Trikus

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Well that update was... entirely pointless. The only thing related to the story as a whole is the MC deciding to forgive his family.
 

Spfjolietjake

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Sep 26, 2019
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Azrayal such a great update. I'm not a fan of animation but it was awesome seeing Phoebe bust a move lol. Speaking of Phoebe such a solid movement of her arch. Glad to see Astrid and Jules having each other as I feel bad they seem to be neglected (I know there is a lot of women just ready for them to get some more loving).

So glad MC made peace with the family (finally). I totally enjoyed this update albeit hate the cliffhanger but only because I didn't want it to end. Thanks for this entertaining tale. Can not wait for more
 
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AmBush-UK

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I found this a couple of days ago as it has some of my chosen tags, looking at the screenshots I was a bit put off by the vac-pac clothing ( ), there's a good amount of updates so after reading some of the comments, I thought I'd give it a read.

I was pleased to see the MC Call Brutus an ARSEHOLE not ASSHOLE. As I read more I could see the humour was indeed British (humor/humour TAG MISSING)

Between Eating, Sleeping & Playing MW2 I'm at the point where MC & Co meet Tina Really enjoying this Azrayal Hoping I've got a long way to go.

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LoDoN-

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More muscular and fit characters like Milly should come. and interact with them. there seems to be a bit of stagnation and monotony here? It needs some shaping.
I mean no disrespect, but I don't think this story needs more branching, if anything there are too many branches already. The girls can't even get enough attention per update. While I love Milly's overly fit model, I don't think expanding the existing chars is a good idea, it would just dilute the story progression and the girl pool, there are too many girls already.
 
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NTRLover93

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I mean no disrespect, but I don't think this story needs more branching, if anything there are too many branches already. The girls can't even get enough attention per update. While I love Milly's overly fit model, I don't think expanding the existing chars is a good idea, it would just dilute the story progression and the girl pool, there are too many girls already.
Unfortunately, there aren't many girls like Milly. It's okay for new girls to come, even if they don't have much to do with the subject anyway. Just be friends with Milly and even if their story is short, it still satisfies.
 

PapaChulo

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Is Brenda a spy working for the bad guys, she seems to be popping out everywhere MC and daughter goes. MC just accepts the excuse that she needs to work different jobs and doesn't seem to be suspious?
 

RayJefferson

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Error Phoebe gallery

Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/gallery.rpy", line 66, in execute
    screen gallery_closeup(images):
  File "game/gallery.rpy", line 66, in execute
    screen gallery_closeup(images):
  File "game/gallery.rpy", line 68, in execute
    add images[closeup_page] at truecenter
  File "game/gallery.rpy", line 68, in <module>
    add images[closeup_page] at truecenter
IndexError: list index out of range

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "renpy/common/_layout/screen_load_save.rpym", line 35, in script
    $ ui.interact()
  File "renpy/ast.py", line 928, in execute
    renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store)
  File "renpy/python.py", line 2245, in py_exec_bytecode
    exec(bytecode, globals, locals)
  File "renpy/common/_layout/screen_load_save.rpym", line 35, in <module>
    $ ui.interact()
  File "renpy/ui.py", line 298, in interact
    rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)
  File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3315, in interact
    repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, **kwargs)
  File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3735, in interact_core
    root_widget.visit_all(lambda i : i.per_interact())
  File "renpy/display/core.py", line 568, in visit_all
    d.visit_all(callback, seen)
  File "renpy/display/core.py", line 568, in visit_all
    d.visit_all(callback, seen)
  File "renpy/display/core.py", line 568, in visit_all
    d.visit_all(callback, seen)
  File "renpy/display/core.py", line 568, in visit_all
    d.visit_all(callback, seen)
  File "renpy/display/screen.py", line 436, in visit_all
    callback(self)
  File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3735, in <lambda>
    root_widget.visit_all(lambda i : i.per_interact())
  File "renpy/display/screen.py", line 447, in per_interact
    self.update()
  File "renpy/display/screen.py", line 637, in update
    self.screen.function(**self.scope)
  File "game/gallery.rpy", line 66, in execute
    screen gallery_closeup(images):
  File "game/gallery.rpy", line 66, in execute
    screen gallery_closeup(images):
  File "game/gallery.rpy", line 68, in execute
    add images[closeup_page] at truecenter
  File "game/gallery.rpy", line 68, in <module>
    add images[closeup_page] at truecenter
  File "renpy/python.py", line 992, in __getitem__
    rv = list.__getitem__(self, index)
IndexError: list index out of range

Windows-10-10.0.19041
Ren'Py 7.4.10.2178
Triple Ex 0.17
Tue Feb 14 01:20:44 2023
 

Reniere

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Hello friends.
For anyone who is celebrating Valentine's Day with a loved one, have a wonderful time.
Stay safe and have fun!
Azrayal


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Hello friends.
Just a quickie. I'm currently working on creating a few new environments for the upcoming update. I'll post the next batch of preview images towards the latter end of next week.
Stay safe and have fun!
Azrayal
 
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