VN Ren'Py Twinewood [v2.3] [Professional Degenerate]

[Danv]

Thanks for probably ruining things for future versions. Posting the vip code when the thing you used to grab it is literally linked in your signature. If I can't get vip enabled next version I'll know exactly who to thank

maybe dev will learn to use his brain first without doing stupid shit
hell, if even fucking SuperWriter can encrypt his paywall without locking whole game - everyone can

 

[Professional Degenerate]

umm, about this scene seems a little off to me.

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I'm looking forward to the next update and sexy time with Chloe and the sexy book lady oh shit I mean grimoire, sexy grimoire lady oh for the love Ero please don't tell Lia, I called her a book, I so don't want to wake up to Lia making extra creamy peanut butter with her feet if you know what I mean ha-ha

Lol, glad you enjoyed the update. Thanks for pointing out this little inconsistency, I'll get it fixed for the future.

 

[Professional Degenerate]

please for the love of everything holy please allows us to get chloe pregnant she's the most cutest and adorable goblin ive seen

I'm glad you like her! I haven't got any pregnancy content planned yet but If I do add it it will likely be closer to the end of the story. Still nothing set in stone yet so who knows.

 

[tortorus]

Sorry english is not my first language.
Nice game, i like the story but it feel a little rushed some time... the LI are nice, and the writting is nice.

Some point of the story i don t really like,

I m not a fan with the captain/ principal (there is a word error first time in class she say principil 2 time) studient can t be forced to nudity against there will, there are people who don t mind it, but there is one it s matter and it up to individual to chose how do it, its feel forced and i dont like this sadistic part, they are studients (and not people on a nude beach), and respect other usage is in heart of your game story rememeber. i would like a choice here to the mc say something and this scene not happen instead of ohh i m sorry for her... make this mop mc shine a little. Same in the locker room mix is fine, for some but not all, in public place as clothes shop there are changing rooms why not put one or two in the locker room...?

The game pulls us towards nudity is normal, but with awfull reason. for the interview for example, god creat us at this look, so you have to be nude.... you know it s metaphorically speaking...? not to take in the first degree... Love, generosity, angry, jealousy, destructive, creative and not two legs, two eyes, skin, bones, etc... a body it s an evolution due to our needs, i don t think god need leg (he everywhere at the same time), or ears (he can hear you when your not speaking), etc..... i m not even a believer and it feel ridiculous to me. It s a new world, a new god, i think you can do it way better than this.

The mc trust is really too easy to get, i mean wtf he was kidnap, sequester, interrogate under threat, rape to read his mind (witch is another form of rape for me), threatens his girlfriend to poke out an eye and a little "oh i m sorry for you but i have my reason for doing that" and he s good with it (She seem nice but the mom order all of this, i do not get fooled)... You know i really don t like mop mc, be nice ok but please... The enemy of my enemy is not necessarily my friend, some time it s just a good opportunity, a tool... and grope some boobs is clearly not enought to forget after one little talk. If it was me it is more " I have no questions, i want to leave now ! And if you want talk to me, do it by the rules of respect... i don t care your story or your problem and why should i trust any of what bad guy like you have to say ? i don t ask for any of this and i don t like you... bye ! i hope we never meet again." . like they said in anime you seem like, if a "i m sorry" was enought we dont need cops anymore (kidnap and sequester its 15 year in jail... just to say it s not light). really too fast on this part of the story, we need time and more event to trust them first and after want to train with them, and choice to say what we (player) think (all choice don t need to give point, some text change is enought). Maybe cut event, the kidnapping, the talk with attack, some good time, the training, etc... because for now it not water under the bridge for me has you say, i don t like them at all and i better choose to talk to paladin in the room when you come back and make them arrest. it s REALLY too easy, we need to ventout and feel they understand what they did was bad to forgive at less. that exaclty why i don t like kinetic novel they are not game, please tell me your not making one...

Good luck with your game M dev.

 

[Professional Degenerate]

Sorry english is not my first language.
Nice game, i like the story but it feel a little rushed some time... the LI are nice, and the writting is nice.

Some point of the story i don t really like,

I m not a fan with the captain/ principal (there is a word error first time in class she say principil 2 time) studient can t be forced to nudity against there will, there are people who don t mind it, but there is one it s matter and it up to individual to chose how do it, its feel forced and i dont like this sadistic part, they are studients (and not people on a nude beach), and respect other usage is in heart of your game story rememeber. i would like a choice here to the mc say something and this scene not happen instead of ohh i m sorry for her... make this mop mc shine a little.

The game pulls us towards nudity is normal, but with awfull reason. for the interview for example, god creat us at this look, so you have to be nude.... you know it s metaphorically speaking...? not to take in the first degree... Love, generosity, angry, jealousy, destructive, creative and not two legs, two eyes, skin, bones, etc... a body it s an evolution due to our needs, i don t think god need leg (he everywhere at the same time), or ears (he can hear you when your not speaking), etc..... i m not even a believer and it feel ridiculous to me. It s a new world, a new god, i think you can do it way better than this.

The mc trust is really too easy to get, i mean wtf he was kidnap, sequester, interrogate under threat, rape to read his mind (witch is another form of rape for me), threatens his girlfriend to poke out an eye and a little "oh i m sorry for you but i have my reason for doing that" and he s good with it (She seem nice but the mom order all of this, i do not get fooled)... You know i really don t like mop mc, be nice ok but please... The enemy of my enemy is not necessarily my friend, some time it s just a good opportunity, a tool... and grope some boobs is clearly not enought to forget after one little talk. If it was me it is more " I have no questions, i want to leave now ! And if you want talk to me, do it by the rules of respect... i don t care your story or your problem and why should i trust any of what bad guy like you have to say ? i don t ask for any of this and i don t like you... bye ! i hope we never meet again." . like they said in anime you seem like, if a "i m sorry" was enought we dont need cops anymore (kidnap and sequester its 15 year in jail... just to say it s not light). really too fast on this part of the story, we need time and more event to trust them first and after want to train with them, and choice to say what we (player) think (all choice don t need to give point, some text change is enought). Maybe cut event, the kidnapping, the talk with attack, some good time, the training, etc... because for now it not water under the bridge for me has you say, i don t like them at all and i better choose to talk to paladin in the room when you come back and make them arrest. Because it s REALLY too easy, we need to ventout and feel they understand what they did was bad to forgive at less. that exaclty why i don t like kinetic novel they are not game, please tell me your not making one...

Good luck with your game M dev.

Thanks for the feedback! I definitely get where you are coming from with some of your points here and as I continue to develop my writing skills I hope to improve upon aspects like these. I'm fairly new to the whole thing really and am sort of learning on the job lol. In the future I'll likely go back and edit some of these scenes, especially the interview scene you mentioned I'm not entirely happy with myself.

As for the witches MC definitely doesn't fully trust them yet especially after their intrusive introduction however they did give him a lot of answers so for now at least he sees them as a useful connection that it's a good idea to keep on good terms with. Hopefully I can convey this as the story goes on. Additionally reporting them to the agents would be a bit of a risky move for him as they can be very agressive and not understanding when it comes to breaking their rules.

At the end of the day however its still a porn game lol. My goal is to tell an interesting story whilst continuing to deliver fun lewd scenes for all sorts of tastes.

 

[Sngo]

It's not in the notes because it's not in the game. I've adjusted things as the updates have released. In the current build you will not see any sex scenes with non love interest characters unless you choose to enable voyeur content and then choose to see the scene in game.

In the notes you can put what the future holds not just what is right now in the game. It will save a lot of time to many people and less "angry" and deceived players will come here complain.

Yeah but I don't play game with cuck content avoidable/ skipabble or not but ty for the reply.

Anyway hf with it.

 

[tortorus]

As for the witches MC definitely doesn't fully trust them yet especially after their intrusive introduction however they did give him a lot of answers so for now at least he sees them as a useful connection that it's a good idea to keep on good terms with. Hopefully I can convey this as the story goes on. Additionally reporting them to the agents would be a bit of a risky move for him as they can be very agressive and not understanding when it comes to breaking their rules.

At the end of the day however its still a porn game lol. My goal is to tell an interesting story whilst continuing to deliver fun lewd scenes for all sorts of tastes.

A lot of answer...? Not really, the type of book he link (lia tell him not them), the name of the bad girl, and who they are (but minimum because of attack...), are not a lot of answer... And like i said a little talk is really not enought to forgive them for the crime they do, no talking to trust them to training... He forgive them "water under the bridge" and start to like them because hasty to see them again for training. You have not managed to convey to us the doubts of the mc, from what i read they are friend now.
For the paladin, magic is allowed if supervising, and except the captain who is a little hard, the paladin seem nice to me (you even take a bath with one of them...). strict but nice (not unusual for law enforcer). The paladin in the room forgive them, they are kid or near after all. And i think they can be intersted in him, he is a studient of the capitain of paladin and he is the first liked for century, how many time it will take to find another... he is a nice guy, i think they can recruit him without problem (a battle is starting)... another way for the story.
But it s your story and i think for now it s definitely a weak point here. A great minus for the story to me.

So you choose to make a masochist mop MC who don t care the bad come to him, ok... exactly the mc i really don t like with no personality only made to highlight the female character and a tool for the story... Again a great minus for me.

And please don t give me the excuse "it s a porn game lol", it s before this a visual NOVEL (if i just want to see 3d porn, i go here

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scene are a lot better). A lot of game here are in top because have great story and great porn, or average porn but with a great story they are on the top. if you want just creat a average game with a poor story and a nice sex scene in your first game, it s your choice. i ve hope for more, it s all. The idea of your world have potential.

Now i know what you think, i don t think i will come again before a long time. Again good luck with your game.

 

[Grimlar]

Just wanted to suggest that, if you can, applying the dialog outline settings to the stats/relationship page might be very helpful for people who have trouble reading the white text on a yellow background.
Otherwise enjoting the story so far.

 

[Absurdity]

Great update. This game hits a zone with the whole attitude towards nudity and all that very few games hit for me.

 

[Woodstock_1983]

If you didn't know better, you would think that Chloe is a loli lol

 

[BFC 78]

If you didn't know better, you would think that Chloe is a loli lol View attachment 2929756

actually Chloe is a Loli, but she is illegal age Loli and whoever doesn't know what is a illegal age Loli is, it is a woman that looks a lot younger than she actually is, so in other words, a petite woman that look very young for her age and I think that description suits little adorable Chloe very well, oh hell one part of me wants to give her head pats also cuddle her and other part of me wants see how many times I can double stuff Chloe's green Oreo until the no bun in the oven ward completely shatters ha-ha

 

[yilkin]

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[Egris]

can we bang the mom?

 

[AlexTorch]

Not a bad game, i loved the girls (especially chloe), good story but i must say, is a really bad move that the stats affect the scenes and gameplay, for example, if you karma is too low, you don't see fuuka (the first time), to see all you need to replay the episode again to search for cards and to increase the stats, for example, in the first time playing you go all karma, the second go all in perversity, also i know that probably the dev don't like the incest, but damn, that was a waste of a good waifu...Also the cards and some buttons could use a highlight to help colorblind people, not gonna lie that took me 5 min to see where the X where to close the menu.

 

[undead_sun]

 

[tnt171819]

❤❤❤❤❤❤

 

[SSiKK]

Is harem avoidable?

 

[DaredevilGG]

Can anyone say what the code is?

 

[Greily]

"That's two days from now!"

You can tell how much dear sweet mum needed to be fucked on every possible surface in that house ASAP, and what was that about having upstanding and respectful offspring? I laughed. Even with the option to not see those scenes, you really phone in how she's about to get stuffed lol.

The pace of this story suits the kind of game that is all about sex, there's too much story for one of those though. Slow down for the sake of the shy socially awkward gobbo or let us break her in faster. Being kidnapped and subjected to mind reading (AND blue balls!) is a serious negative, you can lampshade their behavior as hard as you want those witches are almost as bad as the villain. I want the option to report them to the paladins and work with them instead.

I can't say I understand the casual nudity. Like shouldn't getting a boner still be negative in public? There's a line between exhibitionism and naturalism and you're blurring it. If you mix everything together it's all gonna taste the same, nothing will be special. Especially if it's all available right from the start.

I will say that I like the variety of characters and the effort that goes into world building is respectable. I'm always cool with futa content that doesn't take it to the extreme.

I like the idea and I hope the story grows and the developer's skills continue to improve but I'm still on the fence about this one.

 

[Professional Degenerate]

Is harem avoidable?

I'm afraid not.