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[Satir Girls]

If the creator was going to be stealing the Au Ra from Final Fantasy anyway, where are the viera? The miqo'te?
I want bunny and catgirls damnit.

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In all honesty? I smell deception here.
There is not a single similarity. It's a carbon copy, and anyone that has ever played Final Fantasy XIV will know immediately.
Because the placement and form of horns isn't a bit different. They're exactly the same.

No, there they are where ears are, on Satirs they are on top sides of cranium, about form - they was like that(horns form) already, so its more like illusion(company that made StudioNeo2 in witch all this renders done) was inspired by them. Yes I am honest, and now i a bit concerned about this... i wanted to make something original, something that no one made before... and here this all similarly appears. So sorry. I didn't know about this. My dear... now i must redo everything... and delete from everywhere everything .... and rerender it all again with another horns or without them...

 

[Satir Girls]

Ok guys... please don't post anywhere anything from game(screenshots and videos) I going to redo what i been doing whole this time... thanks god it not so much to change in the script... but yes... 0.3 going to release much later now... i'l go redo everything...

 

[Layfon]

Ok guys... please don't post anywhere anything from game(screenshots and videos) I going to redo what i been doing whole this time... thanks god it not so much to change in the script... but yes... 0.3 going to release much later now... i'l go redo everything...

I don't think you need to redo your game/scenes. It's not your fault Illusion copied some assets from FFXIV and it's not like you knew about it. Chances are whatever alien model you use will have appeared in some other media so just go ahead and keep using the Satirs models.

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Like you can just add a disclaimer in the OP mentioning all this if it makes you feel better/to stop all the, "These are Au Ra" comments.

 

[Satir Girls]

	The placement/angle/size/whatever looks a bit off because the horns were taken off the Au Ra model and strapped onto some other models heads not made/designed around their horns. But the horns are pretty much 100% from FFXIV's Raen tribe Au Ra models. View attachment 778676 I understood, i re rendering everything, please delete this and don't post anywhere

 

[PPLayer]

the game looks really promising ... I like this kind of genre ... but one thing prevents me from downloading

png = bad! -> jpg = good -> webp = better

It takes almost less time to convert every picture to jpg or webp (and rename them after) than to render one or two of them ^^

 

[slayer991]

Ok guys... please don't post anywhere anything from game(screenshots and videos) I going to redo what i been doing whole this time... thanks god it not so much to change in the script... but yes... 0.3 going to release much later now... i'l go redo everything...

I appreciate that you're being receptive to criticism. The story has an interesting premise and as you've said, you already have the story mapped out (the weak part in most of these games). I think if it takes you longer to release 0.3 with improvements, you'll be happier and people will be more likely to enjoy playing it.

There's a reason I didn't post a review and posted my review here. I didn't want to knock it down until you've had an opportunity to improve the game.

 

[Satir Girls]

Everithing is being re rendered, becouse of similarity of Satir and ff girls horns, i never knew they was taken from there(they(horns) was in program in wich i animate them - StudioNeo2) . Updated game will be ready to download tomorrow. Please delete from everywhere everything.

 

[ontach]

We need a compression hero to step up and do a compressed version.

 

[Satir Girls]

We need a compression hero to step up and do a compressed version.

as i Re rendering everything so i will re render animations in 720p and lower quality

 

[Satir Girls]

People... there will be Girls without horns i think... not to stumble upon another copyrighted horns)

 

[Satir Girls]

And yes, bodies will differ a lot now.

 

[Satir Girls]

Faces i will left as they is.

 

[Satir Girls]

Nope, there going to be horns, Goat horns how it supposed to be from the start.

 

[Satir Girls]

Color will still be tweaked, but here it is, and yes... Kira will be pettite, as people was asking for different types of bodies

 

[Mimir's Lab]

Those horns are too low poly to look good with those character models. If you want to add horns, either use the same ones from before and tweak them by rotating and enlarging them or adding more horns and details. Also, don't render in 720p, that's way too low. Just keep it at 1080p but find a good compression tool on this forum to cut down on the file size. If you render at 720p, you will lose a lot of detail.

 

[rahkshi01]

It will be more sophisticated than you think) Everybody going to be pregnant) That teleporter stuff is very electronically fragile)

So does the child actually stay in the girls when they get pregnant then otherwise it would just be too weird.?

 

[Satir Girls]

So does the child actually stay in the girls when they get pregnant then otherwise it would just be too weird.?

Yes!) It will stay)

 

[rahkshi01]

Yes!) It will stay)

oh thank goodness alright I'm sold on the game then.

 

[TheExtremeWyrm]

Actually that's not how it will be) This game will have extreme plot twists)

oh? now i'm intrigued

 

[slayer991]

View attachment 778735
Color will still be tweaked, but here it is, and yes... Kira will be pettite, as people was asking for different types of bodies View attachment 778750

BRAVO! Variety!