VN Ren'Py Abandoned Under Pressure [Ch.2] [GrumpyGranny]

[tommy65]

will follow this...i like the tags......usually only start pledging after 0.3 if its good.
So far there isnt much content...but lets see

 

[joe powa]

Lesbian content planned ?

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

I just wanna know if we can finally kick the "obligatory old pervert" in the balls as we violently tell him to fuck off.

 

[tehcatsmiaw]

Nice, finally something different than fucking sisters.

yea bro, the premise of this game is really original
don't get me wrong, I really like these kind of corruption games, but let's not act like anyone is reinventing the wheel
that being said, I really like the renders

 

[kav33]

Can she go full Lesbian and not fuck the usual male crowd ? (ugly, old, fat, black) ?

not all white guys are ugly old or fat

 

[SummmerP]

already rated it! this is great! ugly bastards and naive hot girl is gold.

Your "review" and this one post right here, my friend... got me interested
short & straight
I'll be checking it out in a moment

 

[pkfast]

good start, so far it kinetic novel. hope we get some choices later on.

 

[esoom]

"Graphic violence", hmm interesting.

 

[leyre]

how can there be NTR if its a female mc? its she a lesbian?

 

[baka]

so, my first impression:
- hate those jeans, remind me of the early 3D rendering
- hello george, so he is one of the male pornstar in this game.
- hello floyd, another well know male pornstar, old and skinny.
- a comedy, b-story, the typical all men are depraved and horny.
- hobo's is a most
- stupid comments like: "if you show us your boobs, we will trust you" tells me exactly what kind of game this is

sometimes I wonder if its the same dev from other "similar" games,
the story is similar, the situations are similar and render quality the same, or it could just be that someone enjoy this kind of game and makes a "clone" of it.

well, like the other, it will not be something I will enjoy much, it will be rushed, no suspensions and the corruptions will go ultrafast.

 

[myuhinny]

I tried it out but it's just going to be another one of those generic female protagonist type games where you take them around to get raped molested and fucked by every Tom dick and ugly fat bastard in the game. Same old same old she is a new teacher (surprise surprise) boss is the generic ugly fat bastard ugly (surprise surprise) old turd next door (surprise surprise). The scene on the train 90%+ of females would of turned around either gave them a piece of their mind or beat his ugly ass like a 5 dollar whore but can't have a strong female type that stands up for themselves can we because how can you make them the generic boring ass whore if they can stand up for themselves right. By the time I was at the hobo stuff I had skip unseen text turned on just so I could get to the end as I no longer cared what anyone was saying. Doubt I'll download this again.

 

[xmilteach]

Thx

 

[thunderkiss321]

What is this?!

Pripyet Marshes Area Female Illegal Immigrant Undocumented Worker Simulator

"I Natasha, I be housekeeper or stripper or find nice neckbeard"

The male version comes with a long drain snake.

 

[Cannonspike]

Has some potentional, still early stages, although only thing that bugs me is that I play renply games for the choices, when I find games with 0 choices it lose my interests quickly

I like games that allow me choices

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

Is Freddy Mercury going to make a cameo in the Game

 

[Tsathoggua]

It is scientifically proven that if you play more NTR games, You cure Cancer!

HOORAAAAAYYYY FOR NTR!!!

 

[Mormont]

One of these days I'm going to play one of these games and the female MC is going to rip a guys arm off for touching her

 

[Deleted member 791157]

Well seems pretty generic to the genre, but i like the genre and it's hard to find it done well. So I have high hopes this one will succeed where others haven't! Good luck!

What I don't understand about all these comments is why would you expect the protag to be strong and beat the shit out of everyone? That would mean no porn scenes?! Just a lady beating the shit outta pervy men?! Doesn't sound like a very good adult game to me. The genre is submissive female protag so if you don't like that I don't know why you're here.

 

[GrumpyGranny]

This is kinda issue I was facing and I decided that I am making porn. If you take more prudent (maybe more realistic) protagonist, you end up with AWAM (I like that game, don't take me wrong). Since I am doing this in free time, there is only so much I can release in every update, richer story means less sex. I take this basically as a study project to get better with DAZ.

I actually had quite different idea for VN (more story based), but I decided I will keep it for later.

But I am grateful for criticism, I will put an effort on making it at least little less generic

 

[FreshRevenge]

Seems similar to Elena's Life or Sarah Life that the girl ends up doing things she normally wouldn't do but ends up enjoying it.