VN Ren'Py Unexpected Opportunity [Ch. 6] [Sweetychily]

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Larry2000

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Its literally a couple good poses, one or two titty/vag flashes and a boat load of dialogue.
Maybe we took the Novel part of Visual Novel too seriously? :unsure:
What you recommend?

Never really considered anything wrong in this image, I guess my brain just auto-completed the logic in my brain.

As far as your review goes, I just read it. We're pretty satisfied with our game so far, but I also know that doesn't do much good if there are gaps to fill.

What would you say is the most pressing problem that makes this boring?

The above pic is not a bug, it's just maybe a poorly thought out image. :ROFLMAO:

Sorry that the game isn't at the pace you want it. Everything is pretty deliberately paced. So yeah, maybe it's too slow for you; we still appreciate you playing. Maybe you can check in on it in the future when there is more sexy times.
 
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Larry2000

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I just finished the update and I love it
The writing in this is really mature
Something I don't see a lot of on here

I love Rachel
And Evee is so adorable
Thank you for this awesome update dev

A story driven game like this is the best kind of game imo
Really appreciate you Joshy, you're a real one!

I'm glad you can enjoy Rachel's story now that certain details are out.

I really fell in love with Evee as well. She's this character that I've seen a lot in real life. A girl that just says the right things that are obvious to everyone but adults, but is also immature enough to be fooled and need help. But STILL mature enough to know when to support.

For example, in the last scene of the update, we see Evee holding Rachel while she's in that emotional state where it's clear by Evee's expression that this isn't the first time she's seen her sister like this, and not the last. There is a sense Evee is both too young and too old to be in her body. As Barenaked Ladies said in their song Alternative Girlfriend:

Old at being young
Young at being old
Everything's on hold within our evolution
Thus is the story of teenagers.
 

TigerWolfe

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Maybe we took the Novel part of Visual Novel too seriously? :unsure:
What you recommend?


Never really considered anything wrong in this image, I guess my brain just auto-completed the logic in my brain.

As far as your review goes, I just read it. We're pretty satisfied with our game so far, but I also know that doesn't do much good if there are gaps to fill.

What would you say is the most pressing problem that makes this boring?

The above pic is not a bug, it's just maybe a poorly thought out image. :ROFLMAO:

Sorry that the game isn't at the pace you want it. Everything is pretty deliberately paced. So yeah, maybe it's too slow for you; we still appreciate you playing. Maybe you can check in on it in the future when there is more sexy times.
Disregard the coomers, they really should just be watching porn.
 

Kristovpher

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Dammit, just finished, and I want to know what exactly happened between them.

Also for the developer, I told the truth to Emily about sleeping in, but later she acted like I'd told her I got lost, don't know if this was intended or an oversight.
 

Larry2000

Dev/Head Writer of Unexpected Opportunity
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Dammit, just finished, and I want to know what exactly happened between them.

Also for the developer, I told the truth to Emily about sleeping in, but later she acted like I'd told her I got lost, don't know if this was intended or an oversight.
Between who? Rachel and MC? Well, you'll have to wait a little longer :D However, if you'd like to share your theory, go ahead :) However, you may also look around the thread, some people have ideas.

About Emily's conversation, I just checked it, and it was more a call back. She's making a joke about MC showing up late, that's what he's defending. He's only talking about getting lost cause he DID get lost for a bit. Something I had to cut out of the narrative. Maybe I'll add a line about it before hand for the future. Let me do that now in fact... Done. Thanks for heads up.


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Updated Italian translation
Made by a fan of Italian Free Translators
Eagle 1900 translator
Double clean & wtmod koga3 version already inserted
Thank you so much! This is so awesome!
 

Larry2000

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thank you for me it's nice that they appreciate my effort
I will continue to update it also in the future with this typology ... clean and with the koga3 mod which I consider one of the best here on f95
Appreciate it? That's a massive understatement! I love it! My partner and I worked hard on our game, we just care if people appreciate it. The fact that people like you are out there making the experience we made better for others that don't share the same language is overwhelming. Thank you so much and if you worked with someone else, to them as well <3

If you have any questions about our script, feel free to ask me. I'm the head writer :D
 

Grimlar

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Was just checking you guys out on patreon, sorry that doesnt seem to be working out too well at the moment for you. Entirely your choice of course, but you might want to add a cheaper tier.
 

johnmnf692

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You guys have been doing a great job on this game since the re-work, Lisa, Emily, Rachel, and Nicole are all great LIs; can't wait for Allison as well. Rachel in particular really benefitted from update 0.4, very excited to see where her story goes from here. Keep up the good work boys.
 

Sweetychily

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Was just checking you guys out on patreon, sorry that doesnt seem to be working out too well at the moment for you. Entirely your choice of course, but you might want to add a cheaper tier.
We are going too make changes on patreon in a couple of days. There is gonna be a cheaper tier too(y) . Also there is not gonna be double charge (y) . The other thing is there is gonna be early access on patreon for the future updates and It won’t take long . I hope we can make you happy with what we do :giggle: .
 
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Antera

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I thought MC would look bit younger, since he moved away from parents and all that
 

Larry2000

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I thought MC would look bit younger, since he moved away from parents and all that
Why would you think the MC was younger? I think he looks pretty young. One of the reasons why I joined this project was because the MC didn't look like a 12 year old kid trying to pass for 18. Maybe it's the beard? :unsure:

If you want me to give MC age, he's around 20-23. Don't want to give too many specifics yet though.
 
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Antera

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Why would you think the MC was younger? I think he looks pretty young. One of the reasons why I joined this project was because the MC didn't look like a 12 year old kid trying to pass for 18. Maybe it's the beard? :unsure:

If you want me to give MC age, he's around 20-23. Don't want to give too many specifics yet though.
By looks I would give him 30-35
 
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