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Cottoncloud

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I know I am kinda late to the party, but ren'py based erotic novels are sort of a fresh discovery of mine... this said, I am not too far in to the plot just yet, but first few scenes already make it tough for me due to rather stiff, out of character dialogues, something intense, tragic and emotional is brushed off by everyone as they speak about "very comfortable couch and large TV". At least that is my impression, but maybe it's just the way I am imagining them in my head... so, I guess question of mine, is it just me? And does it get more natural later on.
 
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Walter Victor

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I know I am kinda late to the party, but ren'py based erotic novels are sort of a fresh discovery of mine... this said, I am not too far in to the plot just yet, but first few scenes already make it tough for me due to rather stiff, out of character dialogues, something intense, tragic and emotional is brushed off by everyone as they speak about "very comfortable couch and large TV". At least that is my impression, but maybe it's just the way I am imagining them in my head... so, I guess question of mine, is it just me? And does it get more natural later on.
There is not too much that it natural about porn games, VNs or otherwise. Unfortunately, Faulkner or Updike never wrote any. Some developers have more writing talent than others, but if any of them makes a best-seller list for a novel, I will be more than surprised. Be prepared for plot holes and out-of-character sequences as you continue in these games. Then again, I observe the same things in nearly every TV series I watch - and they have (supposedly) professional script writers and editors.
 
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Walter Victor

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The overview is pretty confusing. It easier to just says mother daughter incest. Need patch
This game is what it is. There is no patch or mod available. So if you want one, you can either write one yourself, or persuade or pay someone else to write one. If you can accomplish that, you could ask that it be uploaded to the OP. It might draw more interest to the game.
 

Avaron1974

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The overview is pretty confusing. It easier to just says mother daughter incest. Need patch
Except it's not mother and daughter nor would it fit the story considering the whole driving force was her parents dying an accident.

Be fucking weird talking about how her mother died while talking to her mother.

You'd need to change a lot of the games story to fit to the point where you may as well make a new game. It's been 2 years and no one thought it would be better with incest so if you want a patch you'd have to make your own.

Although it would be a mod, not a patch as it would be changing the story completely not re adding changed content.
 
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game looks really promising, but is there any way to change the name of the characters? specifically anna's daughter Ik someone irl called jennifer so it feels icky lmao
 

Vollezar

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Holy shit. I thought this was just going to be another cheese fest, but I felt so damn bad for the kid After they told Sarah I nearly cried (I would have if I could but I physically can't cry). Damn I felt bad for her. Well done.
 
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I know it is a minor thing, but the use of ` rather than ' makes the spacing incredibly jarring to me.

Thankfully it is easy to fix (open up Script.rpy in the game folder, do a find and replace -> replace all), but it was just incredibly jarring with a backtick rather than apostrophe, looked like the dev accidentally put spaces around them.
 
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Mmushy

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Just finished the game and I really enjoyed it.
Rather simplistic but I love it for it's escapism.
Both girls are lovely. Sarah a beautiful mature woman and Jenny a beautiful nymph.


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Would love suggestions for more games like this.
 

Walter Victor

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Just finished the game and I really enjoyed it.
Rather simplistic but I love it for it's escapism.
Both girls are lovely. Sarah a beautiful mature woman and Jenny a beautiful nymph.


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Would love suggestions for more games like this.
Have you tried "A Knight's Tale"? It's from the same developer.

You can find it here: A Knight's Tale
 
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