VN Ren'Py Onhold Twisted Memories [v0.8b] [BaiBai]

[Jeycii_]

its a bit sad to see that ppl didnt like the Leo content.
I mean yea, would have been nice to see more action with other girls but the Leo scenes were really short and were implemented the way that the flow of the story didnt get stopped.
It was done quite well IMO
Also its nice to see that "your friend" finally gets some game, it gives the game a more wholesome feeling overall. The MC will get all the other girls and moms anyway so its a nice touch and we probably wont see too much of them later anyway so no problems

 

[binglebangles]

its a bit sad to see that ppl didnt like the Leo content.
I mean yea, would have been nice to see more action with other girls but the Leo scenes were really short and were implemented the way that the flow of the story didnt get stopped.
It was done quite well IMO
Also its nice to see that "your friend" finally gets some game, it gives the game a more wholesome feeling overall. The MC will get all the other girls and moms anyway so its a nice touch and we probably wont see too much of them later anyway so no problems

I don't have a strong opinion either way on the Leo/Melena thing, but it does pose questions. She's not attracted to Leo. She was horny under the influence of the potion. Will she catch feelings on her own? Will MC need to keep up the ruse or bring Leo in on the potions, and be a constant supplier?

 

[Bingoogus]

scene d6s5 (34)

"And not much longer after that, you just left her to herself, telling her, that she should surprise you with her final choice while you sat down on a [mcname]ch, quietly listening to the monotonous pop music of the store..."

Why?... If you use the default name you get 'bench' like would make sense but if you renamed the MC you get a nonsense word... for what reason would you not just write 'bench'? I got 'Eddych'...

 

[Small-pp-22]

You are absolutly right. But I do think if we should get an asshole route.

The whole point is for the guy to redo his life to the best possible outcome. Being an asshole to his best friend isn't the way for that in my opinion

 

[Jeycii_]

I don't have a strong opinion either way on the Leo/Melena thing, but it does pose questions. She's not attracted to Leo. She was horny under the influence of the potion. Will she catch feelings on her own? Will MC need to keep up the ruse or bring Leo in on the potions, and be a constant supplier?

depending on how often they see and interact with each other later, they can certainly grow feelings for each other. The most important step was to make Melena aware of Leo.
One could also just make it happen by dialogue:
"Oh yea did you hear Leo and Melena were spotted in a cafe together?
Kyaaa no wayy, really?
Yes yes, no doubt."
Thats no problem whatsoever imo, just let poor Leo have some game, he already fell into that NTR hole once, haha

 

[Small-pp-22]

Maybe Leo will ask for help on how to fuck her, like a practical demonstration, and MC will oblige, being the good friend he is, then walks out as Melena regains consciousness.

Not happening, we won't see a scene with any girl other than the main girls for mc, except maybe bonus scenes

 

[Jeycii_]

Not happening, we won't see a scene with any girl other than the main girls for mc, except maybe bonus scenes

yep. and i seriously hope it stays that way. we already got enough girls and enough possible content for all of them hehe

 

[NotSoTasty]

welp, that's one way to achieve "immaculate conception"... noice

 

[thememeguy123]

I personally didn't mind the Leo stuff too, some bro move by the mc also getting rid of that annoying slut I guess

 

[Ktwoc]

yep. and i seriously hope it stays that way. we already got enough girls and enough possible content for all of them hehe

Yeah we have enough. But if Bai Bai finish the game and won't to milk it it can be extra content. Like a What if scenario.

 

[FlinPaltwell]

Why?... If you use the default name you get 'bench' like would make sense but if you renamed the MC you get a nonsense word... for what reason would you not just write 'bench'? I got 'Eddych'...

I noticed this too. I'm guessing that BaiBai wrote a chunk of the story by just writing in "Ben" and then later did a Ctrl-F > Replace All function on every instance of "ben" with "[mcname]," and that line got caught in the crossfire on accident.

 

[Niraeza]

How do you unlock the bonus scene where the mom is masturbating with her toys from the taxes box? I saw that I had a locked scene in the second to last slot and checked the files for it.

 

[Ktwoc]

I noticed this too. I'm guessing that BaiBai wrote a chunk of the story by just writing in "Ben" and then later did a Ctrl-F > Replace All function on every instance of "ben" with "[mcname]," and that line got caught in the crossfire on accident.

Took a break to enjoy the update?

 

[Alanray64]

Here is a gallery unlocker, won't work for future updates but it'll work for v0.8. Also fixed a bug where choosing the Stephi dressing room bj/boobjob in the gallery would cause a crash

installation: drag n drop into `game/` folder

for BaiBai if u see this: the bug was "d6s5v2brp" should be "d6s6v2brp"

btw the Stephi beach scene where mc is choking her gets kinda dark tbh, take that as a warning cos I certainly didn't expect it

Thanks for that.

 

[Bingoogus]

I noticed this too. I'm guessing that BaiBai wrote a chunk of the story by just writing in "Ben" and then later did a Ctrl-F > Replace All function on every instance of "ben" with "[mcname]," and that line got caught in the crossfire on accident.

And that's why when doing a search and replace you should add a space after the word in one round and a comma after it in a second round, i.e 'ben ' and 'ben,'. 99% sure you're right so kudos to your deductive skills.

 

[Alanray64]

Just played the latest update and thoroughly enjoyed this one. Definitely like to see more of the Emi, Lola dynamic. Much potential there.

great game.

 

[Varrock]

music choices in this game are surprisingly good, anyone know the track that plays during corruption beach scene for steph

 

[HentaiKami]

depending on how often they see and interact with each other later, they can certainly grow feelings for each other. The most important step was to make Melena aware of Leo.
One could also just make it happen by dialogue:
"Oh yea did you hear Leo and Melena were spotted in a cafe together?
Kyaaa no wayy, really?
Yes yes, no doubt."
Thats no problem whatsoever imo, just let poor Leo have some game, he already fell into that NTR hole once, haha

I mean, based on the text bit from when they are being dropped off to their homes, it seems like Melena might be bit more innocent than she lets on, at least to feelings and it seemed like she had developed some feelings towards Leo. Thanks to MC's help.

 

[zeraligator]

It's such a strange experience, the writer seems genuinely talented but... Has he even heard of spellchecking?
(I'm assuming it's 'he' because... you know)

 

[Kame-Sennin]

Tired of seeing the same woman getting banged by MC every update. I think it is time to move on to the next pussy