VN Ren'Py Completed Two Weeks [Ep. 6 Fixed] [Madek]

[dekmma]

Indeed, feedback is important, and this is the last bit of feedback I will give:

You have an amazing piece of work, here. This game was literally near-perfect from start to finish. Your animations, though short, were some of the best/most realistic I've ever seen. Your character design is next level. You are also very good at story-writing, all things considered.

Don't let it go to waste with that rushed mess of an ending. It's not too late to tweak it, to allow the chapter to wrap up a little more gracefully. I'm sure current/future fans would vastly appreciate just a little tweaking. You don't necessarily have to add more to the story-- maybe just make the sex animations a bit longer and then instead of just dropping "THE END," include some sort of outro credits that lets players know if we can expect a sequel. At the very least, an inner monologue from the main character (directly after the final sex scene) reflecting on the days events, and thinking ahead to future events would add far more grace to the end of the story.

If we're not getting a sequel, maybe an epilogue of some kind right before the game ends (that tells players the fates of the characters/explains what happens further down the road and where everyone ends up. For example, "(Sister) and (player) struggle to rekindle their relationship after such and such, yada yada," -- "(Mother) grows obsessed with (player), and ends up moving to live closer to him," "(Bum) goes on a killing rampage and ends up getting life in an insane asylum."

You know... just something to add a little dignity to the ending.

Thanks for not taking my criticism too harshly. You're talented. Mistakes happen.

Okay, I'll think about it.

 

[Shardoom]

Okay, I'll think about it.

I really think you should do this too. Two weeks was really really good and could/should have gone on for quite a bit longer. You did both yourself and your fans a disservice by wrapping it up the way you did. I'd advise you to make an 'official' all the way through version with an enhanced ending. Doesn't have to be especially long, just polished so we know you respect us players as your fans/patrons.

 

[bagodoughnuts]

Okay, I'll think about it.

I would love to see you go back and "tweak" the sex scenes with sis and mom. Make them long and sexy. A bit of kinky sex, too.
I'm looking forward to all of your future work.

 

[victor659]

Ok i just play this game primarily of the sister character. She is one of the hottest characters i have ever see in adult games. But i am dissapointing for the ending and the sex scenes, i don't know why the dev decided to end the game and what was at his mind, it is supposed to last two weeks not 6 days. Also it does not make any sense the previous day sister to refuse a kiss and the next day to have sex. I believe that he had other plans how the story progress when he started this game.

But because i hear many complaints i want to make a general comment for incest theme games. Because of patreon policy the devs had three options
1. Cancel the game and start a new with non-incest theme
2. Slow down or hold on the progress of the game until something change to patreon or another site comes out
3. Continue the game with many changes and by removing the incest theme providing some uncenstored patch that the only thing that does is to change the word "baby" to "sister" or "mom"

For me the best option would be the 1st and maybe the 2st if the waiting was not so long. But most devs select the 3rd option because they think that was the most beneficial for them but it has as a result to ruin more or less their games.

 

[Seagal]

Personally, I think he should just move on, unless he's going to actually continue Two Weeks or make a direct sequel. If he isn't going to do one of those things then there's no reason to waste time and go back and clean up the ending and improve the sex scenes. I mean, he tried to finish it up and end it a bit for everyone, and he didn't have to do that. He obviously doesn't like the game and wants nothing to do with it at this point. He's killed off Alison (M) and has now said that Jennifer (S) is going to be a main character in the next game. So just move on and focus on the next project.

Jennifer being a main character is a big plus for me, and has got me interested. But I'll be honest, I'm not a huge fan of slow paced games, and this new project is going to be that again. So I'll be waiting a while to see how this one develops and picks up before I jump on board with my support.

My advice would be to find a good balance between the slow pace you desire and sexual content with this new project. Remember you're making a porn game in the end. So 1 year of development time with little to no sexual content probably isn't a good thing. You know these games don't need to end when the characters have sex or something. I mean, that's when the fun's just begun! Anyways, I think if you can strike the right balance, and release updates on a consistent basis you'll do alright. I'll be rooting for you to succeed here @dekmma.

 

[Walter Victor]

Ok i just play this game primarily of the sister character. She is one of the hottest characters i have ever see in adult games. But i am dissapointing for the ending and the sex scenes, i don't know why the dev decided to end the game and what was at his mind, it is supposed to last two weeks not 6 days. Also it does not make any sense the previous day sister to refuse a kiss and the next day to have sex. I believe that he had other plans how the story progress when he started this game.

But because i hear many complaints i want to make a general comment for incest theme games. Because of patreon policy the devs had three options
1. Cancel the game and start a new with non-incest theme
2. Slow down or hold on the progress of the game until something change to patreon or another site comes out
3. Continue the game with many changes and by removing the incest theme providing some uncenstored patch that the only thing that does is to change the word "baby" to "sister" or "mom"

For me the best option would be the 1st and maybe the 2st if the waiting was not so long. But most devs select the 3rd option because they think that was the most beneficial for them but it has as a result to ruin more or less their games.

The current Patreon policy has been in effect, and enforced, for over a year now (November, 2017?). So, your 'waiting for a change to Patreon' option is unrealistic, I'm afraid. Nor have I seen another site that is a viable alternative to Patreon. What some developers have done is create their own sites to distribute the offending games. That leaves a funding problem, which different developers resolve in different ways.

Cancelling the game has been done, much to the dismay of Patrons. As has changing to a non-incest theme, which also tends to piss off the people paying for them.

Uncensored patches and startup choices have often been used. But their usage is dependent on the complexity of the code already developed. Sometimes it's easy. Sometimes not so much... which often leads to cancellation... and dismay.

 

[cutebooyy]

Hi guys. How to get this tease!!!! And how to have sex with sister!!?? Thank u..

 

[Eerie Entity]

Personally, I'd absolutely love it if the story would continue, in either a sequel, or just keep updating this game
I don't know, could maybe even rewrite the entire last update and come up with new scenes and stuff for it, stuff that makes sense based on where things left off in the update before this one. And the update we got now to wrap things up, that could just be some special non-canon stuff, taken from the main game and maybe put into a special scenes gallery or something
I don't know, I'd just really love this story/game to continue, I'd miss them three ladies too much, love all their models and characters

 

[victor659]

The current Patreon policy has been in effect, and enforced, for over a year now (November, 2017?). So, your 'waiting for a change to Patreon' option is unrealistic, I'm afraid. Nor have I seen another site that is a viable alternative to Patreon. What some developers have done is create their own sites to distribute the offending games. That leaves a funding problem, which different developers resolve in different ways.

Cancelling the game has been done, much to the dismay of Patrons. As has changing to a non-incest theme, which also tends to piss off the people paying for them.

Uncensored patches and startup choices have often been used. But their usage is dependent on the complexity of the code already developed. Sometimes it's easy. Sometimes not so much... which often leads to cancellation... and dismay.

You are right. The thing is that when you remove the incest theme and you change the story and what you have in your mind and you just apply a "name changing patch" the result is the story and the dialogues to not make sense and you just ruin more or less your game. Patreon does not allowed incest games and the patrons have no reason to complain or to be pissed off, they can fund and support the creators outside of patreon if there is that option.

The best thing for the creator of this game is to make a new non-incest game with a good story and Jennifer as the main female character.

 

[Eerie Entity]

You are right. The thing is that when you remove the incest theme and you change the story and what you have in your mind and you just apply a "name changing patch" the result is the story and the dialogues to not make sense and you just ruin more or less your game. Patreon does not allowed incest games and the patrons have no reason to complain or to be pissed off, they can fund and support the creators outside of patreon if there is that option.

The best thing for the creator of this game is to make a new non-incest game with a good story and Jennifer as the main female character.

I don't know how big Madek's team is, but one option could be removing "Two Weeks" from Patreon, and create a website of its own, where you could then purchase the game/updates via BuyMeCoffee i.e. and then on Patreon have a different game in production, it's what MrDots was forced to do with DMD and Melody, and it works for them nicely. Then just come up with a production cycle, how often would update "Two Weeks" and how often the new game.
Like I've said, I'd absolutely love "Two Weeks" being continued, I wouldn't mind at all if it would see an update only every two months or so, so long as it is being continued, I've been a fan of it since the beginning, always saw the potential (love the models, the art, the atmosphere, the story, the dynamics and build-up), and so does many other people, I'm definitely not alone in this

 

[victor659]

It is not easy to focus on two games simultaneously especially if you haven't the support and the team that MrDots have. Even DMD is not as good as the first Chapter was.

Hi guys. How to get this tease!!!! And how to have sex with sister!!?? Thank u..

I don't think that all photos have the tease option, i think only 2 of them has. The same is true for zoom options. I don't know the requirement to have sex with Jennifer, i just select that i like all the swimsuits, i select the 2 tease options and i allowed her to take the money earlier

 

[Eerie Entity]

It is not easy to focus on two games simultaneously especially if you haven't the support and the team that MrDots have. Even DMD is not as good as the first Chapter was.


I don't think that all photos have the tease option, i think only 2 of them has. The same is true for zoom options. I don't know the requirement to have sex with Jennifer, i just select that i like all the swimsuits and i allowed her to take the money earlier

DMD has only gotten better since Chapter 1, the art has gotten better, character development goes on nicely, story goes forward very nicely, and stuff he has learned developing Melody, he has been able to implement to DMD

It's not easy to develop two games at the same time, hell, it's not easy to develop even one, not unless you have the finances and the time. But a lot of devs work full time and still comes up with good monthly updates with a decent amount of content, AND they aren't backed up on Patreon as much as they'd like to be. Point being, everything is doable if you're determined
And I do believe that his numbers would grow steadily if he kept developing "Two Weeks", it already has quite a lot of fans, and once there's more content (lets exclude the previous update from the equation), I'm sure even more people would find their way to it, and more fans means more supporters

 

[Seagal]

I don't know how big Madek's team is, but one option could be removing "Two Weeks" from Patreon, and create a website of its own, where you could then purchase the game/updates via BuyMeCoffee i.e. and then on Patreon have a different game in production, it's what MrDots was forced to do with DMD and Melody, and it works for them nicely. Then just come up with a production cycle, how often would update "Two Weeks" and how often the new game.
Like I've said, I'd absolutely love "Two Weeks" being continued, I wouldn't mind at all if it would see an update only every two months or so, so long as it is being continued, I've been a fan of it since the beginning, always saw the potential (love the models, the art, the atmosphere, the story, the dynamics and build-up), and so does many other people, I'm definitely not alone in this

Madek couldn't even handle a consistent production cycle with one game on his plate. Working on two games simultaneously would be a disaster.

I'd really like to see Two Weeks continued also, but clearly he hates the game and wants to move on. He killed Alison and probably wants people to stop asking for Two Weeks to continue. Incest isn't the issue here either. It's just another excuse. That could be worked around with a patch or something. I mean, these Patreon rules / problems started before this game was even created.

I dunno, we'll see what he comes up with for his new project, and if it has the same appeal as this one did. I'd think just losing the incest would cause some of the potential interest to disappear. I mean, Two Weeks was really carried by that B+S relationship.

 

[Eerie Entity]

I mean, Two Weeks was really carried by that B+S relationship.

While I definitely like the sis, I was more about about the mom, there's just something about gorgeous mature women that appeals to me

 

[Nerttu]

Something to comfort you guys !!!!!! Try game "I am in heaven" (ep 1 and 2), both needed !!!!!

 

[Eerie Entity]

Something to comfort you guys !!!!!! Try game "I am in heaven" (ep 1 and 2), both needed !!!!!

Already have, and it is a great one indeed, haha

 

[supermanz95]

I don't get it, if you are not the MC from this game in the next project, who are you suppose to be then ? Since sister is supposedly appearing as one of the main cast. Over all what a messy situation lol

 

[victor659]

Madek couldn't even handle a consistent production cycle with one game on his plate. Working on two games simultaneously would be a disaster.

I'd really like to see Two Weeks continued also, but clearly he hates the game and wants to move on. He killed Alison and probably wants people to stop asking for Two Weeks to continue. Incest isn't the issue here either. It's just another excuse. That could be worked around with a patch or something. I mean, these Patreon rules / problems started before this game was even created.

I dunno, we'll see what he comes up with for his new project, and if it has the same appeal as this one did. I'd think just losing the incest would cause some of the potential interest to disappear. I mean, Two Weeks was really carried by that B+S relationship.

I don't know exactly why this creator decided to end this game but incest is not an excuse. Sooner or later creators realized that they can't continue to make games of this theme. As for patches they don't change the story or the dialogues, at the restaurant scene with Alison for example is like you talk to a girlfriend not your mom. If you don't care about story and dialogues and you skip until the sex scene and you like the girl to say "fuck me bro" instead of "fuck me baby" then ok but this is not an "incest theme game". You can do it with all the games by applying such a patch. Patches and forced changes make things worse. Just choose a theme that the site allow and create the game as you like.

My opinion is the creator to make a new game with Jennifer as the main female character. Anyway good luck to the creator whatever he will decide to do.

 

[Walter Victor]

Madek couldn't even handle a consistent production cycle with one game on his plate. Working on two games simultaneously would be a disaster.

You've got that right. His problem is with the programming. Unless he gets a whole lot better, or finds someone else to do the coding, he will just program himself into more blind alleys. Great story teller, with great ideas, who doesn't know how to integrate them into a game.

 

[Walter Victor]

DMD has only gotten better since Chapter 1, the art has gotten better, character development goes on nicely, story goes forward very nicely, and stuff he has learned developing Melody, he has been able to implement to DMD

Mr Dots has a full team to work on his games, and has made a ton of money. I believe Madek is by his lonesome.