VN Ren'Py Triple Ex [v0.23] [Azrayal]

[JJDrakken]

Dear Azrayal, I gather that English is not your native language, but I must let a little bit of steam off. The grammar is awful, sometimes I have to decypher what is meant in the sentence, on the whole though I get the gist of what you are saying, but you don't make it easy. I know that proof reading costs money, but Google is no option, believe me. The story on the whole is great, lots of British things, not making the mistake of using both UK and American English. Keep up your good work, had waited a while for this update, glad its come!

You realize some language is with a Scottish Accent, thick Scottish accent. I've not had any issues reading it. Nothing has jumped out at me, minus re-reading Scottish accent stuff, cuz it's a new slang dialect for me.

 

[Azrayal]

Dear Azrayal, I gather that English is not your native language

English is my only language, although I could probably manage to order a glass of water in French. As JJDrakken has pointed out, the parts you may be struggling with are written with the intent of denoting a Scottish accent. It may not be very successful, and people may need to read it a few times to get the gist of it, but I enjoy it.

 

[Azrayal]

Too bad Phoebe's mom had to leave and there was nothing sexual with her.

Harriet did state she now prefers the company of women, and as "she who must not be named" (Mrs T) once said, "The lady's not for turning."

 

[NewTricks]

Dear Azrayal, I gather that English is not your native language, but I must let a little bit of steam off. The grammar is awful, sometimes I have to decypher what is meant in the sentence, on the whole though I get the gist of what you are saying, but you don't make it easy. I know that proof reading costs money, but Google is no option, believe me. The story on the whole is great, lots of British things, not making the mistake of using both UK and American English. Keep up your good work, had waited a while for this update, glad its come!

This post made me laugh more than these two scenes put together...

 

[HornyyPussy]

English is my only language, although I could probably manage to order a glass of water in French. As JJDrakken has pointed out, the parts you may be struggling with are written with the intent of denoting a Scottish accent. It may not be very successful, and people may need to read it a few times to get the gist of it, but I enjoy it.

I for one love it and yes, i have to re-read it 2-3 times

 

[IPsycho]

English is my only language, although I could probably manage to order a glass of water in French. As JJDrakken has pointed out, the parts you may be struggling with are written with the intent of denoting a Scottish accent. It may not be very successful, and people may need to read it a few times to get the gist of it, but I enjoy it.

Sorry about that, but it is no excuse for the bad grammar, love Scotland, lived in Lancashire on the border to the Lake District, we had a lot of Scots there, nice people and very friendly. I am German, but I went to school and college in England, the school was in London, so I know my English. The game is as I have already mentioned great, but those slips in the grammar make it, for a non Brit, "hard" to understand what your point is. Never the less, keep up the good work, can't wait for the next update

 

[Sadowdark]

Harriet did state she now prefers the company of women, and as "she who must not be named" (Mrs T) once said, "The lady's not for turning."

And there are so many women in the game that he would love to play sexually with Harriet

 

[Cavpal]

Phoebe wearing a QoS bikini made me drop this game. I hate that shit.

 

[sisco1986]

holy shit the sister ruins the entire game for me, does she gets better? not only the render is ugly but every time she talks i have to skip the entire scene

 

[therealmrwolf]

so how is the femom in this game

 

[therealmrwolf]

holy shit the sister ruins the entire game for me, does she gets better? not only the render is ugly but every time she talks i have to skip the entire scene

then stop playing it its that easy XD

 

[sisco1986]

then stop playing it its that easy XD

nah, i can keep playing and come here to qq about how the sister is garbage

 

[therealmrwolf]

nah, i can keep playing and come here to qq about how the sister is garbage

then stop bitching and moaning about it if you dont like it then stop playing it its that easy XD

 

[McLOVINu]

Ug, I'm finding it very difficult to play as the MC.... he is just not a good person.

 

[JJDrakken]

Ug, I'm finding it very difficult to play as the MC.... he is just not a good person.

It's rough at start, it will get better once your in Scotland. Author has not stated it, but we readers believe our MC is suffering from PTSD(Someone with it, I see some typical issues of it). But is slowly getting it reeled into a more controlled management. Scotland trip is a huge turn for that.

 

[MrBenny]

God dam-it Joker...your wt mod is telling me to pursue Grandma, who looks over a fucking 100 year old in the first image.

 

[LionBear]

Thanks for sharing this game.

 

[JJDrakken]

God dam-it Joker...your wt mod is telling me to pursue Grandma, who looks over a fucking 100 year old in the first image.





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I can't wait to Creampie her to!

 

[HornyyPussy]

God dam-it Joker...your wt mod is telling me to pursue Grandma, who looks over a fucking 100 year old in the first image.





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I know right, he knows how to make a good mod!

 

[TigerWolfe]

God dam-it Joker...your wt mod is telling me to pursue Grandma, who looks over a fucking 100 year old in the first image.





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Gotta catch 'em all?