injected with t-virus
the dog is undead then ... shot by leon.
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Yeah, much as I liked the game, seconding this one, though more along the lines of 1-2 months. Doesn't have to take a huge amount of time to play, though - just add a bit of a timeskip to indicate that she had an adjustment/mourning period first.
- Feb 7, 2019
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I'm really liking the game so far. I mostly disagree with the posts that were negative about the dialogue. The dialogue contained fully formed sentences without any noticeable mistakes or typos, which you'd think would be an elementary thing but is actually lacking in so many of the VNs probably because the creators aren't native speakers.
However, admittedly, some of the dialogue feels slightly repetitive, especially with how the characters just say "I love you" over and over, as if there were no variations on how to express affection. "luv ya", "you're so good to me", "don't know what i'd do without you", "I'm the luckiest guy/girl in the world" etc etc. Variety is the spice of believable dialogue, y'know?
I disagree though with people saying that dialogue feels unnatural. Especially in comparison to other VNs. Sure it's not at the quality of a professional novel, but I can feel the author making a good effort to keep it flowing and unforced.
However, admittedly, some of the dialogue feels slightly repetitive, especially with how the characters just say "I love you" over and over, as if there were no variations on how to express affection. "luv ya", "you're so good to me", "don't know what i'd do without you", "I'm the luckiest guy/girl in the world" etc etc. Variety is the spice of believable dialogue, y'know?
I disagree though with people saying that dialogue feels unnatural. Especially in comparison to other VNs. Sure it's not at the quality of a professional novel, but I can feel the author making a good effort to keep it flowing and unforced.
- Mar 8, 2019
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I mean...are you saying you *don't* want more? crazier sex, new positions, new erotic situations, more sweet romance etc etc.
- Aug 8, 2017
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The relationship was to fast and now there really nothing left to build on.
Different sex options are ok but the story could have taken longer to build up the relationship but no in 2 days it was over.
Now don't get me wrong I still love the story but I wish dev would have taken more time to build up the relationship, the couple could have sex all the time and build up the relationship with the girl over a month or 2 would have given this story more life to it.
Gonna hafta see if Our Hero gives Jenny's friend, Tina, some what for and why. Slip it to her while she's going down on Jenny, what with her ass in the air and all that.
- Nov 15, 2018
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It's gameplay, not a story.. Yeah, we could go on some dates, but what else? MB relationship with parents? Wedding? Dunno...
- Mar 8, 2019
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I see the point you're making, and to an extent, i kinda agree, but i was pretty satisfied with the game. i mean, the renders are amazing quality and all the poses, expressions feel pretty genuine. the quality of the game itself is quite high overall. the grammar is also good for an unfinished game, especially when you remember how many of these games can have bad Engrish. This kinda comes down to "Quality over Quantity" in a sense. yes, the story feels like it has a fast pace, but, at least in my opinion, doesn't feel like the relationship was rushed or unrealistic. I mean, i've played some Eroge with long ass stories, games that have a 30 hour common route and an 8 hour route for each girl, and most of the time, especially with slice of life, drama genre games, it's a lot of filler. Pointless scenes and situations that i wish i didn't have to sit through to get to the good parts. In a sense, this game just cuts out the fat. You get the good stuff, and it's short because of that. Sure, it could be longer definitely, with more scenes that have a purpose and help to draw out the relationship. However, as it is, it feels fine to me.
- May 30, 2017
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Sleepy time or naughty time?