Good game , love the writing in sex scenes , keep up the good work .
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- Jul 4, 2017
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I don't think i'm seeing what he dev is seeing.
I just played through this update and it was good ... I know people are more critical of their own work but outside of a few spelling errors I quite enjoyed it.
I just played through this update and it was good ... I know people are more critical of their own work but outside of a few spelling errors I quite enjoyed it.
- Aug 27, 2017
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Excellent update as usual. However, the images are all saved as webp now... that's a huge pain to convert all the images lol. Regardless, I still was looking through them and found a new scene with Thea but couldn't trigger it. How do you get the new images with Thea?
Excellent game OP. I'm surprised that this is your first game and you don't think too highly of it because it's one of the better VNs that I've played. The characters are distinct from each other without being stereotypes. It's refreshing to play a game that doesn't rely on incest or the MC being a massive perv that peaks on anyone (although tbf he doesn't have to peak much at home) or there being some kind of blackmailing.
Sex scenes are great, well written. I like that the MC has more stamina than the women and that it doesn't always end with the characters cumming together. That shit is so rare IRL. Overall the game feels realistic with the only unrealistic aspects being what's expected of an entertainment medium, namely characters in general being more attractive etc.
Finally, good job on getting help with the translations. Even though I'm fairly adequate at writing English it's noticeable that I'm not an English speaker so I'd always want someone better than me to make sure it's up to par. I wish more devs would do that because I'm sure there are plenty of capable people that would want to help with such things.
Sex scenes are great, well written. I like that the MC has more stamina than the women and that it doesn't always end with the characters cumming together. That shit is so rare IRL. Overall the game feels realistic with the only unrealistic aspects being what's expected of an entertainment medium, namely characters in general being more attractive etc.
Finally, good job on getting help with the translations. Even though I'm fairly adequate at writing English it's noticeable that I'm not an English speaker so I'd always want someone better than me to make sure it's up to par. I wish more devs would do that because I'm sure there are plenty of capable people that would want to help with such things.
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and install this and you should be able to see webp stuff as if they were jpg. It was linked on the discord awhile back.
- Nov 25, 2017
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Restarting from the beginning ain't bad. They rewrote the first few days, new dialogue made me hate Helena less. But she's still a prude even on her route. Helga meanwhile gives you all the attention you would want..
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- Dec 5, 2017
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What a misfortune. I'm just sad now. No, I don't care.
People. If I nose the concept, it was realized. You don't have to play, I don't care. Well, be you elder. No one was going to fulfill your wishes.
I am glad to meet here an adult formed personality.
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- Aug 18, 2017
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I don't dislike Helena as most here, but she can't compete with Ann and Helga, even without the whole Vlad thing
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Where does one get bikini bottoms that magically move to the side when wet?
This could be a great game if there were more choices, decisions, branching dialogues...etc. The thing that my character has little options to avoid encounters with girls I wouldn't touch with a ten feet pole is disappointing.
I understand the need to put sex scenes into every update to satisfy the patrons every month, but it really hinders creativity and immersion.
This could be a great game if there were more choices, decisions, branching dialogues...etc. The thing that my character has little options to avoid encounters with girls I wouldn't touch with a ten feet pole is disappointing.
I understand the need to put sex scenes into every update to satisfy the patrons every month, but it really hinders creativity and immersion.
- Mar 1, 2018
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I liked this update, and as people already pointed out you are too hard on yourself @novel which can be a good thing, but give yourself a break, you are doing good job.
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- Jul 4, 2017
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Ann is, and will remain, my favourite. My GMHA above I do hope we can have a proper relationship with her at some point however this update did one thing I did not see coming ..... it made me love Helga.
I thought she was a bit too odd and boring for a while and thought i'd just stick with Ann but that beach date put doubts in my mind.
It settled one thing anyway, if a full relationship with Ann isn't possible then i'm going hard on Helga.
I don't hate Helena but while she has a great looking character model she doesn't have that pull that Ann has and Helga just beats her on the adorable side.
I know i'm going to have to play the forceful route in a few updates to see what the short haired blonde is all about though.
I thought she was a bit too odd and boring for a while and thought i'd just stick with Ann but that beach date put doubts in my mind.
It settled one thing anyway, if a full relationship with Ann isn't possible then i'm going hard on Helga.
I don't hate Helena but while she has a great looking character model she doesn't have that pull that Ann has and Helga just beats her on the adorable side.
I know i'm going to have to play the forceful route in a few updates to see what the short haired blonde is all about though.
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Yeah, I agree with you, and as someone else pointed out earlier, Helga is kind of girl that you want to marry, settle down, and have a family with. :extremelyhappy:
If I had to "rank" girls based on what we saw and know so far, for me it would be:
Anne>Alanna>Helga>Irene>Helena>Thea
- Jan 28, 2018
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Not sure if i'm 100% right on all this but a lot of the creators making more than 1k a month have games with incest in them BTW i like a lot of them and also a lot of them creators have been around for awhile and built up trust and a following. If you keep it up and show you are serious with making good games that get completed and with some luck and help from people getting your name out it may happen with you. Now i just started this game on like day 11 i think so i can't speak to much on the game but so far it is good.
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The gentle way is the one i'm gonna pick i think i prefer the girls from that like Anne, Helena, Helga just wish Anne would have told me about that asshole hope i get to kick his ass i'm on day 11 i think.