Ren'Py Abandoned Vis [v2.0] [Mad King Games]

[Lyve]

In a Fantasy story, if the FL is killed and the body was never found, something is wrong, that was my first red flag.
I really enjoy the story especially the plot twist, i can't wait to kill that traitor unless there is another plot twist for that. Also, thanks for you author for this wonderful story.

Are we playing the same game?

 

[darklord ffk]

Android port?

 

[EnterYourNameHere]

Why you are working on a sequel before the prequel? Currently it makes no sense to play the game if there is a prequel -.-

 

[okokok]

Quite a lot of the english in this update is barely understandable and it's dragging the rest of the game down

 

[JJJ84]

Hey there,

First of all, thank you for your interest and for your involvement in making this game better.

I will answer your remarks and I hope I won't miss anything.

Spoiler: Regarding MC, the girls, Morgana, and the choice for 1.6

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Not sure whether you've read my post or not (I'll quote the post below), but would you be able to address the points I pointed out?
Interested to hear your thoughts on them.

Hey Mad King, enjoyed the update and just have two things (take them as either questions or recommendations):

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Just some suggestions you may want to ponder.

 

[Sol_Invictus2009]

I got to the unavoidable femdom scene and immediately came to check here to see if there were some way to avoid it. Looks like I'm just waiting for the next update.

 

[Faithful4real]

Are we playing the same game?

Yes, I'm not here to give any complaints about the developers work. I hate NTR and Female domination but I'm not here for flapping, but for the story.

 

[poseid0n]

Mad King well i haven't played the update yet but i see what everyone's saying and i have to agree the idea of having both of them having relations with the king was a stupid idea. Especially after the initial dialog that we helped them get in (i already told you my thoughts on ntr on my first post on here idc as long as we have a choice) but i dont like when someone we are romantically into just does something like that. my idea to you if you wanted to make everyone happy its not to late to do is go back (im not sure if its a flash back we see) and im not saying take out the seducing the king idea cause that a good idea but in the flashback make a choice for if the sister we are seeing joins in. Keep the other one as set in stone she does it but the sister we are into give her the option to not do it and the other one will take one for the team. I want you to think about this cause if you were gonna give us the option to forgive her it would make no sense cause ik idc how bad times are or how desperate you are if my dads dick was inside you im not touching you and im definitely not forgiving you idk who in their right mind is whatever the circumstances are. Now i was able to overlook the annette ntr only because it wasnt real like that wasnt her real body she was in another dimension in her mind so it didnt have the same impact as forced ntr. This on the other hand sus and should have thought about it more. Now does this mean your games bad no it doesnt for your first game i gotta say one of the if not thee best games for a first time dev. On top of that the fact that they were alive was a big enough twist alone. Now am i gonna play this update ive been waiting for it but probably not not untill either 1. you change up the way the scene happened you dont have to its your game but gotta feeling it will make it a lot more enjoyable, or 2. you add more content cause idk how much was added to this update but if they were majority off it im just gonna end up holding ctrl and not watching and then the update will be over anyway. Lastly i just want to say stick to what was working the best and to what people were enjoying the most your game was doing amazing with that you were at a good place with everything the other army was invading and you had that unidentified chick at the end about to start some shit and it was looking dope and i was hyped. The twins coming back wasnt a waste of an event just the non avoidable ntr for karina was. Her sister she could get fucked for all i care and if you want some good ways to throw some ntr in there without it being non avoidable just lmk i got some good suggestions to make it to where you have a choice. Like during the up coming raid have it to where they breach the walls and you're informed that some soldiers are making their way towards the girls and have it as you got a certain amount of trys to get the right room and give us a bunch of different rooms to check (and obviously this scenario would work best for the younger sister as morgan would kill them and to hell with morganna) and for every time we pick the wrong room the assault on her is getting worse. Like if you get it right they just have her cornered one time wrong they have her pinned down fully clothed on the bed, 2nd time she is pinned down with her shirt and bra off and her skirt pulled up groping her, 3rd time she is pinned down naked and they are groping her and someone fingering her, 4th time she is giving 2 people handjobs while one is giving her oral and another is trying to enter her mouth, 5th time she is giving one guy a bj while jerking 2 others off while ones fucking her, and lastly if you dont get it and it the last room you check you find her curled up on her bed with a cream pie and we get a flashback in her memories of the whole entire event them coming in cornering her, pinning her down and removing her clothes, groping her, giving her oral, and then each taking turns using her and giving her a cream pie untill they leave to have "fun" with another princess or girl to only run into morgan and die and spice it up with the soldiers have some normal and some from the other realm. Now that would be some seriously good game play to support and now you appeal to ntr lovers and harem lovers by giving them the chance to avoid it or let it happen instead of throwing it at them. Just want to say one last time i love your game in my top 3 and probably best model ive ever seen(Morgan ) and to just stick to what initially pulled us in and the rest will come with it you dont have to add twist on top of twist for us to think its good its already great just work on animations and keep it steady with choices and or event that COULD lead to ntr through poor choices cause then its on you the player for getting it wrong. (oh and i started writing this yesterday and got side tracked had to finish this when i got back on)

 

[poseid0n]

Yes, I'm not here to give any complaints about the developers work. I hate NTR and Female domination but I'm not here for flapping, but for the story.

i do have to say the story is what really pulled me in just the sex theme on top of that is just icing on the cake especially when we finally get some morgan scenes though i do agree non avoidable ntr is bad past or present because we were still messing around then but avoidable is ok cause you get a choice and idk about you but i was fine overall after a bit with the annette ntr cause it wasnt really even real it was in her mind in another realm and not to her real body i see it as a way to give her that sexual push

 

[poseid0n]

Mad King and one other thing not about the game as much as to say your story writing. keep it like it is cause a lot of games get ruined because of it. Like games made by icc like lust theory. It started out amazing just to have really bad character development and storyline and ruin the game in the 2nd season filled with lesbian shit and cock hungry sluts compared to when some of them were introduced as shy non sexual people (not sure if anyones played the game but zoe and megan shouldve been virgins) just to make them have secret kinks like getting rough fucked and want to do sex things together like threesomes when it completely goes against their character. So stay away from things like that adding random things into it just for the porn aspect to be more vulgar. cause a lot of us are here for the story and youre doing a good job with it (excluding the karina situation) . And sorry for posting a lot been waiting for an update just to have to wait for another so a little annoyed and hyped at the same time

 

[poseid0n]

Mad King sorry but another thing i here by request after further knowledge taking karina off the cover and replacing it with the mc and morgan with their foreheads pressed together with them all cut up with a backround that says the darkness to my light or where theres dark theres light followed by viz cause at least we know morgans a loyal smexy piece of mmmm . (for all that cant tell this is a joke but would be dope to see anyway)

 

[Darkmessiah30]

dont know if this has been mentioned but dev you missed an opportunity of a lifetime for the scene where mc and lillith are in the carriage and the mc is ontop of her you could of given us the option to kiss her

 

[billyjoebobmartin]

Hey there,

First of all, thank you for your interest and for your involvement in making this game better.

I will answer your remarks and I hope I won't miss anything.

Spoiler: Regarding MC, the girls, Morgana, and the choice for 1.6

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hmm, ok i think i can accept morgana doesn't actually know if they're alive or dead. however, your explanation doesn't touch on the bedroom scene with MC's father and morgana just after MC wakes up.

however, i think my point still stands that the twins can't be THAT good at acting to deceive MC for years before they betray him. imo it would have been significantly better if they had been paid off to just abandon MC 'for his own good' or something stupid like that. completely unaware there was the demon assassin after him. then again paid off to stay away from MC. imo that has more plausibility then sociopaths with acting abilities that would put hollywood to shame.

For the last screenshot, where Morrigan, says to MC that Morgana is his mother, I was trying to hint at a tension between Morgana and Morrigan. Like denying any connection with Morgana, and therefore distancing from her.

ya know, if it was the variant where MC put morgana in the dungeon, i could see that. but with her at the table there with them as per that screen shot, it just feels like a small oops than emotional distancing.

On the last point, yes, it would have been good but MC can become the champion of just one, even if the religious system I want to implement is of duality. Something like Ying&Yang.

meh, i would've still liked MC to bounce that option off cristina.

i know you have your vision, but imo being a champion for two as a hard to accomplish/unlock option would give credence to why MC is so special destiny/fate wise. (at least as special as morrigan) it also makes some sense in the way of maybe the ONLY way to become a champion of two is to contract to one and their counterbalnce. with it being flat out impossible to champion for someone who isn't a counterballance to the other. *shrug*

I will answer your remarks and I hope I won't miss anything.

you actually did miss a couple things, not big things but still.

Spoiler: missed points/suggestions

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[Deleted member 416612]

Not sure whether you've read my post or not (I'll quote the post below), but would you be able to address the points I pointed out?
Interested to hear your thoughts on them.

Hey mate,

Sorry for the late reply, I wanted to answer your remarks but then I was carried away by all the comments.
Those are issues in the text. I will address them as that scene should be one way, in a matter of speaking.
Related to the Karina scene, I will review those and see if needs correction.
Thank you for the feedback!

 

[michael1984]

Well played trough this new update vn mode only

Have to say pretty interesting how we getting a angel or demon path in the end of the update

Made a separate save for each route

Just to see how both will play out

Have to say that light sword atack is pretty bad ass

But the demon verocity was pretty bad ass as well

 

[I am Gone]

Just finished the new update and wow I'm loving it.

Story and renders got me hooked

Me being a fucked up individual I can kinda sympathize with Karina (wanting revenge for the crap you went through in life) Been there so I know how that could destroy your life and the person you once were.

I'm kinda getting to the point if there is a way to forgive her it might not be possible (at least for me) and it's not the usual reason (oh they seduced poor daddy) I don't care about past experiences doesn't really affect my view of the person, Its the straight up tricking innocents mostly pregnant woman and children to their deaths and laugh about it, kinda too cruel. Keeping my hopes up there is an underlying reason for it may be possession, trickery, blackmail, or something. Just can't wrap my head around the sweet twins we grew up with could be so broken.

Now comes the thing with Karina's sister (can't remember the name for the life of me lol) We didn't see her at all in this update except few glimpses of the past, With those glimpses, you can see that she wasn't really blinded by hate maybe sadness but there was no hate, so I wonder if she's willingly helping her sister or if maybe she didn't want to betray MC and maybe got "dealt" with...

Mad King Keep up the great work. Looking forward to more.

 

[michael1984]

Yup that was my disapointment as well ... That the twins that were supposed to be death ... Suddenly were alive

And that they seduced the father meh the Mother of the mc obviously did things with the father as well and i still want her so its not that bad

Still hoping the twin is just under some kind of spell or hypnosis and we can break her free from it

Hard to imagine that the twins would do such a thing on their own volition

Kindda wondering how the angel and demon lilith will co exist tho since we have to choose one of them

Hopefully the other wont mind as much and still helps us

Having them both as allies would be a great help

I do wonder if we take that angel path what will happen if u chosen Lilith her gift earlier in the game ?

Will that impact the angel path ?

 

[Belnick]

did you take the ring at the in the water when you meet annete ? at the pier

Lake scene – MC and Anete on the pontoon:
Choosing to slowly move your hand on her thigh, it will trigger the option to have a relationship with her.
Not choosing to do so, it will prevent you from triggering certain scenes/option but up until a point in the
game, you will still have time to reconsider your decision.
Lake scene – The witch spell:
Choosing not to follow your anger will enable you to continue the adventure and not committing a
tragedy.

Lake scene - The witch encounter:
If you choose to take the ring, it will be used to weaken the witch and therefore you can kill her.

yes, touched anette
the spell, tried kill sis and insta game over, do not kill sis and the witch kills you and game over

what ring? are you saying there is a "mini game" to find something during skippable scenes?

 

[sdawg1234]

yes, touched anette
the spell, tried kill sis and insta game over, do not kill sis and the witch kills you and game over

what ring? are you saying there is a "mini game" to find something during skippable scenes?

When swimming in the lake with Morrigan there is a choice to give her what you find or not to. You have to choose give her it to get the ring.

 

[michael1984]

Man i forgot but was it 6 months from 1.5 to 1.6

Thats a long ass time ... So next update will be november or december ?