- Mar 11, 2019
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hmmm...just started the game and i must say i prefer Marie over the sister in looks... if only they could be switched...
well one thing is for sure here :
the conversation with Deb and the Mc in the morning in the kitchen is kind of bullshit too with what Deb says to the MC because she is in the army too and she MUST know that when a Soldier is on Active Duty that it is normal that he can not have much time for family like he want´s to.
Not all is bullshit there but most of it is a normal Life for an Soldier on Active Duty.
And it seems to me that Marie kind of blackmailed Deb into this relationship with her at first with the story she has told the MC there.
so that is kind of a little not storyfitting in that moment.
And there are some Errors in the conversations from the Uncensored version.Sometime Millys surename is Mills and at the start the lawyer said milly keept her surename Miles.
the conversation with Deb and the Mc in the morning in the kitchen is kind of bullshit too with what Deb says to the MC because she is in the army too and she MUST know that when a Soldier is on Active Duty that it is normal that he can not have much time for family like he want´s to.
Not all is bullshit there but most of it is a normal Life for an Soldier on Active Duty.
And it seems to me that Marie kind of blackmailed Deb into this relationship with her at first with the story she has told the MC there.
so that is kind of a little not storyfitting in that moment.
And there are some Errors in the conversations from the Uncensored version.Sometime Millys surename is Mills and at the start the lawyer said milly keept her surename Miles.
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I don't know if this is a good place for bug reporting but I figured it was better than nothing :\
I liked the plot about the information deals and a shame about the ex, from the description it looked nice to have around, but curious enough for a story that actually goes into the family set up, is the first one I don’t feel that I actually would like to do, one is a violent nympho without any filters (the military discipline in this game dimension must be shit haha) and the other is a bodybuilder (not my thing). So all the other female characters for the win! 
- May 21, 2018
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First time I'm playing this game, I must said this is quite good. The conversation between the MC and Brutus is pretty funny.
I Know that there is a story behind, but I fail to see how the MC is responsible, a far I understand this was Martin's fault, in others word the MC would had been the first target ( pretty sure was all saying the wife about the security is bullshit...)
Since the MC doesn't want to tell , there is enough suspicion for Milly to search the truth or/and Deb will convince Milly to search the MC's bedroom to find the famous letter...
I Know that there is a story behind, but I fail to see how the MC is responsible, a far I understand this was Martin's fault, in others word the MC would had been the first target ( pretty sure was all saying the wife about the security is bullshit...)
Since the MC doesn't want to tell , there is enough suspicion for Milly to search the truth or/and Deb will convince Milly to search the MC's bedroom to find the famous letter...
yupp i think that will happen later in the game that milly searches for the truth and finds the letter.
the MC Shoot some guys son on his last mission and that guy has influence in millitary ranks and that is probably the reason why he was imprisioned back then and now that data is classified so i have understood it.
so all of that Marie and Martin bullshit is not his fault he had nothing to do with it in the first place,but the problems are still related to him because that guy that want´s that thing what Marie was hiding is the guys father that the MC shoots on his last mission,and he did not came back to him only because he thinks he is dead.
in 1 word - "Awesome"
enjoyed a lot
hopefully the point system doesn't make me miss out content
and can someone tell me how to gain points by doing the polite thing like not staring or the opposite ? or maybe it is different for different girls ?.....if thats the case definitely will need a walkthrough in the future
enjoyed a lot
hopefully the point system doesn't make me miss out content
and can someone tell me how to gain points by doing the polite thing like not staring or the opposite ? or maybe it is different for different girls ?.....if thats the case definitely will need a walkthrough in the future
- Dec 27, 2019
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Enjoying the game so far, but in future releases please add some type of skip option. Hopefully most of the choices lead to the same results, but if not I'll probably end up replaying the game and I don't really want to see the images/dialogue of the sister + "wife" again.
Edit: btw if someone has the time to make a walkthrough thatd be doope
Edit: btw if someone has the time to make a walkthrough thatd be doope
Thank you all for your feedback. The reported bugs have hopefully been rectified and the download links have been updated.
It's definitely not a professional piece of equipment, but I'm happy I got it to work. The aim is that it may provide an amusing moment or two. Maybe I could add a map somehow that will allow the MC to travel around a little... got me thinking now!
I'm not even sure how I would go about implementing something like this without overcomplicating matters for myself. This is my first attempt at creating a visual novel and my knowledge of the coding is very limited.
Hey... the phone came with a disclaimer!
It's definitely not a professional piece of equipment, but I'm happy I got it to work. The aim is that it may provide an amusing moment or two. Maybe I could add a map somehow that will allow the MC to travel around a little... got me thinking now!I'm not sure what platform you're using, but from my own experience, on PC, of other creators work, if I save the game at some point, I can usually start the next update from that save point, as long as their coding hasn't changed in any way. If this isn't the case for other platforms, it's something I can look at.
Fix Game in OP?Thank you all for your feedback. The reported bugs have hopefully been rectified and the download links have been updated.
I'm not even sure how I would go about implementing something like this without overcomplicating matters for myself. This is my first attempt at creating a visual novel and my knowledge of the coding is very limited.
Hey... the phone came with a disclaimer!
I'm not sure what platform you're using, but from my own experience, on PC, of other creators work, if I save the game at some point, I can usually start the next update from that save point, as long as their coding hasn't changed in any way. If this isn't the case for other platforms, it's something I can look at.
- Dec 27, 2019
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I'm playing on the (New) Android Port so obviously there's bound to be some bugs, which aren't too big of a problem.
The problems I had might simply be just because of my device though. Couldn't skip, wasn't able to see dialogue before choices (e.g. if I was spam-tapping and suddenly a choice came up, I wasn't able to swipe back to see who/what the choices are for), and no matter which way I swiped the menu never popped up, meaning no saves
The problems I had might simply be just because of my device though. Couldn't skip, wasn't able to see dialogue before choices (e.g. if I was spam-tapping and suddenly a choice came up, I wasn't able to swipe back to see who/what the choices are for), and no matter which way I swiped the menu never popped up, meaning no saves
- Jul 28, 2017
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As a small gimmicky thing that doesn't interrupt the rhythm of the narrative, maybe. Just not as part of a map screen, day/night cycle, inventory system nightmareHey... the phone came with a disclaimer!
- Mar 17, 2019
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I got the same error message when I started with an old save from 0.01a. After I restarted, I got more choices that I remembered having in the past with the old version.
- Nov 30, 2018
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That was good Kumiko a nice addition and quite the revelation at the end there, not a surprise though the telltale signs with Milly were there. I'm not so sure about that Sheridan guy gives you all this equipment and a bike got to be some catch further on in the story.
The catch is that he made Deb stay indefinitely...
- Aug 17, 2019
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Unofficial Android Port for v0.03a Compressed :
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My Android Ports now have a 2nd Persistent save location. So, even if you uninstall the game, the saves will remain Intact.
If it says unknown developer or something like that just press install anyway.
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