Ren'Py Completed Twists of My Life [v1.1.2] [Novel]

[botc76]

The first version I played was good, but with serious flaws, this one now is turning out to be one of the top ten games on this forum, if it keeps up the quality.
Your girls are gorgeous without ballon breasts or anything and you actually have a plot going AND your decisions make a difference.

Right now I'm just trying to get as much out of the girls as possible, but I will totally make a playthrough for all the girls separately as I've found parts about all of them that I liked.

If I had a bit money left, I would absolutely support you. You would deserve it, alas I have no means to support anything more than I do.

Anyway, highest rating for this update and a very high one for the game in general.

 

[Dreew]

Really a good game! One of the best of this forum, imho deserve to be a popular game.

 

[Andarilho]

Hey, @novel
Nice update, i'm really liking your game and wish you success with it!

The relationship with Helen is the least appealing aspect of the game for me (at least for now).

I fucking love petite girls like Helga with those puppy eyes, and i would love a romantic/dating route with her, but there is NO way i could say no to Alanna and Anne, not just because of the HOT and well written sex scenes, but for their personalities as well.

Just a small detail, I don't know if this was intentional, but I really liked that no one but the player notices how wet and blushed Anne was during the gym scene.

Keep up the good work. :FeelsGoodMan:

 

[botc76]

Hey, @novel
Nice update, i'm really liking your game and wish you success with it!

The relationship with Helen is the least appealing aspect of the game for me (at least for now).

I fucking love petite girls like Helga with those puppy eyes, and i would love a romantic/dating route with her, but there is NO way i could say no to Alanna and Anne, not just because of the HOT and well written sex scenes, but for their personalities as well.

Just a small detail, I don't know if this was intentional, but I really liked that no one but the player notices how wet and blushed Anne was during the gym scene.

Keep up the good work. :FeelsGoodMan:

I bet Natalie noticed as well.

 

[novel]

Hey, @novel
Nice update, i'm really liking your game and wish you success with it!

The relationship with Helen is the least appealing aspect of the game for me (at least for now).

I fucking love petite girls like Helga with those puppy eyes, and i would love a romantic/dating route with her, but there is NO way i could say no to Alanna and Anne, not just because of the HOT and well written sex scenes, but for their personalities as well.

Just a small detail, I don't know if this was intentional, but I really liked that no one but the player notices how wet and blushed Anne was during the gym scene.

Keep up the good work. :FeelsGoodMan:

Thank you. On the choice, the story continues. But the harem in the game will not. Still have someone to choose. (Google translator)

I bet Natalie noticed as well.

Maybe)​

 

[markus T]

Hey, @novel
Nice update, i'm really liking your game and wish you success with it!

The relationship with Helen is the least appealing aspect of the game for me (at least for now).

I fucking love petite girls like Helga with those puppy eyes, and i would love a romantic/dating route with her, but there is NO way i could say no to Alanna and Anne, not just because of the HOT and well written sex scenes, but for their personalities as well.

Just a small detail, I don't know if this was intentional, but I really liked that no one but the player notices how wet and blushed Anne was during the gym scene.

Keep up the good work. :FeelsGoodMan:

I agree with all of that...hopefully helga is still an option if we chose the anne and alanna routes. I'm not sure how I feel about helen atm...she seems conflicted, like there is a reason she is with that dbag. at one point she said that "he will.." and then the mc interrupted her before she could finish. kinda sounds like he is abusive in some way if she tries to leave him....just a guess.

 

[tomy91]

Wow! This is quality! The story and the renders are very professional.

 

[Dajose]

respect. i am im impressed. doesnt happen often. @novel

 

[novel]

Wow! This is quality! The story and the renders are very professional.

Render professional?) here thank you. I Daz first opened before the beginning of development. Inexperienced. (Google translation)

 

[Aprilsun]

Render professional?) here thank you. I Daz first opened before the beginning of development. Inexperienced. (Google translation)

Well colour me impressed if this is beginner level. I really want to see your renders in say six months time!.

 

[novel]

Well colour me impressed if this is beginner level. I really want to see your renders in say six months time!.

5 months I work. In September I started. October 15 was build 0.1 (in Russian). the Seventh of December was 0.2. There are a lot altered again. The computer is old. (Google translation)

 

[Andarilho]

I bet Natalie noticed as well.

I also think she noticed.
I just thought it was a nice touch not having the MC saying something like " - Wow! Let me say in this text how wet and blushing Anne is, because i'm pretty sure the player will be busy fapping and will won't notice this nice small detail!" x'D

 

[Joi_fan]

@novel I hope you're going to bring older girl(s) like 45-50 years old, Alanna is just barely older than the students.

 

[martin Nielsen]

I dont have any complaints.
Hats off to you my good sir and you can call me impressed.

 

[Andarilho]

Thank you. On the choice, the story continues. But the harem in the game will not. Still have someone to choose. (Google translator)

I'm up for a non harem route (as long as you can make all the girls equally interesting). This will add some variety and replayability to your game while fans are waiting impatiently for the next update.

 

[novel]

@novel I hope you're going to bring older girl(s) like 45-50 years old, Alanna is just barely older than the students.

Sorry, but no. 1) Not my fetish. 2) The Key characters are all introduced. (Google translation)

 

[novel]

All people are different. All want different things. Somebody put the game someone 1 too hard for the main character. 90% of me blamed for too soft of a hero I will answer immediately. The General gist of the game I have already thought out. I accept tips in the story, but no more. Fetishes, characters I don't sell. Sorry. The plot for me in the first place. (Google translation)

 

[Reese286]

The more I play it the better I like it and it will be very interesting to see where this goes. I think I've played most/all of the paths and I like how things are shaping up across the board. Sure you start with Helen but I'm not interested in pursuing her. She's cute, no question but no matter how fine she is who needs all that drama? Helga too is gorgeous, but look a bit deeper and you see she's carrying around a large bag of issues and anger, why buy into crazy? And if Helga does have an attraction to you she has no trust or respect, she believed and internalized the rumors without giving you a chance ... leave that one alone, it can only end badly. Rule #1 don't kick your own ass or climb on some emotional roller coaster to no-where.

The Professor tho is a keeper _ She is smoking hot and your one-time thing is a great shared memory, plus you have made a valuable friend and ally; that's Win-Win and the door to the future is open. The way I see it the sane option for a relationship and regular pussy is Ann. Beautiful, smart, sexy af and she has my back. No question, Ann has got to be my go-to babe. I'm supposed to be finishing law-school and starting a life, right. You, Ann and Alana are all planning to leaving this town in a year or so, where to next? With Ann there is no downside, no heavy baggage or land-mines to avoid, you can focus on the road, get across the finish line and enjoy the ride. I see lots of possibilities and the future is bright.

 

[skadadle]

this game is written so good! the renders are amazing, the characters are beautiful.
i wish there was an achievements section or scene counter so i can make sure i didn't miss anything of this gem.

 

[novel]

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Ann a lovely girl. To me it is like the same. It is one of the key characters. Wait development with her. Although Helena's nothing wrong the main character did) so that's just between us. Others do not say, let them guess. (Google translation)