VN Ren'Py Abandoned University Trainer NSFW [v0.3.4] [Satir Girls]

[Satir Girls]

You need someone to correct your writing, its really a mess right now.

Also need a better gameplay loop just spamming the same things without pose is too much.

This is only 0.2.5, Even in 0.3 things got a WAY better) Release is soon(2-3 days)

 

[thorin0815]

The gals all look pretty horny.

 

[Conniver's Kunai]

I can't understand how the game with the base characters has already attracted so many patrons. The author added horns to most of the default characters, he didn't change anything else in them. And where he did something, the characters look disgusting. The picture quality is terrible. There are a huge number of games where the authors are clearly trying, but they do not have patrons but this game has already accumulated 15 patrons. Unbelievable

 

[Satir Girls]

I can't understand how the game with the base characters has already attracted so many patrons. The author added horns to most of the default characters, he didn't change anything else in them. And where he did something, the characters look disgusting. The picture quality is terrible. There are a huge number of games where the authors are clearly trying, but they do not have patrons but this game has already accumulated 15 patrons. Unbelievable

Picture quality terrible? Seriously? It weights 1,1 Gb) Details are amazing. Maybe you played unofficial compressed version? I didn't compress that by myself, the fans did. About the game... this is still not a game) It will be a game after... let's say 0.6+. 15 Patrons is very little) Look at acabur's patreon(5k$) or sad crab's(15k$). But it all not about the money, i appreciate a lot all the support, but my Patreon is just a tip jar. What is important - i aiming for, for the best quality, listening to players and trying my best to deliver best game i ever could make... but yes it will be a couple of month till i could say that this is a game... it still a demo, i would say you can just get used to characters and get into beginning of the story. About characters - all of them is made by myself, there was one model from wich i was making all the girls. Everybody liked Satirs looks, you the first one who saying negative stuff about them and being jealous about Patreons which i gain for 4 days) This game going to be BIG. As they say - you get that what you put in. I making this game all day every day. That's how updates comes out every 4 days. But tomorrow we will switch engine from renpy to... well it will be a surprise... quality of the game will boost in twice) I will eventually make all the stuff that i wanted to, from the start, but renpy was lacking the abilities. Cheers, and be nice.

 

[Satir Girls]

The gals all look pretty horny.

You got a main point of the game)

 

[slayer991]

I can't understand how the game with the base characters has already attracted so many patrons. The author added horns to most of the default characters, he didn't change anything else in them. And where he did something, the characters look disgusting. The picture quality is terrible. There are a huge number of games where the authors are clearly trying, but they do not have patrons but this game has already accumulated 15 patrons. Unbelievable

There's a reason why I don't do reviews early on in the development process...because some of these devs really do make an effort to improve. I'll generally reserve my criticism to the game thread. I've tended not to do reviews until later on in the process (0.5+).

I'll give you an example of how some of these first-time authors improve. Check out Hustle Town. First off, it has a horrible description. The first few releases of that game were a 3 star at best. The story was solid, but the gameplay and animations were less than average. Buggy, animations were not good, gameplay was pretty bad. But you could see the potential in the story and the renders.

Beginning with 0.4 or 0.5 or so, you could see the improvements. With each release, the dev improved. Fewer bugs, better renders and better animations. I'd give it 5 stars (and I did edit my review to 5 stars) now since he did such a great job improving the game (which already had an interesting story). That guy only has 45 patrons because of the rough start with the first few releases. Those that gave up missed out on what ultimately became a really fun game to play (with a very good story). I'll definitely play another game by that dev now that he has a feel for the process and knows what he's doing.

As for this game, there's some potential there...the story is interesting and that's half the battle. The author has been receptive to criticism and has worked to make changes and improvements to the game. I'd cut the author a bit of slack now since it's early in the process. I'd wait until 0.3 or 0.4 before giving up on this one.

 

[rafa30]

I really liked the game
mainly Sofia
each update the game is better.

 

[Mercedes]

I can't understand how the game with the base characters has already attracted so many patrons. The author added horns to most of the default characters, he didn't change anything else in them. And where he did something, the characters look disgusting. The picture quality is terrible. There are a huge number of games where the authors are clearly trying, but they do not have patrons but this game has already accumulated 15 patrons. Unbelievable

For my part, I support because I see the potential that an early version can develop.
I don't support everyone at the same time because that would be beyond my budget, but currently I support three developers and have 19 others under observation.

Sometimes you end up in a dead end, sometimes you get a pearl.
That is the creditor's risk. He supports because he thinks he hasn't signed a sales contract.
And who then starts to complain should if necessary draw the consequences, but he has no right to demand anything.

 

[DrWho8248]

Flash775
I have ask... In 0.2 version Patrons have more scenes...
Sooo, i wonder, new, 0.3 veriosn have this scenes or not?
Or, in Patreon not have differenece between Public and Patreon version?
Or, it already inclused in Game, and we need just have password to see it? O_O

 

[Mercedes]

In 0.25 it says that the Patreon Bonus immediately gives 100 corruption points in order to unlock scenes earlier.
Without this bonus you have to do 5 or 6 reps to get that 100 points.

I guess it is the same in 0.2, only that it is not so explicitly next to it, but the Patreon option is now somewhat vague.

 

[Satir Girls]

Flash775
I have ask... In 0.2 version Patrons have more scenes...
Sooo, i wonder, new, 0.3 veriosn have this scenes or not?
Or, in Patreon not have differenece between Public and Patreon version?
Or, it already inclused in Game, and we need just have password to see it? O_O

People was complaining about paid wall, so i understood - such way(adding Patreon only stuff) is not fun for 95% of players, who don't have a password. So i decided to leave corruption bonus, but remove scenes limitation for non-patron players.

 

[Satir Girls]

I really liked the game
mainly Sofia
each update the game is better.

Thank you) If it is you on your profile picture - then you have lots in common with her.

 

[Flash001]

Flash775
I have ask... In 0.2 version Patrons have more scenes...
Sooo, i wonder, new, 0.3 veriosn have this scenes or not?
Or, in Patreon not have differenece between Public and Patreon version?
Or, it already inclused in Game, and we need just have password to see it? O_O

This is not my game mate. It is developed by Satir Girls

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[Conniver's Kunai]

Picture quality terrible? Seriously? It weights 1,1 Gb) Details are amazing.

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One of the scenes. Yes, man. High quality. Other players can check other images there aren't very many of them anyway. I just didn't want to add porn scenes here. But they look even worse.
It weights 1,1 GB because you use PNG files.

About characters - all of them is made by myself, there was one model from wich i was making all the girls.

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The two characters are just reworked standard characters. No problem if you redid them, but one of the characters is generally the very first model proposed.

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You can talk about your unrealistic hard work and big plans to your fans)

For my part, I support because I see the potential that an early version can develop.
I don't support everyone at the same time because that would be beyond my budget, but currently I support three developers and have 19 others under observation.

Sometimes you end up in a dead end, sometimes you get a pearl.
That is the creditor's risk. He supports because he thinks he hasn't signed a sales contract.
And who then starts to complain should if necessary draw the consequences, but he has no right to demand anything.

It's your choice. This is not my money, it is just incomprehensible how the developer, without doing anything special, received so many patrons.

 

[Meh 1000]

Will I see bellies from my hard work impregnating them?

 

[Satir Girls]

Will I see bellies from my hard work impregnating them?

Absolutely) but after some plot twist)

 

[Mercedes]

Hmm, I am skeptical about this twist.
now the fertilized egg cells are teleported out.
And later?
Is it going to be an express pregnancy of 10 days so that you can see a belly base after 2 days? Otherwise you have to wait a few weeks before you notice something.

Somehow that runs against everything in the basic story.
"Humanity is almost extinct, but the removed egg cells continue to mature in infected bodies."
Now let 10 years have passed on earth before the solution was found with the satytrs and another 18 years for it to become an adult. This means that only people aged 29 and up live on earth.
Now a new generation is growing up.

So the children are born immune.
Does that just mean that they can get pregnant again, or will these children be born again as fertile satyrs, as the plot description implies)?
And are the men who have remained on earth also compactable with these girls or can they only reproduce with special men?

 

[Satir Girls]

Hmm, I am skeptical about this twist.
now the fertilized egg cells are teleported out.
And later?
Is it going to be an express pregnancy of 10 days so that you can see a belly base after 2 days? Otherwise you have to wait a few weeks before you notice something.

Somehow that runs against everything in the basic story.
"Humanity is almost extinct, but the removed egg cells continue to mature in infected bodies."
Now let 10 years have passed on earth before the solution was found with the satytrs and another 18 years for it to become an adult. This means that only people aged 29 and up live on earth.
Now a new generation is growing up.

So the children are born immune.
Does that just mean that they can get pregnant again, or will these children be born again as fertile satyrs, as the plot description implies)?
And are the men who have remained on earth also compactable with these girls or can they only reproduce with special men?

Teleportators are very fragile) You got a way to think before next update.
wfeew... this was very hard day... i switched the engine... and oh my dear! it is sooo hard! for whole day i only managed to make a menu) but yes i was figuring out how to do different things in that engine. Possibilities are very cool. I can create amazing stuff with it, but yes, wait for release of 0.3 is multiplyed by two)
Renpy, from which i run off to be able create game faster and more efficient ended up learning everything from the start) It can be possible that i will come back to renpy... but... i don't know....i wrote so much logic code of the game on renpy... it will be very hard to redo all that... but i was thinking about making first chapter completely different, more story based, and leave all this sex simulator) stuff for end of the game. Then... i was thinking about dress code... to make girls fully clothed and step by step get to where we are at 0.2.5)

 

[Satir Girls]

Teleportators are very fragile) You got a way to think before next update.
wfeew... this was very hard day... i switched the engine... and oh my dear! it is sooo hard! for whole day i only managed to make a menu) but yes i was figuring out how to do different things in that engine. Possibilities are very cool. I can create amazing stuff with it, but yes, wait for release of 0.3 is multiplyed by two)
Renpy, from which i run off to be able create game faster and more efficient ended up learning everything from the start) It can be possible that i will come back to renpy... but... i don't know....i wrote so much logic code of the game on renpy... it will be very hard to redo all that... but i was thinking about making first chapter completely different, more story based, and leave all this sex simulator) stuff for end of the game. Then... i was thinking about dress code... to make girls fully clothed and step by step get to where we are at 0.2.5)

I don't know why, but i can't build any working apk for android, On renpy or even on that new engine, even tryed making it through android studio. .. but nope)
"It's not working. " - Gabe Newell.

 

[Mercedes]

Well, you have basic rules regarding clothing.
You would have to defuse these rules first before you change your clothes.
Here it is important to find a good balance between loops and actions.

Let us assume that all girls wear a uniform uniform (0.20) and only differ in their concealed clothing, or the protagonist can not only specify that the girls gradually bare themselves but also choose clothing from a catalog, then the corruption could lead to the current one Loop adjusted.

Xx kissing then touching, then fingering, then sex
(Blouse more open, no blouse & short skirt, lingerie, nothing)

So, but how do the other girls in the class react if the player only focuses on one and she sits naked in the class and lets herself be fucked on the teacher's table while the other girls haven't even loosened the top button of their blouse?

It would be a good engine here if only certain differences in corruption were allowed.
The protagonist has to get everyone pregnant anyway and can't leave any girl out. But before you can fuck a girl in public, the others should at least be sitting there in lingerie.