@novel: congratultations. You have a real talent to write sex scenes, it's awesomely erotic, a great success
On the other hand, the scene un the dark with alanna, is invisible on my screen, maybe use a full moon light throw the windows to make it visible. I'm not a fan of unatural breasts but i like alanna, even if i prefer ann. Helga as somthing "not human" in her face that i can't define.
I have also bugs everywhere if i take other paths than the main. I just copied the "saves" folder from the previous version to the newest. Maybe it is a compatibility pb.
Once again, congratulation, it is a very very good game.